#2 The Devil (i m back)pg -125 1/7/16

shruti1997

@shruti1997

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Posted: 9 years ago

#651

Manik realised his mistakes
Nyc update

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#652

Thanks for the pm
Glad manik is learning his lesson
N also that Anjali forgave him after what he did is s big thing
Poor Nandu is really weak but really wanna know who did this n why
I guess probably the sister or so of this kidnapper cum rapist was forced by manik

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591994

@591994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#653

Liked the update dear...
Will be waiting fr next...
Cont. Soon...

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#654

Thanks for pm.dear

Awesome very emotional part...

He is begging for her life ...

This is called karma...

I think everyone should punishment who did the bad thing ...like sin...

Nobody deserve easy escape ...

So be it manik or that other person who try to did bad..with nandni...

Deserve hard punishment. ..

You wrote very good chapter. ..

Thanks for sharing this. .

Stay blessed. .

Thanks.

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NAVYA64

@NAVYA64

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Posted: 9 years ago

#655

Awesome update

Loved it

Good one

Amazing

Cont soon

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#656

Made me cry... I loved how you incorporated a person from Manik's past here.. Anjali...
Thanks for the pm

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Inaya

@Cute_Inaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#657

Awesome...Emotional update...

Manik is so guilty about his deeds...

Now Manik is realised ... but whatever he did its wrong...

anjli part... she was so shocked when manik begging her to save her love...

Nandini was so hurt so broken... her condition is unbearable for manik...

I hope he finds that person soon...

Loved it...

Continue soon..

Thanks for pm..

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

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Posted: 9 years ago

#658

firstly Mehak you make me cry like anything 😭😭
the way you carried emotions gawwdd kudos to you girl 👏👏

update was so heart wrenching
Karma is a bitch... now its time for payback for him
he destroyed many souls and now GOD is doing the same with his little soul to be precisely his mate

there's an end for every deeds now its end for his too
but with more pain and longing...
he should suffer... but the one who forgive is always big..
punishment is less paining compare to forgiveness
he should go for his guilt trip where he realize his deeds

thanks for the pm
continue soonish

take care

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ankitabansal08

@ankitabansal08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#659

update ws too emotional nd good

continue soon

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nandininiti

@nandininiti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#660

it's an emotional chappy
manik is so worried and when he found that donor gal he felt guilty
is not that don't give punishment to him but make him redeem it
nandu was in so much pain
manik felt more guilty coz of this
loved the chappy
update soon

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