MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04) - Page 22

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Posted: 9 years ago
Girly you are scaring the shit out of me
through nandini's pov!! seriously!!
Okay okay!! Even I have my ex memories..
I still carry them with me with a fear what if my mom, dad
or over protective brother see them!! So issme its nandini's fault!!
And her parents reaction was correct! but that language was too much I think!
You know what I mean! #no_offense
And why do keep us in suspense always!
I read limited stories!
And of course your's is on the top!!
One day i will kill out curiosity!!
My brain is not working properly after reading nandini's pov! so abhi ke liye ithna hee!!

TAKE CARE!
STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!





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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohkkk...wt to sae. ...su kau...?
Agn im in sm situation. ...speechless. ...
D stry is so deep...I didn't even imagine while stttng reading at d v strt... Thank god I had cum across ur stry dat noon gttng bored of my studies. ...😆
Bt seriously its amazing. ...d ride dey hv gone through is do intense. ...I dnt knw y bth of dem r using n stating d wrd dead so often. ..I lil ig also I thnk dey hb been thorough hell of ride in past. ...n mstly nandu's condition is smwhr d end result of it...
Really eager to knw mre abt it...luking frwrd fr nxt update soon...
N ya one mre thng regarding d behaviour of nandu's parents in aft knwng abt d letters I guess I was smwhr true coz still ppl hv conservative n restricted mentality sply fr grls...bt dis shld chng atlst dey shld nt accuse her n understand her pov...bt nevertheless it was gud...
Continue soon. ..Waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woh.. intense!!
Nandu's parents found out aout that letter of HIM.
Well firstly I thought that..that HIM that I presumed was Manik isn't him.But end mein confirm kardiya.
Why doesn't he go to her and show her that he isn't dead.
And I didn't like the words Nandu's mum used for her di. Which mom calls her daughter a w***e. And surprisingly Nandu didn't cry or feel bad! 😕
He bhagwaan...jaldi have suspense boli dyo ne di..mari exams aave che. Ane hoon aa story na bare maa sochu k exams ne dhyan aapu 😆

Aane haa...koi bhi nathi. Hoon khali je mann ma aave lakhu 😆 Koi hoi toh pela kais Ok!! 😛
I should take help from you to improve my writing. What help can I be of you.But if I am able to I will 😉
Thanks for the PM.
Sorry for being late 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
thnx thanx a lot for coming up so early
ur update made my day yaar

nice and so much emotional update.
now l am sure this HE is none other than our own manik.but what was happening between manan that
nandu thought HE was dead?
and the reaction of nandu's parents was not overboarded.the way they reacted was justified.

lf it was in my parents their reaction was 100times much worst than nandini's parents but l really didn't like the way they called HIM.

poor nandu is in so much pain and the dettol part was really scared me.l think day by day for depression she is going to be become more aggressive and violent to harm herself.

what will happened when manik know abt nandini'
condition?
wow story is going to become more interesting day by day.

thanx for pm me.
continue soon plz
eagerly looking forward.

stay blessed and keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for pm

amazing update

so nandini think manik is dead??

it's getting more n more interesting cant wait till next chap

its really sad tat parents using those words to nandu

at least thy sud tink befr accusing rite??

Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
eureka " HE HIM " was manik... nandini's parents found her letters... she caught... seriously it's so terrible... they behaved so rudely... in this situation everyones parents would be behaved like this... huhh so called society reputation... why do nandini actually think manik was dead????? damn she hurt herself... how miserable her condition is !!!!! please I can't wait after reading the chapter... update as soon as possible.. please
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi,


Firstly I apologise for being late and before i could comment on the previous chapter you updated a new one... Now that brought a smile on my face, infact a big one...

I'll firstly speak about Manik's introductory chapter- I was very excited when i read in the PM that the chapter is about Manik's character. I was actually waiting for you to introduce him soon. I was so eager to read it that i had stopped at a coffee shop in between my shopping and quickly went through it... I remember we even had a conversation about it immediately too...


We had discussed a bit about the student life in UK as i have studied here. The slangs you had penned are actually used here, although we both discussed a bit more about the weekend drinking scene here... What caught my eyes was the meticulous Manik and his zeal to be focused... His background gave me a half portrayal of his character and the personality he has developed as a person... Parents does everything for us and i can completely relate to him being focused for his mother... I related to it on a personal level, would share some other time.


Chapter 5-


This was I think the finest crafted and etched depiction of one's emotional, anxious and vulnerable state. One of the best one's and most realistic narration of an individuals inner anguish, rage and then get completely void of any emotion... I would like to salute you today as a reader as well as a writer for this chapter.


i'm actually speechless and completely numb after reading the screeching thoughts in her mind while the letters were burnt... The conversation between her and her parents, the letter written with blood and the feeling of being solitude was heart- wrenching to read...

