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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
manik's emotions were amazingly penned
though he realized his sins...
but still he has to do lot of hardwork for it's repentance
that girl was so great...
instead of manik doing so bad with her she forgive him and donated blood to her
nandini's emotions were also perfectly penned
very emotional update

thanks for pm dear
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update..
But scary too ..
What will happen
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's awesome and sorry for not responding from a long time
It's becoz I was following up stories on Wattpad
Thank you for all the PM's u sended to me
And this part is so emotional and awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's your story so your decision...
Thanks for the update... And pm... Love you
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Posted: 9 years ago
This really is beautiful yet emotional update. I love it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear
Sry fr late rply...I was missing since few updates I was busy vacationing. ..
I jus read ur updates ...ol of dem were really amazing. ..frm holi to d latest one whr manik is paying fr hus deeds n d guilt he is surrounded wid...Really beautiful. ..poor nandu she has to pay fr maniks deed bt I guess smwhr its true love. .
Eager fr d cuming updates to knw wts mre stored ...
Continue soon. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
The Devil


Part : 18 A


Chak De Saare Gham


"I don't want to listen anything mujhe voh ishan chihie jld se jld.. kisi hal mein.."manik shout on phone outside nandini's ward on ACP


"But sir we trying our hard there is not any clue we found we take statements from everybody presents in party but nobody seen him sir aap humhai mam se bt krne di jie "ACP said


"No.. nandini se koe bt nhi krni meine apko sb bta diya na.. bas i want that person infront of my eyes"manik said as he don't want to make nandini remember that incidence which make her more hurt


"Okay sir we will try our best"ACP by saying this cut the call

Manik P.O.V.

Why i leave her alone at party sab meri wjha se hua hai mujhe uske sth hi rhaina chihe tha how badly she hurt she is crying in front of me aur mein kuch nhi kr paa rha tha . Mein ushai pain mein nhi dekh skta i can't.. it's hurt to see her pain . I will not leave that person jisne bhi yeh sb kiya agr uski dushmani mujhe thi.. why he take my baby in this.. uski kya glti thi..


But i have to be behave normal infront of her i will never talk of this infront of her but i promise u baby mein sb thik kr dunga


Writter P.O.V.


"Mani..."manik heard her scream from inside her room


"Baby..."manik saying in low voice ran inside her room n manik see she is crying badly n calling him


"Baby.. kya hua tum ro kyo rhi ho..khi pain ho rha hai"manik asked cubbing her face


"Ma.. mani.. i can't move my leg they were paining alot i have to walk mujhe chlna hai"she said b/w her cry like baby n manik after listening this control his emotion


"Baby.. sh.. first stop crying"manik said wipping her tears n doc. Come inside but manik by gesture ask him to go n doc. Went away


"Baby.. it's temporary u can walk but u have to take rest n medicine tum fir bilkul thik ho jaogi.. "manik explain her lovingly n she calm down


Manik sit beside her holding her hand nandini lying looking at ceiling of room as the incidence is again n again coming in her mind n manik is feeling so much hurt as he never see like this silent but now she is not even saying anything .


"Acha baby ek joke suna toh hn..
"Manik start laughing himself after cracking joke but she didn't even look at him n his try got vein but he didn't stopped he cracks many jokes but inlast he get only disappointment as didn't even reacted for once . He is trying hard to make her smile by making himself like her but nandini is badly hurt by that incidence


"Mani.."finally nandini said after sometime but without looking at him


"Haan.. baby bolo na.."he asked caressing her cheeks


"Why he do this to me it's hurting alot mein bhul hi nhi pa rhi hn.. agr voh kuch krdeta toh mani.. mein mr jati mein ji nhi paati.."she again start crying looking toward him n only he knows how he controlling his emotion


"Baby voh kuch nhi krta mein ushai kuch nhi krne dete u have trust on yr mani na"he asked cubbing her face making him believe that he is always there for her she only nodded


