Manan ff Pyaar bas ho jaata hai CH 4 pg 6

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Hello guys... Am divya and still a newbie
I have my another two FF also...

" tu mera jahan hai "
" ishq soofiyana "

I wanna start this new one... I don't know how it will go...but still i wanna write...

Those who all responds to my other works a very big thank you... And those who do not nothing to say to you all...





Character Sketch...

Nandini's life

India...

Nandini Murthy 23 1/2 year old...😆

Daughter of Best business tycoon in india.. She is cute , beautiful , hot , smart and arrogant..
She have every type of comfort a princess should have but still she is unhappy from her life...
As never got the LOVE which she wanted... Her father was never their for her when she needed him the most... But she never complained... She is arrogant because of her strict , dark childhood where she cried but no one was their for her...


Raman Murthy : nandini's father ... No.1 business man... He is strict , arrogant but some where deep down he have heart which beats for his daughter... The day when Raima ( wife ) passed away... He lost his heart with her... And started leaving his life her in business...


Mukti vardhan : 24 year old nandini's bff... Rich ... Hot girl...
She is bitch when you behave bitchy she is sweet when you behave sweet... Can't bear nandini getting hurt in any way...any damn way..


Dhruv vardhan : 26 year old Cool , smart , funny guy... He is full of life... Elder brother of mukti ... Engaged to Nandini... But never felt for her... Both treat each as a friend only...




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Manik's life

London...


Manik malhotra : 25 1/2 year old😆😆😆best business tycoon in London , Newyork , paris and Canada... Heartthrob of all the girls... Can have any girl with his charms...
Loves his life alot ... Full of life person... Crazy he is... And he is kind of famous or infamous of being player... Casanova...

Loves his baby Sis

Alya Malhotra : 24 years old fashionista...sweet , cute... Beauty without brains she is...but nice hearted person...
Believes in Love...and only family of manik malhotra...


Cabir Dhawan : manik's and alya's cousin... Cool , smart guy ... Of 26 married to Navya...
Rich...and kind guys... He comes in 5 best business man... Loves manik and alya like real bro and sis

Navya Dhawan : 25 year mold sweet , beautiful and chirpy bhabhi of Alya , Manik and abhimanu... And wife of cabir...loves her little crazy family alot...

Abhimanu Dhawan : 24 year old... Hot handsome guy... He is bodyguard to alya... Both were born in same month with difference of 4 days... Loves his family alot...



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CH 1. Pg 2

Ch 2 pg 3

Ch 3 pg 5

Ch 4 pg 6












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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing cs
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Love...what is love ?????

Chapter 1😊😊



London


A guy was working in his study with a mug of coffee he was fully in his work till he listens sounds coming from outside of his study... It was night time and usually at this time he never get to do his work... He sighs and speaks dramatically...

" haye...rabba mannu baksh do "

As soon as he speaks a voice comes from back

"Tujhe rabba nhi hum hi baksh sakte hai...cabirrr...😉😉"

Cabir turns towarda the owner and smile sheepishly he closes his laptop and goes and hug the owner of voice...


C : bro...i missed you...

G : same case is here...mere bhaii...

They brejs the hug on listening voice...

V : haan...haan...apne bhai ko hi hug karo mujhse thodi na tum pyaar karte ho...mere tu koi bhi nhi hai...

Manik towards the owner and than loiks at cabir... And both sighs on typical drama queen "Navya"...


Manik goes near her and hugs her to which navya happily responds... Manik breaks the hug and smiles at her...

M : vaise bhabhi...aapko kaise pata...

Navya in her confused state. : umm...kya.

M : are...yhi ki aapse koi pyaar nhi... Karta...

N : you...abhi ruk..


She chases him as he start running... Outside .. Towards the hall...


He goes and hide behind the person who was talking on phone...

Person : are...ek min...hello...I'll talk to you later...bye..
He cuts the call...and turns towards manik...

Kya hua...manik...

Manik move towards sofa leaving him...and picks up pillow kept on sofa and throws it on the person...

M : saale...bada bhai...hoon tera... Bhai bola kar...

Navya picks one of the pillow and through at manik...
And soon they start pillow fight...





