THEIR JAAN . chapter 4updated pg -6 ( 27/02/16)

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Love_Queen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Interesting dear

Love to read more

Waiting for the next update
Update soon
But thoda bigg wala dena ha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hey,where are you??waiting for updates..

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Tasniya09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Cute se story yaar plzzz update soon

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rockstarlover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Cute stry
Everyone is so worried about their jaan
Hope jaan forgives her jaan soon
Plz pm me😃

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Darcypaul

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Posted: 9 years ago

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CHAPTER 4

Manik's jaan pov 😉

i woke up with slightly heavy head ... my vision is blurred..i flicker my twice and then clearly see where iam ...

" oh god " i gasped . ..i was covering with warm comfort..and my bed was feathery soft then i look at my surrounding .. white. blue combination painted wall. in a side shelf lots of book were arrange perfectly. other side have our photo collection yes which we put on every year here. lots of soft toys is placed in my room yeah MY room ... iam at our home sweet home.. our Paradise.. how i mean .. when i came here .. i watch my bedside watch 4:30 am .. it's morning there is still dark outside. where is mama ... daddy .. no one is here i felt like crying.. the same loneliness which i felt that day ... when they left me here alone.
I slowly get down from bed ..i feeling little bit weak ..becoz of after fever effect may be. i took baby steps and reach hall . there is no one here . then i made my way towards garden. i saw star are still in sky ..with their never ending shine. lots of colourful light are hanging in the trees which i remember that me and my manik did that...when we were kids and they are still there.

" my manik " i sigh " who no longer mine" i felt something burning feeling in my chest as it will burst out any moment. this PAIN is tooo much.. of losing him. of losing hope to be with him. of losing the life with him.of losing myself. tear welled up in my eyes making my vision blured .it feel like all other parts of my body is stopped functioning and only tear gland is doing it's work . woh bhi over - time.
then i heard him yes him.. what he is doing here .then it clicked me he is the who take me here.. how i forgot this impossible impulsive act can only be done by him .

" jaan.." " what are u doing outside.. u should rest na.. oh god come here . u will catch cold." he came running toward me with a speed of light and wrap his arm around me How i want to be here for rest of my life..i close my eye. but suddenly reality hit me ..a very hard one.. he rejected me . he doesn't love me . i freed myself from him slowly.. he was taken aback by this as ot was the first time that i did this.

" u doesn't love me ..mani." i whispered .. in my own trance looking at the ground . tear welled up in my eyes all set to fall.. stupid tears..then i looked at him with my teary eyes and said " u don't love me. ."

he looked hurt .. his eyes is filled with tears also ..he shake his head right-left violently.and trying to hold my arm ..but i backed off.. " i love u and u don't love me mani.. .." i murmmer.. and took a deep breath and " its o..i will not force u" i said with heavy heart and turn to go when i suddenly pulled back by and lifted up from ground ..and squeezed.. manik has hugged me so tightly.. his tears is wetting my shoulder ..he is crying like hell.. i can't see him like this ..i slowly and soothingly rubbed his back he held me more closer to him..then he said something .. which then and their increase my heart beat like a bullet train.

"i love u ... i love u love u soo soo much very much..i love u i love u" he continuously murmurring this ... hugging me tightly .. i can't believe .. he love me like really love me .." u do " i asked still hugging him.." yeah i really do love u...i love u" he said .

THAT'S IT
SORRY FOR LATE UPDATE BUT MY EXAM IS GOING TO START SOON SO BUSY IN PREPARATION FOR IT..

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