Manan ff Pyaar bas ho jaata hai CH 4 pg 6

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Promo...

London

Nav : bhul kyun nhi jaate use...

Manik smiles weakly and

M : ishq hua tha mujhe us se navya... Sach ishq...

Bhut pyaar karta hoon us se...tu kaise bhul jao...

Na : agar itna hi pyaar karte ho...tu kyun roj ek nai ladki ke saath dikhte ho tum...

She speaks in stern voice...

M : use...bhula ne ke liye... Use dil se nikalne ke liye ..

Tears slips from navya's eyes... Witnessing a Love Story which was True but... Vo adhoori reh gayi...

Na : manik...dhoondo use... Kahin tu milegi...

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Mumbai...

Girl : kyun kar rahi hai ye shaadi agar nhi hai tu khush

2 girl : har cheej mein apni khushi nhi dekhi jaati.. Mukti...

Her voice so ruthless that mukti was shaken she shakes her head in disbelief and goes out of the room...

Girl 2 : aaj... Aapka sapna poora hoga dad ... Aapke bf ke bete se meri shaadi hone jaa rhi hai...

She speak with tears in her eyes holding her father's pic...

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nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hmmm amazing..story...interesting..continue 😊

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rajirock123

@rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Hey dear really awesome

I read both chapter one and promo

So nandu is getting married with druv

And I think she is marring because of her dad

Hope manik reaches on time

Ane stops marriage

Pls update soon

Want to read manan flash back

When they are in love

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Sehjal

@Sehjal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Great concept honey.

Its looking really nice.

Update next soon.

but plz dont discontinue once uts started.

better will be end ut soon but plz dont put on hold or discontinue.

Stay blessed.

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Hello Everyone... Thanx to all who responded...😊😊😊

Waiting for more response...

Manik ooens his eyes and looks at person...

M : ab kuch bolega bhi...cabirrr

So yes that person was cabir...

Cabir smiles sheepishly...

C : tere bhadakne ka hi wait kar rha tha mai..

Manik shakes her head on her lame talks...and rolls his eyes to show his irritation...

C : ok..ok coming to the point...so ya i wanted to talk you something...

Seeing seriousness on cabir's face..manik too settles on bed with his back on headboard

...

M : haan bol...

C : actually... The deal which was cracked by both of us...they agreed to our conditions...

M : ya it's great... So tell them to continue work...

C : ya I'll do...abd ya who are the one that we cracked the deal in india...

M : THE MURTHY'S...😲😲😲

Cabir smiles...

C : oh...i heard their name a lot they are really great in business...

Manik smiles abd nods...

After some time ...

C : soo...

Manik raises his eyebrows and

M : so what...???

C : so that... Ki who's the new girl you f****d up..???

M : didn't get the time cabirr...

He says lying on bed... Making cabir amazed...

C : really you...didn't

M : yess...

C : omg...it's great... Well if you want you can stop all this really if you didn't had IT since last 19 days so what about stopping all this getting into a serious relationship...

Cabir speaks seriously making manik chuckle sarcastically...

M : serious Relationship huh??? What serious relationship... Cabir you know these commitments , love and all is not my cup of tea...

C : but it was na manik...

M : yes you're right it WAS cabir...

He speaks concentrating more on was making manik sighs...

M : ye pyaar vyaar na mere liye hai hi nhi... Meri life mein koi pyaar na tha na hi hoga aur na hi hai...

He says closing his eyes...

C : tujhe bhi hoga manik... Tujhe bhi pyaar hoga... Aur jab hoga na tab tujhe pata chalega ki kitna khush kismat hai tu...

Manik chuckles and speaks sadly...

M : Hua Tha cabir...mujhe bhi pyaar hua tha... Bhut pyaar kiya tha mani us se but vo adhoora reh gya... Mere pyaar adhoora reh gaya... Aur usi din mujhe samajh aa gaya PYAAR bhut kutti cheej hai sirf DARD deta hai... Yeh Kambakt PYAAR...

Cabir sighs and whispers NANDINI

Listening this name tear slips from manik's eyes... Cabir gets up and goes out... After speaking...

