THEIR JAAN . chapter 4updated pg -6 ( 27/02/16)

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Darcypaul

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Posted: 9 years ago

'Daddy ...' a girl came running toward the man of 50s..who was sitting on sofa of his lavish mansion and crash on his arm.

'princess what happened.. bachha y are u crying' a sudden panick striken him..seeing his jaan like this.

'da..daddy ..'she is crying uncontrollablely.make difficult it speak .

'yes daddy ki jaan kya hua tell me ,u are scaring me now' he said worriedly rubbing her back.

suddenly a beautiful woman of around 40s came hurriedly and sit beside them taking their princess in her arm .
Baby kya hua shh...bas don't cry ..kisine kuch kaha apse .. ap batoa I'll not leave them ' she said angryly who is no other than Nyonika malhotra.a beautiful confident elegant and strongest business woman and little short tempered u see .who love her daughter beyond words is now hell angry as who dares to make her baby cry. .

'Mama .. 'sniff 'he said he don't lo..love me 'sniff 'an. and he wi..' hiccupped 'will not marry me' and again she started to cry ..

'how dare he .. say this to u.. ill not leave him' barked maan malhotra ,a ever so cool man , best business tycoon and MD of manan industry . is now fuming in anger. Why not becoz of that stupid guy his princess is crying

'baccha don't cry ok I'll see how he won't marry u. u just stop crying ..ap trust karte ho na apke daddy par.' he ask ever so lovingly cupping her face . she look at her daddy with her big chocolaty brown eyes which is full of tears.and nodded innocently.' toh bas he will marry u only now don't cry ' he said determinedly .wiping tear from her cheek
maan just go and give some piece of mind to that stupid idiot boy. ' lady hitler said furiously.
maan nodded and left after kissing his princess head. 

After a while he enter his office with his all time bossy atitude at the same time furious also. all the employees are scared as they saw him as bossy around them but that much angry is not good for them . he barged at someone cabin and shouted loudly.
' Manik malhotra'
'dad .. what happened' so here comes our great manik malhotra , CEO of manan industry. sinfully hot . handsome tall well built body. all in all chalta phirta greek god. 😉
'dad ke bache how dare u say no to my daughter.ha... u stupid dump head ... ' he said in anger.

' dad what. u are saying .. when i said no to her and y will i say this i love her..' he said annoyinglt.

'oh so what u are saying my jaan is lying to me.. ha she only said that u refuse her. how could u. ' he said more annoyingly.

'what the hell u are talking.. aur yeh kya my jaan laga rakha hai .she is my jaan also..ok' manik aaid now he is frustrated how his dad can say that he don't love her.. he love her like a mad so how can he ..

' manik usne khud mujhse kaha... aur usne apna halat ro ke bura kar liya hai.' now maan was little calm knowing that manik didnot said this .when he saw his princess crying he just lose control. .they didn't even gave second thought that may be their princess misunderstood something. their smartest brain stop functioning when it comes to their baby

listening that his jaan is crying becoz of him .. manik lost it. ' what y i mean kyu oh god i need to go but i never say that..' before he could complete something strike his mind ' holy crap..' he shouted loudly.making maan straled 'shit shit shit ... i ... i never meant to it's just oh shit...' he was angry on himself ..maan understood that now phir se his beta did something stupid .. he palm his face looking dissapointed .

'oh dad what i have done..' before he can complete maan phone ring ..he pick it up.." hello..nyonica what happened is bacha is ok right: ...he ask with concerned

'maan come fast plz baby lock herself in her room ' she said worriedly ... helplessness is clearly sounding in her voice.' what yeah im coming ..' he said panickly .. ' manik we have to...' he turn to inform manik but he was not there he had gone long before from their ..' manik' maan sigh..and went from there.

ENDING OF CHAPTER 1 .. 
it contain only few chapter i guess ...i know iam not that good at writing but im trying u see ... plz tolerate this crap . ...and show some rahem if u like it by commenting on it 😭

stay blessed
Darcy

INDEX

chapter 1- pg 1
chapter 2- pg 2
chapter3 - pg 4
chapter 4 -pg6

Edited by Darcypaul - 9 years ago

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Aakifa Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

Well as of nw m totally confused..
Bt interesting..
continue soon.. :)

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nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey awesome story..loved it continue soon..waiting eagerly for next update..take care 😊

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Didiaish

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey nice update

Amazing start Continue soon

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Swarna

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Posted: 9 years ago

seems interesting...😊

wanna give a shot...

update nxt chap...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Its seems interesting..i think there is little bit confusion between these two..well nothing is clear ..waiting for next update...

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Posted: 9 years ago

intresing story
Nice start
Chapter was awesome
Waiting for the next part

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Darcypaul

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Posted: 9 years ago

CHAPTER 2

'bacha open the door plz baby' nyonika from last half an hour banging the door as her daughter had lock herself in room.

'mom' manik came running .

'manik see na she is not opening the door ,plz tell her . to open it' the ever so strong nyonika is helpless when it comes to her.

'jaan open the door plz . I'm really so sorry na... plz see mama is worried baby open the door.' manik lovingly said..

by now maan also arrived there ' princess open the door plz' saying this he once again bang the door but no response now this make their tension level high.

suddenly manik remind something and ran towards his room and come within a min.. with the spare key of her room. and open the door .soon the three of them rish inside her room .and there she is laying on bed. they thought thay she slept so manik went near her and sat in the edge of bed and caresses her head when suddenly he panicked.' oh god dad she is burning ..jaan open ur eyes... sorry ..sorry plz. ' now he was hell worried as she is unconscious .and continuously calling her. maan and nyonika also rush toward her and checking her temperature ..maan call doctor .and all trio was literally panicking..by now.
' kaka ek bowl me thanda pani aur kapda leke aiye jaldi se...' nyonika shout at servant ..they all run to fetch the things..

all this while manik was continuously trying to wake her up but she does not responding.. his eyes is getting moist now .