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After getting tired three of them jumos on sofa breathing heavily... Than all look at each other and burst out laughing...


Than three of them hug each other...


P : missed you ...

M : you too abhimanu...😳😳


They were still hugging each other when they hear voice

" haww...without me and bhai...you're having a group hug...very bad..."


Listening thus manik jumps from sofa and took the owner in bone crushing hug...

M : aaloo...missed you bachaa...

Alya smiles and snuggles more into his warmth...

After sometimes both breaks the hug...and manik kisses her forehead ...







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C : so...how was your deal??

Cabir asks as they were sitting in garden after having yummy dinner...


Cabir was sitting on chair and abhimanu was sitting on grass and alya was lying on grass with her head in abhi's lap...and navya too was sitting on grass with manik...in her lap...

They all were a happy family...they all were jaan of each other... All were protective about each other...

Navya was lije mother to manik alya and abhi as three of them were devoid of love of mother from childhood...


Abhi was very fond of manik ...as being a elder brother we only except them to behave mature and strict with us... But with manik it was different ...manik used to behave cool and crazy...frank with both of them...and that was the reason both were very fond of their not so big brother..





Alya : of course bhai would have cracked the deal ... Right bhai...


Manik smiles and : well...yes i cracked it... But they want me to go india and look at the sight as they don't want any kind problem afterwards... And i have to say thet they were really honoured and trustable person... And i really amused to know that indoa have good person too with that disgust people...


Na : india is great as well as ungrrat country and that is just because of people present their...



Al : bhai...we would too like to travel to india with you...


Abhi : ya it'll be great fun and with manik tu it'll be amazing...

Manik smiles hugely and proudly to be favourite of their little one's and speaks snuggling more into navya feeling sleepy...


M : mm...yaa o thought this too... I would too like to meet them...and with you people tu it'll be great... And the best thing is that they have their daughter's marriage in last of the month... Visiting india's marriage will be great experience...


C : wow...i always wanted to visit one...

Nav : me too...


M : and we'll are going to...as we've got family invitation and you all are accompanying me for that...


All : yipee...


Nav : ok...bas ab kaafi late hi gya..aur mannu bhi tired hai..now go to bed all of you right now...


Al : aah...no bhabhi please...


N : i said go tu go ..aallooo


She speaks strictly making alya huff

Al : huh...bhai ke liye aap humein bhi wahi follow karwate ho...

She speaks being jealous... While manik smiles hugely and gets up ..yawning teasingly...

M : chalo...chaloo...chalooo...

And runs from their as all were ready to beat him...navya chuckles and all glares at her and retires to their room...


As soon as all sleeps someone knocks manik's window...

Manik get up smile knowing who is the one...

He goes and open window to let the person in...


Manik turns towards person after closing window and jumps on bed again while... Person sits beside him

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Precap :

P : tujhe bhi hoga manik...tujhe bhi yeh pyaar hoga... Aur jab tujhe hoga na tu is duniya ka sabse khush kismat insaan hoga...kyunki pyaar sabko nahi milta...


Manii chuckles and...

M : kiya tha...kiya tha maine pyaar...par us pyaar ne dil tod doya mere ... Voh pyaar adhoora reh gya... Aur usi din.. Maine thaan liya ki pyaar kutti cheej hai ho jaaye tu sirf dard hi deti hai...pyaar mere liye bana hi nahi...



Person sighs and speaks : NANDINI...

Listening this name manik closes his eyes as tear escape from his eyes...












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Telle how is this...and guys believe me this story is really gonna fun and please don't make me upset by not responding just like you all did iny another stories...







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Stay happy
Stay blessed

Keep smiling

Love
Divya...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazinggg
Awesomee update
Nycc start
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. nyc start. .
Happy family..
So manik loved nandini and now they are separated.
Marriage which is going to take place is of nandini na ?
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tiara115

Wow.. nyc start. .

Happy family..
So manik loved nandini and now they are separated.
Marriage which is going to take place is of nandini na ?
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly



Thank you dear..
Yes may be ...any thing can happy...
I can tell you...many ywist to...come...


Keep responding...
And thanks...
You're my regular commenter of my all the story...

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