C : JARURI NHI HAR PYAAR POORA HO IAATA HAI...kuch ADHOORE bhi reh jaate HAI manik... WO kehte hai na ISHQ SACHA WAHI JISKO MILTI NAHI MANJEELE...

Manik was lost listening his words... He was feeling pain immense PAIN in his HEART which only beats For HER... He was startled after listening cabir's word... Kya sach mein Humara PYAAR adhoora reh jaayega... Kya Sach mein... Humare ishq ko manjeele nhi milegi aur agar mil bhi gyi tu kya... Bolega Manik use ki he betrayed her... BY being a PLAYBOY... By BEING a Casanova...

He closes his eyes tightly and tear rolled down his eyes...

Kaise bataye , ki tujhko chahe , yaara bata a paye na...baatein dilo ki , dekho jo baaki , aankhein tujhe samjhaye...tu jaane na... Tu jaane na...tu jaane na...

He remembers that day when he confessed her...he was so much happy... He was sure that what response he would get but failed...

Milke bhi , hum na mile , tumse naajane kyun.

Meelo ke , hai yeh faasle , tumse najaane kyun.

Anjaane , hai yeh silsile , tum se najaane kyun.

Sapne hai , palkon tale , tum se najaane kyun.

O..ooo...ooo

Kaise bataye ki tujhko chahe yaara bata paaye na. Baatein dilo ki , dekho ji baaki , aankhein tumhe samjhaye...tu jaane na...tu jaane naaa...tu jaane na...

The beautiful moment which they spend together... Their fights , their friendship , theur Love... All that just seems like Dream.. Beautiful Dream... He remambers how they uses blush on mentioning of each other's name... He wanted to tell her how much he loved her... How close they were but still went so far...

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Next part in night...

Tell me how is it...PLEASE... Comment if you want me to continue this story thank you...

Stay happy

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

Love

Divya

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Tiara115

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow.itni jaldi update. .

Nyc ...

Really excited for manan's meet..

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

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sreesri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Amazing update..

Luvd it..

Plz pm me plz..

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Sumaiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

WHAT'S GOING ON??
MANAN PHELA EK7A THA???
ALAG KASA HUA???
NANDINI DHRUV SA MARRIAGE KA LIYA AGREE KASA HO GAYA???
PATA NAHI KYA HONE WALA HA??
NEXT PART PLZ ASAP...
ISHQ SUFIYAANA KAB POST KAROGI??

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starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

"Life sometimes play cruel games with us...it give us immense happiness as well as pain..."

But after every dark night there is a Bright Morning"...

"Good Morning " navya exclaims after opening curtain of manik's room who was sleeping pn his stomach... As soon as sunrays coming from window knocks his eyes to open he stirrs and put pillow on his face to save his sleep...

Navya chuckles seeing his antics and pulls the pillow from his head " come on get up sleepy head ot's late bacha " manik slowly opens his eyes and smiles faintly at navya...navya keeps his coffee on table and smiles on her face fafes away as spon as she looks at his swollen , red eyes which means he had cried... Navya gasp and immediately sits beside him...

" you cried...but y?? " she asks him caressing his eyes...manik closes his eyes and puts his head on her lap...

" nothing just ... Feeling low " ... He says holding her hand...

" Nandini " she whispers with pain and looks at manik changing expressions...

" bhul kyun nhi jaate use...huh..." She ask in stern voice... " nhi bhul sakta use mai navya Ishq tha mujhe usse sacha ishq... Mere har dard ki dawa aur mari har khushi ki muskan thi wo"

Thi na manik ab tu nhi hai " she speaks making him smile " wahi tu thi lekin Humesha Rahegi... Nhi bhula sakta use mai navya " he speaks all time smiling... " tu dhoondo use...poocho ki kyun kiya usne " she ask closing her eyes as tear fall down from her eyes witnessing the Yrue Love jo adhoora reh gaya... " Promises...Nandini Murthy never breaks Promises...promise kiye tha uski mom ne kisi se jo use uske dad se jab pata chala jab vo apna dil mujhe de chuki thi... Promise ki use us ladke se shaadi karni hogi jo uski mom ne decide kiya "

He speaks with so much pain inside him...

