MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04) - Page 23

Originally posted by: pagolmeye

Okkaay this part was actually so good and relatable. That feeling of guilty, that screaming of the subconscious mind was very apt.
The parents reaction was also not overboard. That's how they react.
My life is very different but still there are few things which I can relate with nandini which makes this story more interesting to mee.

Originally posted by: UggliBuggli

Girly you are scaring the shit out of me

through nandini's pov!! seriously!!

Okay okay!! Even I have my ex memories..

I still carry them with me with a fear what if my mom, dad

or over protective brother see them!! So issme its nandini's fault!!

And her parents reaction was correct! but that language was too much I think!

You know what I mean! #no_offense

And why do keep us in suspense always!
I read limited stories!
And of course your's is on the top!!

One day i will kill out curiosity!!

My brain is not working properly after reading nandini's pov! so abhi ke liye ithna hee!!

TAKE CARE!
STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!

Originally posted by: Charmi98

Ohkkk...wt to sae. ...su kau...?

Agn im in sm situation. ...speechless. ...

D stry is so deep...I didn't even imagine while stttng reading at d v strt... Thank god I had cum across ur stry dat noon gttng bored of my studies. ...😆

Bt seriously its amazing. ...d ride dey hv gone through is do intense. ...I dnt knw y bth of dem r using n stating d wrd dead so often. ..I lil ig also I thnk dey hb been thorough hell of ride in past. ...n mstly nandu's condition is smwhr d end result of it...

Really eager to knw mre abt it...luking frwrd fr nxt update soon...

N ya one mre thng regarding d behaviour of nandu's parents in aft knwng abt d letters I guess I was smwhr true coz still ppl hv conservative n restricted mentality sply fr grls...bt dis shld chng atlst dey shld nt accuse her n understand her pov...bt nevertheless it was gud...

Continue soon. ..Waiting

Originally posted by: Sarasmart

Interesting update. So him refers to manik I think now. I think nandu's parents reaction was genuine.Eagerly waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: Dhingli44

Woh.. intense!!
Nandu's parents found out aout that letter of HIM.
Well firstly I thought that..that HIM that I presumed was Manik isn't him.But end mein confirm kardiya.
Why doesn't he go to her and show her that he isn't dead.
And I didn't like the words Nandu's mum used for her di. Which mom calls her daughter a w***e. And surprisingly Nandu didn't cry or feel bad! 😕
He bhagwaan...jaldi have suspense boli dyo ne di..mari exams aave che. Ane hoon aa story na bare maa sochu k exams ne dhyan aapu 😆

Aane haa...koi bhi nathi. Hoon khali je mann ma aave lakhu 😆 Koi hoi toh pela kais Ok!! 😛
I should take help from you to improve my writing. What help can I be of you.But if I am able to I will 😉
Thanks for the PM.
Sorry for being late 😊

Originally posted by: bangfarju

thnx thanx a lot for coming up so early
ur update made my day yaar

nice and so much emotional update.
now l am sure this HE is none other than our own manik.but what was happening between manan that
nandu thought HE was dead?
and the reaction of nandu's parents was not overboarded.the way they reacted was justified.

lf it was in my parents their reaction was 100times much worst than nandini's parents but l really didn't like the way they called HIM.

poor nandu is in so much pain and the dettol part was really scared me.l think day by day for depression she is going to be become more aggressive and violent to harm herself.

what will happened when manik know abt nandini'
condition?
wow story is going to become more interesting day by day.

thanx for pm me.
continue soon plz
eagerly looking forward.

stay blessed and keep smiling

Originally posted by: syami

thanks for pm

amazing update

so nandini think manik is dead??

it's getting more n more interesting cant wait till next chap

its really sad tat parents using those words to nandu

at least thy sud tink befr accusing rite??

Tc

Originally posted by: etuu

eureka " HE HIM " was manik... nandini's parents found her letters... she caught... seriously it's so terrible... they behaved so rudely... in this situation everyones parents would be behaved like this... huhh so called society reputation... why do nandini actually think manik was dead????? damn she hurt herself... how miserable her condition is !!!!! please I can't wait after reading the chapter... update as soon as possible.. please

Originally posted by: ankita_t

Hi,

Firstly I apologise for being late and before i could comment on the previous chapter you updated a new one... Now that brought a smile on my face, infact a big one...

I'll firstly speak about Manik's introductory chapter- I was very excited when i read in the PM that the chapter is about Manik's character. I was actually waiting for you to introduce him soon. I was so eager to read it that i had stopped at a coffee shop in between my shopping and quickly went through it... I remember we even had a conversation about it immediately too...

We had discussed a bit about the student life in UK as i have studied here. The slangs you had penned are actually used here, although we both discussed a bit more about the weekend drinking scene here... What caught my eyes was the meticulous Manik and his zeal to be focused... His background gave me a half portrayal of his character and the personality he has developed as a person... Parents does everything for us and i can completely relate to him being focused for his mother... I related to it on a personal level, would share some other time.

Chapter 5-

This was I think the finest crafted and etched depiction of one's emotional, anxious and vulnerable state. One of the best one's and most realistic narration of an individuals inner anguish, rage and then get completely void of any emotion... I would like to salute you today as a reader as well as a writer for this chapter.

i'm actually speechless and completely numb after reading the screeching thoughts in her mind while the letters were burnt... The conversation between her and her parents, the letter written with blood and the feeling of being solitude was heart- wrenching to read...

Tears had welled up in my eyes and emotions just made their way. I don't open up my heart to anyone and my emotions are always caged somewhere as now with time I have learnt how to deal with them. I understand and can relate to that feeling, that pang of being helpless and yet you can't voice your words...

Drashti I feel the need to now introspect. I mean you were so amazing when you narrated her turmoil and mental frame of mind... great job... I have so much to unlearn what I had learnt and again build myself as a writer. Thank you for giving me the opportunity to read this story and that too from your viewpoint.

Thanks a lot.

Lots of Love

Ankita

Originally posted by: mishshergill

Thnk god!
I thought you must be sulking "yeh misha 2 chaptwr ke baad pata nhi kaha bhag gai!" ROFL!
And yeah! Do keep the outgoing of pms to my invoz free coz i will make my work easy to locate story and chapters!