#2 The Devil (i m back)pg -125 1/7/16

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eoincash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#671

I loved the update

Thnx a lot for pm

Stay blessed

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Raksha.Sareen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#672

Emotional update!

U penned down this update with lots of emotion!

Manik breaking down in front of that gal just for nandini..

it was awesome!

He was being guilty..of his deeds..bad thinking!

N anjali said bhagwan tumhe maaf kare..

it was so nyc..

Nandini..just wanted to tell manik..

The way she cried..omg..!

Just bcz of bad boys...girls hav to suffer..!

Manik was feeling n understanding..her pain..!

Loved the update!

Superb!

Plz update soon!

Thanks for the pm..:)

Stay blessed!

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paradise..fall

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Posted: 9 years ago

#673

Awsm update . . . Love it. . .do anythng but dnt break manan . .

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archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#674

Awesome update. Manik's helpless state was well penned. Flashback was emotional. Manik was feeling guilty for his actions.wow nandini is out of danger.manan's emotional convo was amazing. Nandini got hurt badly. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.

If that person deserves punishment then manik also.we have faith in u,shape this story in the way u want,will support u always.

Keep writing

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Afiiiieee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#675

Wow amazing update Dr..

It was so emotional one dr..

Manik past deed are haunting now..

Nandu was suffering for his mistakes..

Fb was so much emotional dr..

It's gud tat girl helped manik in spite of his deeds..

Nandu was safe be..

Thanks for the pm dr.

Waiting for the next update eagerly Dr..

Always stay blessed and happy Dr

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manik11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#676

Hiii baby...Thanks for the pm...finally manik is learning his lesson...Poor Nandini is really weak but really wanna know who did this n why...very painful update... loved it... continue soon...

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Sree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#677

Wow!! Such an emotional update .mehak..

It was really awesum...u really rcked it...

Awesum writin dear..thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Manik's past s cuming infront of him ...

Nandu in critical condition..ab manik ko.realise ho rhe he...

Hw much he ws wrong in past...??

Flashbck vid anjali ws so heartwrenching...

Manik itslf spoil so many innocent grls lyf...

Feelin vry baf dise grls..nw manik s chabgib 4 gud .

Bt waitin 2 knw if his past leaves him in his present..

Anjali gave blood 2 nandu inspite of wt manik did 2 her.

D final wrdz of anjali 2 manik was so fantastic...

Manik s guilty on his deeds..lekin ab guilty honese kya fayada?

Finallu nandu waked up...aw!!! She s so much scared of evry1..

Nandu sayin manik dat d person try 2 rape het...omg!!so emotional...nw manik cme 2 realise d effects of his own deeds in past..nandu s in so vulnerable state...

Feeling vry bad 4 her..cnt imagine wt will b mandu's reaction wen she will cum 2 knw abt manik's past...

Bt whos d one try 2 misbhve vid nandu???

I think its manik's rival...so much emotional update...

Lvd it so much...do continue dear..waitin 4 nxt prt...

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Kavyashree pradhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#678

suh! Suh! My years are not flying away what to do..? It was very very painful 'mehak'

But one thing I realised I.e. manik is already suffering with guilt and that is the biggest punishment for him..
So that guilt building inside him is the punishment he deserve so..
Hope nandini don't suffer more for his deeds..

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Sukanya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#679

Emotional part .😭

Continue soon .

Waiting for the next one .

Take care .

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anu_khan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#680

Its very emotional... Manik was crying so much... Manik's bad past came & saved his life his jaan his everything... I'm dam sure manik will kill that person who did this to his baby...

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