" itna pyaar karte ho ki jaane diya use " she speaks caressing her forehead " haan...aur tumhe pata hai ki kyun karta hoon mai us se pyaar itna " he asks turnin arpund her facing her after sitting...

Navya smiles tearfull and nods " Haan kyunki VO tumhe TUMSE bhi JYADA pyaar KARTI HAI..."

She speaks all this with smile...manik too smiles hugely and get lost in his memory land...

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Flasback...

" jaan leli thi tumne meri " he speaks hugging her .. They were in hospital as nandini had accident and she was injured badly... Nandini smiles faintly and speaks " tumhari jaan lene se pehleai khud ki hi jaan leli thi.." Manik immediately covers her mouth... " don't... Don't speak this words " ...

" agar tumhe kuch ho jaata tu mar jaata mai.. Bhut ...py ..pyaar karta hoon mai..." He whispers sadly..

Nandini smiles " aurai tumse bhi jyada ... Jabh tu dekho wapas aa gayi mai tumhare liye... Sirf tumhare liye..."

Manik smiles hugely and kisses her forehead...

It was Their true Love being in relationship since 2 years at that time they even didn't kiss each other.. They never shared any intimate moment... They loved each other with their pure hear and never tried to make one anotger feel uncomfortable "...

Not only 2 years...their relation was of four years and in that four year nothing but just holding hands , hugging , kissing chicks , eyes forehead...

It was not manik never wanted every boy want that with their partners but he never wanted to make her uncomfortable...

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Mumbai...

A girl was sitting on her king sized bed making desgines for her upcoming show ... She was the MD of murthy's Fashoin house which was their anpther buisness runned by Only Nandini Murthy

She was fully in her work when some one back hugged her from behind...nandini smiles knowing who he was... " dhruv " she whispers ... Making him pout " kya yaar... Her baar kaise pehchaan leti ho tum mujhe huh..." " bas aise hi "... Dhruv smiles and sits beside her..." Vaise poochogi nhi mujhse ki gow was my meeting hmm..." Nandini looks at him and again vet busy in her work...

" fine don't aks I'll tell you myself...it was great and clientbwas great and hot...too...vaise nandini man ni padegi tumhari choice huh...". Nandini blushes hard...

" aww...you're blushing really " " aah...vo...mai kym.lyun blu..blush karungi...huh. "

Dhruv smiles " nandini bhut strict ho gaya hai vo .. Jaise tumne bataya tha vaisa tu bilkul bhi nhi dikha Vo ... Badal gya vo...tumne badal diya use "

Tear slips from nandini's eyes... " ka...kaisa tha vo" ...she ask with tears in her eyes avoiding eye contact...

" tujhe usse kya... Teri tu shaadi dhruv se ho rhi hai na " here comes our lady dabang " mukti " dhruv whispers... Nandini looks at her and volume wipes her tears..." Haan...sahi keh rhi hai.. I should not care " ... Mukti shook his head and sot beside her " kyun apne pain ko bhada rhi hai tu.. Kyun ye shaadi kar rhi hai tu nandini " nandini closes her work and stands from their " yahi hai meri kismat mein...ab kuch nhi badlega " mukti shook his head in disbelief and goes out in fury..

Nandini takes photo of her parents " aapka sapna poora ho gya mom dad... I...i ... Left my love for your wi ..wish "... With this she falls on her knees and cries loud...while dhruv too was in tears looking at his Best Friend who was in just because of their parents foolish promise... But yet he can't forget that HE LOVES HER... And was the happiest person when he got knews of him marrying nandini

But maybe ayippa had kept something else in his life...

Screen freezes pn manik's ceying yet smiling Face and Nandini's broken Face...

Precap :

Al : omg...bhai...are we going for 1 month..their

Manik smiles on her baby's excitement and speaks " yes doll...and all of you pack your bags...tomorrow is our flight..." Saying this he makes some calls and goes for his New Night Stand

Stay blessed

Stay happy

Spread love

Be crazy

Live life with love

Love

Divya