Losing Your Memory~A dark MaNan SS Part4~page 38 NOTE PAGE 44

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LOSING YOUR MEMORY- A DARK SS

Prologue

"Stop it!" Manik yelled. "No, stop!" "What's happening!" I yelled and I saw everyone around drop to their knees, crying in pain as they're hands went to their heads. I looked up at Manik and he had this blank look on his face. His blue eyes were changing literally to white and it worries me. I grabbed onto his shirt "Manik? Manik? What is happening stop it!" I yelled to the shadows that were enchanting something tears sliding my cheek. The chant was going faster and faster I looked at Manik he just looked so blank Suddenly, Manik eyes closed and he fell I dropped to the ground my body ached with pain but I ignored it as I went to Manik and started waking him up "Manik? Manik wake up"

Hours passed but he was unconscious my Manik was laying there lifeless and I couldn't do anything about it when he started groaning and when I went to go next to him, Vikram grabbed me arm, stopping me. A second later Manik opened his eyes he blinked staring up at the ceiling he looked totally confused "Manik?" I questioned and he quickly sat up. I gave him a small smile "Manik" he looked at me "Who are you?" he asked. And my world stopped...

Are you ready for the Journey?

Manik Malhotra- a young handsome Vampire Prince soon to be king

Nandini Malhotra- a beautiful human girl, new vampire, wife of the prince and pregnant with his babies

Vikram Malhotra- king of the shadow coven and father of Manik

Neyonika Malhotra- queen of the coven and mother of Manik

Aryaman- Nandini's friend and a ware wolf

Navya- Nandini's best friend and a vampire

Other characters will come as I proceed...

How will these two survive in this world of darkness with enemies all around when one doesn't even remember the other?


It is a short story Hope you enjoy it

give your views in the form of comments and likes as much as i will get i will update ...


waiting for your review


lots of love

Sehr:)

CHAPTER 1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

NOTE

CHAPTER 4


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Aamikrish thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb prologue.
Interesting plot.
Vampires and werewolves would be a treat.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting plot. Please continue. Waiting for the update.Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Amazing start...
Awesome plot...
Luved it...
And yes keep it short only..
Cant wait...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
Absolutely..nice prologue..vampire and werewolf..these two words really fascinate me..continue soon waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intrest ing yaar...
Cntinue...
New story line...
Vampire. ..
Excited too...
Update fast. ..
Cntinue soon. .
Waiting fr the update. ..
Thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
very much interesting
contii soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Hey nice prolog
Seems its gonna very interesting
Pls update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue:-)
Thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Amazing concept ...i m fond of alpha vampires stories...do continue..u already started with a cliffhanger ,looking forward to it...update soon

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