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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 29.

The Next morning, Everyone reached the college early as they had to leave for the Farmhouse. Fab 5, Navya , and Aryaman had already reached but Nandini didn't. Manik was trying to call her, but she wasn't picking up the calls aswell. "What the hell man! Why isn't she picking up the call.." Manik said angrily. "Because it's you. Why will she pick up your call?" Said Cabir in a funny way. Cabir smiled and said "oooh that loook, I'm scared" Mukti , Alya and Dhruv laughed. Aryaman was observing this and he took Navya aside, "Yeh Manik aur Nandini.. is there anything between them? Like..Manik hamesha Nandini Nandini karta rehta hai.." Navya looked at him, smiled and said , " Han kyunke Manik loves Nandini.." . Aryaman looked surprised, "And Nandini?" He asked. "We don't get everything we love.." Navya replied. As they were talking, Nandini came running "I'm sorry! I'm Late!" She exclaimed. "Where were you?" Asked Manik angrily. Nandini looked at him and said, "Tumse Matlab?" Manik sighed and went away in anger. Cabir took Nandini aside and asked.." Nandini..is there something you are hiding from us?" Nandini was shocked hearing this. "Something? What? No..Nothing..Why and what will I Hide from you? No..Nothing.. There's Nothing." She said. "Okay Okay.. Calm down. Mae to mazak karaha tha tum itni serious hogai.." Cabir said in a funny way. Nandini looked relieved hearing this. "Oh by the way, how's rishabh now? Kahan hai wo?" Cabir asked. "Rishabh.. Oh..wo .. He's at home.. taking rest." She replied. "Rest?" asked cabir. "Yeah..Doctor asked him to take rest. Bed rest.." Saying this, she left. "Jhoot kyun bolrahi hai yeh. My doubt was right. Nandini Murthy, what's cookin?" He said to himself. "Comeon students,get in the bus everyone!" Said the principal. Everyone sat in the bus. "Oh, I'm so hungry!" Said Nandini to Navya. "Hungry? Kyun tumhari cachi ne apne hath ka delicious khana nahi khilaya tumhe? Asked aryaman. Nandini laughed and said, "Nahi wo chachii.. " Suddenly she stopped and looked at Aryaman in a state of shock. "Chachi?How do you know about Chachi and her cooking?" She asked him.

Precap: For the Qualification of second round of Music Gala, Fate brings Manik and Nandini Face to Face as they have a Face off Performance. Also , Nandini feels somewhat connected to Aryaman.
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Posted: 9 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE
I READ THE WHOLE STORY IN ONE GO AND I FELL IN LOVE WITH IT I DESPERATELY WANT TO KNOW HOW STORY GETS UNFOLD IN FUTURE HOW WILL MANIK KNOW OF NANDINIS ILLNESS? HOW WILL THEY FIGHT IT TOGETHER AND THAT ARYAMAN(IF NEGATIVE)


PLS GIVE NEXT UPDATE ASAP...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update dear really eagerly waiting for ur update pls continue soon pls let manik knows about nandini disease pls bring them together
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Posted: 9 years ago
That means nandu and aryaman knew each other in past.
Continue soon.
Waiting to see the mysteries u have kept for us.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nandani and aryaman know each other😕😕 so much of suspense...your story is really getting interesting day by day...eager to read more...continue soon😉
Edited by kelie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
First, Thankyou so much for amazing feedback, guys. Since, its my 30th update so, I've extended it a little, hope you guys like it. & once again, Thankyou so much for amazing reviews! 😊



Part 30

Aryaman was shocked listening to Nandini's question. "Bolo Aryaman? How do you know about my chacha and chachi?" Nandini asked. "Aray..tumhi ne to bataya tha.." He replied. "Mainay? When did I tell you? No, I didn't!" She said. "Aray..usdin when you were fainting, you were saying some random stuff.. yeah.. there you mentioned them..and I heard. Zahir hai, warna mujhe kese pata chalega.." He said. "Oh..okay..Maybe." she said.
When Aryaman and Nandini were having this conversation, Manik was continuously staring them. "Chill kar Manik, Aisai random baat chalrahi hai, tu to aisay dekhraha hai jaise shadi ki bat chalrhi ho.." Said Mukti. Alya and Dhruv started to laugh. "Aey Cabir! tu kia devdas bana betha hai yar.." Said Mukti. "Cabir, kahan khoya hua hai?" Dhruv asked. "Nahe..nahe..wo bas aisai.." He replied. (Cabir was thinking of why did Nandini lie to him.)

After sometime, the bus reached the Farmhouse. "Beautiful!" Said Alya, looking at the farmhouse.
As everyone started to move inside, The principal came to make an announcement. "Okay so students, now for the next round of music gala, we will see your individual talent against your rivals! yes you are right. No matter if you're participating as a band, you will compete as an individual with a member of another band. And who two will be the competitors will be decided by Chits so first, go see your rooms, freshen up and meet me at the Garden on the backside in 45 minutes!" Saying this, he left!

