MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04)

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rimsha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

What did i just read!! Its fantastic. I am still thinking about what might hv happened to her nd I cant describe how amazing this story is.

U know what, U can write a novel and i can guarantee it would be a Hit!

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Hi,

I haven't read the novel and now i don't have plans to read it coz i wanna explore this story from your narration. I was waiting for you take the story ahead and i am glad you did it soon.

A facet of your Nandini 'now and only now' , it really clutched my thoughts and i could visualise everything that was happening with her. Her anxiety and vulnerable state was beautifully depicted by you in words. The urgency to pour her heart into words in the form of poems and letters actually were the initial signs of her breakdown... Your research does shine out here...

Stories are written in different styles and we all broadly use 2 styles- Descriptive and Narrative. You really are very strong when it comes to descriptive style of writing. You are suave and fluent when you describe characters and incidents.

The imagination of 'HIM' and the 'jargogle' of thoughts regarding the 3 men was narrated in a very subtle manner, yet it conveyed the deep thoughts that were running in the mind of the protagonist. I could visualise her doleful eyes when she had a constant fight in her mind regarding the way she treated all the 3 men in her life. Her nerves being edged whenever she thought of HIM was quite a thing for me to read...

I'm looking forward to the new part soon coz i like reading in flow... so you got to pull up your socks and pen the next chapter soon... Yes, we make mistakes while writing and we learn from them. I know you'll take everything positively and keep going strong...

By the way, i haven't been to Juhu beach too, would love to go there sometime...Well i really like the new title. It does convey what you have in store for me ahead...

Thanks a lot for this story.

Lots of Love

Ankita

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ChocolatePie14

@ChocolatePie14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

IT'S GETTING SERIOUS DAY BY DAY... AM TOTALLY SCARED!!!!

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1044737

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Aye kya hogaya.. 😲She kissed JOSEPH..😲😲

I was expecting it to be manan..😒

Coming to update it was commendable..⭐️

I seriously want to comment lamba..😒

But too weak to think too much..😭😭😭

And about advises from grandspops

Once I am fully recovered I will PM you..

I promise.. 😃😃

By the way I LOVE GUJARATHII FOOD..❤️💔

So in future definitely I will come..😊

And dekhna I will win..👍🏼

It's a challenge baby..😉

TAKE CARE!
STAY BLESSED!!
KEEP SMILING!!!

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Bhavik Dave

@davebhavik93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

College to ana padata hai attendance ke liye !!!! Otherwise koi nai jata..!!

Just take rest and give next update soon.!! ;)

Now about the update while reading I remembered about the event which was happened in past and that I am expecting that must not be happens again in life. okay now lets talk about the update its really nice and as I know HIM. I can keep the patience but others are not so update soon for other readers.!!!!

Reply soon.!!

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

this is so interesting and intriguing. very different and creative.

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pinky

@kimnana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

is nandu hallucinating abt joseph ..confused ...

nice update ..nice n different concept

ty for pm

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Purna Chatterjee

@Angel_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Amazing update.
Beautiful written.
Loved it very much.
Thanks for pm.
Waiting for next update.
Keep smiling.
Stay blessed

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Drashtiii

@Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: crazypranu19
Awesome update. Nandus condition is getting worse. When will her parents came to know about her. Will b waiting for maniks pov. And I think she was in love with manik and is manik going to treat her? Update soon. And thanks a lot for the pm.

may be in the next update
and i will give manik's pov asap

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Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: rimsha01
What did i just read!! Its fantastic. I am still thinking about what might hv happened to her nd I cant describe how amazing this story is.
U know what, U can write a novel and i can guarantee it would be a Hit!

novel!! Its a big thing. .here i am tired of giving d updates. .
I dnt think i can do any better than this