Than nurse came to check her BP n all n send manik outside


Nurse came outside after checking her up n manik immidaitly go inside n than he see her sleeping as she slept becoz of high dose medicines but he see she is not sleeping peacefully


Manik sat beside her n looking toward thinking"i m sorry baby i can't able to protect u but i promise i will make u forgot everything with my love i will make u smile again.. mein pyaar kiya hai tumhse aur now it's time to show u my real love aur i will change myself fully for u.. i will make myself like u.. jaise tumhne mere pain ko ek jake mein hata diya now i will became like u aur tumhre pain ko ek jatge mein hata dunga.. yeh promise hai tumhre mani.. ka apni baby se.. "


After seeing this he peck her forehead n keep on looking at her by caressing her forhead after sometime he fallen a sleep there only


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Next morning

"Oh.. my baby.. uth bhi gye "manik said entering nandini's ward holding balloons in his hand


Nandini is lying on bed looked toward manik for once than looked away


"Gud.. mrng.. princess.."manik said pecking her forhead carfully that it can't hurt her on her head n she in response closes her eyes


"Dekho.. mein.. apni.. princess ke liye kya.. lao.. balloons.. "manik said teing bolloons on her bed at back but she didn't responded


Her silence is killing manik but he control his emotion


"Nurse nandini ka breakfast le ao.. "manik said to nurse who is standing in room setting nandini wires n than nurse left from there


"I m wid.. u.. na.. sb thik.. hoga.. u trust me na.. so yeh.. udhasi chodho.. baby.. plz.. understand.. sb thik hai tumhe tension leni ki koe JAROORAT nhi hai "manik said holding her hand n than wht he see her heart broken into sevral pieces n tear felt from her eyes


"Mani.. mein.. voh sb nhi bhul paa.. rhi.. hai.. i know tum ho.. toh i m safe but i need time"she said without looking toward him


"I know.. nandini.. itne easy nhi hai voh sb bhulna.. but i promise i bring my old nandini back.. aur inshaan ko mein jinda nhi chodhunga.. "he thinks in mind while she was saying all this


"Okay.. my baby need okay.. but plz.. aisa chup bedho..gi vrna.. u will make yrself more hurt.. "he said wiping her tear gently n than nurse also entered with breakfast trolley


"Chlo.. baby.. ab breakfast khaegi.. na.."manik said while taking the food from trolley n nurse adjusted her bed upward by remote as nandini can't move now


"Mani... mujhe bhuk nhi.. hai.."she said in low voice denied to take food


"Agr khana.. nhi khaogi toh thik kaise hogi.. vir mere sth pillow fighting kon karge.. "manik said setting beside her


"Chlo.. open yr mouth apne mani ke liye baby.. "manik said n she open her mouth n manik feed her by cracking jokes


Like this some days passes nandini internal wound are getting recover but her internal pain is same n manik trying his best he never became sad infront of her n always smiles n laugh infront of her but than crys n one more thing is disturbing him the person becoz him nandini is suffering he is still moving freely


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Posted: 9 years ago
Part : 18B

At night manik came back his mansion n went inside his secret room n switch on the lights


The room is filled with music instruments n pics r there of manik with guitar n many trophy in the shelves


"I will sing for u nandini i will sing again if mein apne past ko bhul hi chuka hn toh why i can't sing again for u jisne mujhe jina sikhya.. tum dekhna aaj baby today i will get my phle wli baby back... "he said caressing his guitar


In hospital


Nurse take nandini in garden n no one is there n nandin get confused


"Nurse aaj garden itna khli kyo hai... "nandini asked confusingly n before nandini can say anything


He listen the guitar tune n than many small kids came toward her running


(Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Chak De Chak De)
Nandini heart manik's voice n looked toward him standing infront of her holding the guitar n sings n than play the guitar she shocked as she never things that manik sings also