"Kia? matlab ab hum alag perform krenge nandu?" Said Navya. Nandini smiled and nodded. "Nandu? Kia bat hai? Tumhari tabyat to theek haina? Kahin khoyi khoyi si lagrahi ho.." asked Navya. "Nahi..it's just that wo Aryaman.. There's something strange about him..I feel like I know him..I don't know why.. I feel like there's some connection between us.." Nandini said. "Connection? Aisa kaise hosakta hai nandu. Tum sirf zada he sochrai ho" Said Navya. "Hmm..Maybe you're right.." Said Nandini.

Nandini, Navya, Mukti, and Alya were room partners whereas on the other hand, Manik, Aryaman, Cabir and Dhruv were room partners.

After freshening up, all of them assembled in the garden and the procedure of of choosing competitors began. "So the first name is..Nandini Murthy!! Let's see who she will be competing with.. Oh My God!! It is, Manik Malhotra!!" Hearing this, Nandini was shocked. "Wy aii appa!! Out of all these people, why Manik!!" She said to herself. Mukti Cabir Alya and Dhruv looked at eachother and started to laugh and Manik, was extremely happy. He had that evil smile on his face.
"So, Nandini and Manik will be having a face off. Superb!" Said Cabir.

Precap: Manik and Nandini have a faceoff, through which their emotions and feelings came out and Mukti , Cabir dhruv alya navya became emotional and everyone had tears in their eyes. Nandini, however encounters a strange incident with Aryaman, again.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yayiee...I am the first...now coming to update it was awesome...looking forward to upcoming track...but pls jaldi se let manik know about nandini's illness...Update jaldi and lamba 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
This one's specially for you, kelie. Love your feedbacks! Keep them coming. 😳😆

Part 31.
"So, Manik and Nandini.. Shall we start?" asked te principal. "Shall we?" asked Manik, looking at Nandini. Nandini nodded. "You're competing with me, Best of luck. You need it!" Said Manik to Nandini. " Keep it with yourself. You'll need it more." Replied Nandini. "Impressive!" Said Manik.

The face off started. (Nandini sings) *Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha.. Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve..Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve.. Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..(Manik sings) Gair sa hua khud se bhi, na koi mera.. Dard se karle chal yaari, dil ye keh raha.. Kholun jo baahein, bas gham ye simat rahe hain, Aankhon ke aage lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain..Jaane kaise koi sehta Judaaiyaan..Chadariya jheeni re jheeni..Chadariya jheeni re jheeni

Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni..Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni.. **

Both of them were so much lost in their song, and were singing with so much purity that everybody in the garden had tears in their eyes including Manik and Nandini itself. "Magical!!" The principal said. Manik and Nandini looked at eachother and wiped away their tears. "Truly, you two were superb! both of you qualify for the Next round. Your bands are qualified. Congratulations!"

Nandini left the garden in tears. Aryaman followed her. "Hey, you were amazing there!" he said to her. "Thankyou..Thankyou so much.." She replied. "You and Manik.. Were magical. If you don't mind can I ask you a question?" Aryaman said. "Yes, sure. Bolo na?" She replied. "I know..I know You both feel for eachother..then why do you keep pushing him away?" He asked. Nandini smiled and said.."pata hai Aryaman, sometimes in life there are moments in time when our smile becomes expression of strength but you'll never know the battles because.. because we go to war within ourselves.. " "Oh..Oh! That was deep! I hope you dont mind me asking this..afterall I'm just a stranger.." He said. " Kabhi Kabhi, it's easier to tell a stranger something very personal..It's like, there's less risk, opening yourself up to someone who doesn't know you.." She replied. Aryaman smiled and said " Don't worry! Everything will be fine. Janti hona, where there's no light, the fireflies shine. Just like your fireflies, your life will shine aswell.." Saying this, he left. Nandini smiled. After sometime, Nandini was in a state of shock. "Fireflies? My fireflies? how does he know about my fireflies?" She said to herself. Just when she was thinking about this, her head started to burn again, everything started revolving infront of her eyes and she fell on the floor. "nandini! nandini!" someone shouted. After sometime, she woke up in the hospital. "Who brought me here?" she asked the doctor.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you so much for dedicating the update to me...BUT U KNOW WHAT...your writing,this
story deserves much more appreciation than what I give u...it is seriously the best FF I've ever come across...JUST KEEP DOING THIS GOOD WORK GAL ND KEEP GIVING UPDATES AISE HI JLDI JLDI👏
Edited by kelie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its awsm
loved it
LFTR
read all parts in go
ur suspense killing me
plz plz update next chappy soon
as keili said u should get big appreciation
Keep it up
this is one of best story till nw I read
when I say this na I mean it

update soon

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