Tears had welled up in my eyes and emotions just made their way. I don't open up my heart to anyone and my emotions are always caged somewhere as now with time I have learnt how to deal with them. I understand and can relate to that feeling, that pang of being helpless and yet you can't voice your words...


Drashti I feel the need to now introspect. I mean you were so amazing when you narrated her turmoil and mental frame of mind... great job... I have so much to unlearn what I had learnt and again build myself as a writer. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read this story and that too from your viewpoint.


Thanks a lot.

Lots of Love

Ankita

Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cmamona

Res
Unres in night pakka

Yeiiyee I m the first one...


Hey
Mind blasting chappy yr...
Maar hi daala tha apne toh .. Humne suspense me...
But nw I m finally feeling something good is going to happen...
Ohhh god...
I don't have words to say...
What I felt after reading this chappy...

And seriously aisa hi hota hai parents ka reaction perfectly penned down...
It might be worsened but not less than what u showed... Nandani's condition about the situation happening around her making her more mad at herself... Which she didn't understand...
Her mind was blasting with thoughts...
It's description was dammm amazing...
And what she did to herself was craziness...

But nw I have some relief to get a hint of that letter was of manik which was written with blood...
But I still can't trust what's gonna happen next...
I myself not sure. That what will be coming in next part...
still lots more to reveal but atleast thus gives me some peace... Please update soon...


Keep smiling
Stay blessed


Thank you so much teddy
You being with me was the great thing in this story
i am glad you all found her parents reaction apt..
i thought i went a little overboard..
Letter kiska hai wo to nai pata..
par ha blood me I love you likha hai wo paaka..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: crazypranu19

Emotional update. Nandus parents was really rude how could her mom use such words for her daughter. But it is truth that parents behave like that in those situations. Nandu is hurting herself felt soo bad. And manik is the guy about whom Nandu was talking. What really happened between them? Will b waiting to know about there story . Update soon. Thanx for pm



i knw she used wrong word but that was just for nandu's reactn after hearing it. .
Thank you so much. .
Aaj raat update pakka
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: samanf

First of all thankuh so much for coming up so early...uh r really very punctual in terms of giving updates.. N I really appreciate uh for dis...I had left so many stories in middle on dis forum due to untold long long holidays of da writers... It's not lyk I complain or nag abt dis...but sum of dem update once in a blue moon...as a reader I start loosing interest...n yaah dat bond dat develop weakens...but still anywaz not a problem.. It's dere story n dere wish...I hav no word in it...Well love uh and yess thank uh so much for being so considerate in terms of giving updates...

Okay...so coming to da chapter...it waz EXCELLENT...
Uh hav left me short of words wid each passing g day..
I hav started relating n understanding all da plea...n misery of Nandini... Uh r penning down each n every emotion so beautifully dat da readers automatically get intact to it...
I kno sum1 who suffered from depression ...n I hav seen him getting worse as da days passed by...n now reading da pain n conflicting feelings of such patients thruh ur story is making me walk down throw da memories dat is sumwere being dumped...
Nevertheless... Uh r doing a superb job...I am just loving ur story... I actually wait for ur update...
Yes...I guess Nandini's parents reaction was justified... Becoz dey r absolutely clueless abt her mental trauma...n for a normal middle class parents its really hard to digest n yaah somewat lyk a thunderstorm on learning dat dere daughter is fooling around wid two guys... Well basically it's three...hahaha..
Jokes apart... On seing da latest stunt of Nandini wid detol I kind of figured it out dat now she had entered of being more worst in coming updates...my heart ache for her...poor girl..may she get herself back soon ...
Wid manik's POV I guess Nandini HIS is none other den MANIK.., dat is wat I think so,...n I guess dere sum misunderstanding or lack of communication happened b/w two...
But alas dis ignorance is costing a great effect on Nandini...
Really waiting for dat day wen MANIK will came to kno abt Nandini sickness... One hell day dat will be...
Ufff...I guess I hav written too much...sorry for dat..I got overboard..
Continue soon...till den take care.


Hey
I can understand.. infact i am also a reader and when the updates are delayed slowly we loose the interest.. but we cant blame the writers as they too have a life of their own..
yet they spare time to write for us...

I am so proud of you readers like without me teeling you to comment long..
You all give me long long comment..
Well that motivates me to write..
i am honoured dear..
thank you so much for supporting
and liking my work..

I am glad you liked Nandu's parents reaction..
Well any parents would react same if they find thier wrting to 2 guys.. isnt it..??
HIM kon hai ye to next few updates hi kehsakte hai..
Keep reading..😊

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