(Chak De Chak De Chak De
Chak De Saare Gham)
Manik than bend down n sings n nandini is just looking at him without blinking her eyes


(Chak De Chak De Chak De
Tere Sang Hai Hum)
Than he sings tapping her nose cutely n get away n leave his guitar


( Hans Ke To Dekh Tu Ek Baar, Khud Hi Aa Jaayegi Phir Bahaar )
Manik sings n gesture her to smile n dance in b/w the kids n nandini just amazed by this side of manik


(Gaa Le Nayee Sargam, Geet Ek Naya Gaa, Aaya Naya Mausam Aaya Din Naya
Chak De Chak De Chak De...Tere Sang Hai Ham )
Manik come close to her face n sings n than peck her cheeks

( Ched De Dhun Vo Aaj Chha Jayein Mastiyan
Chhod De Khul Ke Aaj Lehron Mein Kashtiyan )...(2)
Thokar Mein Masti Ho, Kankar Bhi Jhoomein
Man Bhi Thirak Jaye, Baadal Ko Chume)
he sings holding the front of wheel chair n in whole garden kids were dancing n nandin by seeing this feel so special



( Chak De Chak De Chak De...Tere Sang Hai Ham )
Manik again go b/w the children n dance n now nandini smiles forgetting her all pain n manik feel relief n looked at her



( Sach Hai Ye Bas Ek Baar Milti Hai Zindagi
Karvatein Badalti Hai Pal Pal Ye Zindagi )...(2)
Har Pal Ko Gale Se Hans Ke Laga Le
Pal Pal Mein Chhupi Jo Khushiyan Chura Le
( Chak De Chak De Chak De...Tere Sang Hai Ham )
Than nandini sings n manik feels so happy after seeing her like this happy after so many days but him it's like ages n when she is singing looking toward the children manik get disappeared


(Hans Ke To Dekh Tu Ek Baar, Khud Hi Aa Jaayegi Phir Bahaar )...(2)
Gaa Le Nayee Sargam, Geet Ek Naya Gaa, Aaya Naya Mausam Aaya Din Naya
( Chak De Chak De Chak De...Tere Sang Hai Ham )
And than he come back changing himself in clowm dress up to make her laugh n than he dance infront of her n than she can't control her laugh after seeing him like this she laugh whole heartedly n manik stopped n lost in her laugh n his plan got succeeded finally

Now they were setting in nandini's ward n she is still laughing

"Mani.. u were too.. cute.. like a baby.. "she said b/w her laugh pulling his cheeks n he is only
admiring his baby laugh n it giving him pieces


"I missed u.. so.. much.. baby.."manik suddenly hugs her as he missed his old nandini very much


"I m sorry.. "she said in near to his ear n than he break the hug n both looked deeply into eachother eyes she feel guilty to making him worried for herself


"Sh.. it's okay.."manik said making her shushed


And than move her face upward n their lips touches n than she cubbing his face captured his lips n manik also hold her face n she sucks her upper lips n he sucked her lower lips sowftly n than they entered in eachother mouth their tougue dances with eachother n they were kissing eachother after only some days but them it's ages this is their energy drink only manik know how he live in these days n today his baby ended his craving n herself too.. n both r not willing to leave the kiss but manik forcefully break the kiss becoz she is weak


Nandini try kiss her again by manik stopped her by saying"baby.. plz.. u r weak.."


"Mani.. this my strength plz na.."she said near to his ear n his word effected him n without wasting any more sec. He captured her lips n both again kiss passionately n this kiss was lit bit wild n both r kissing eachother madly forgotting where they r as they r craving for this for so many days


So.. here next part.. the person name will be revealed later on n do.. big comments.. plz.. n if u r liking my story than follow me..




Love Mehak


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Posted: 9 years ago
Who is the person what is manik past why he has so many enemies
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Awsmmm


Finally nandu smiled


Ha ha ha ha ha manik in gown


So sweet cute part


Coun sooon

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