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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Is it going to be "ja Nandini ja, jeele apni zindagi "?
The update was running like a movie in my head

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Awesome part.
Hope dadi vl accept them

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

guys i am sorry for the late update... but i tgink u all will forgive and will surely like my update... like and comment... waitung for ur precious views... love u all... keep reading...

CHAPTER 26

Dadi with her goons reached the place...

dadi: yeh ladka...

manik amd nandini both turned...

dadi: chod meri nandini ko...

dadi snatches nandini back from manik...

dadi: kinta pyaar karta hai tu meri nandini se...

manik: bahut... apse jyada... khud se jyaad...

dadi: kya kar sakta hai tu mere nandini ke liye...

manik: kuch bhi...

dadi: apni jaan de sakta hai...

manik: looking at nandini... han de saktahuin...

dadi:(took out a gun and handed it to manik)to de apni jaan...

nandini is shocked... and shouts... no manik...

dadi: nandu tu chup kar...

manik le yeh gun or mar apne ap ko...

manik then looked at nandini and then picked up the gun...

and slowly put the gun on his forehead...

nandini:no sir plz... plz... rukh jaiyeye(crying loudly)

manik: agar mein tumahare satth nahi rahsakta... to mera marna hi sahi hai... aur shayad usske bad tumhare dadi ko unkin ho gaye mein tumse kinta pyaar karta huin... bye nandini... agar kismat chahe to mein aur tum zarur milenge...

manik closed his eyes and took his finger to the trigger and slowly he pulls the trigger and a blast...

nandini: closed her eyes and put her hands on her ears...

but to the surprise their was no bullet in the gun...

dadi: issme shrif do hi goli hai... dekhte hai kap tak tu bachta hai... phir se marr...

manik is again ready to shoot...

nandini: bhagwan plz manik sir ko kuch nahi hona chahiye...

dadi is smiling...

manik again pull the trigger and it was a vain...

dadi: acha kismat hai tera... chal marr...

manik again pulled the trigger and nandini is seen doing prayer...

and the third time also manik was saved...

and the fourth time also manik was saved...

dadi: chal chal maar...

nandini:dadi ap jante hai na ki iss bar goli jarur chalegi...

dadi:hn janti huin... yeh tere liye jaan de sakta hai... issine kaha tha... mein to bas usse sabit karne ke liye kahe rahi huin...

manik :aj dadi ap sure ho jayenge ki mein nandini se pyaar karta huin...

again he put the gun in his forehead... and closed his eyes... and pulled the trigger and suddenly nandini was still and looking at the situation as a statue...

and when we looked at the situation the gun has been shot but it dint hit manik... dadi has hold manik's hand and put the gone upwards so that the gun will be shot in to the atmosphere...

manik opened his eyes...

to his shock to see dadi like this...

dadi:de gun mujhe de de...

mujhe sabut mil gaya hai... mujhe ab kuch nahi janana hai kuch nahi sabit karna hai... are jo ladka meri nandu ke liye bina soche samjhe apni jaan dene ko tayar hei woh toh mere nandini ke liye sabse acha jivan satthi hoga...

jayo le jayo nandini ko... yeh tumhare liye bani hai...

manik and nandini are very shocked but also happy with the changed behaviour of dadi...

manik:par dadi hum yahan nahi kahin aur saddi karenge...

aur hamare doston ko bhi bulayenge agar ap razi ho toh...

dadi: are thik hai le ja isse jaha lena hai... mein bhi aawngi...

manik:jarur...

manik and nandini ran towards each other and had atight hug...

precap: history is over... back to present life...

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AMAR_LOVE

@AMAR_LOVE

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

finally they r together...plz cont soon

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chocolate1234

@chocolate1234

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

the update was really good
manik proved his love for nandu
dadi ne toh dara diya
kya test tha manik ke liye
wah
tussi cha gaye
awesome update
but still prolongue uff it is over my head
waiting for the update
manan's wedding maza ayega
tc
update soon
with lots of love and hugs

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

guys here i am with ur update... do like and comment... enjoy the chappy😃😆

CHAPTER 27

now we are in the present... past is over... and every body is still andlooking at manik...

manik:guys khatam ho gaya...

every body distracted...

cabir: bah bah kya love story thi... romeo julliet... jodha akbar... heer ranjha se bhi badi... (in manik ears)bhai mera bhu kuch setting kara dena...

manik: abhi nahi cabir... chup rahe...

aliya: so romantic and sweet love story... loved it manik...

mukti:yah very interesting...

nandini:aur phir hum yahi aa gaye hamare saddi ke liye...

cabir: are dadi kab aa rahi hai... muje unsse milna hai... kitna bhayanak honge woh...

nandini:cabir so mean of u...

manik:ok guys... cholo sone chalte hai... kal sangeet ki practise karna nahi hai kya... ratt ko sangeet hai... bhul gaye...

every body: han han cholo sone chalte... hai...

and everyone went to their respective rooms...

next morning... every one woke up and all the boys were seen decorating the mansion and the girls were ready and were preparing breakfast...

cabir: bhai itne preparation kuin ho raha hai... kaun aa raha hai...

manik: important guests hai bhai...

cabir listening to this went out of the gate when he saw a jip coming from their it would have really hit him in a second... cabir is angry... a old women got off from the jip...

cabir: aaa... andhe ho kya... dikhayi nahi deta... kaise gadi chlate ho... tum jantte nahi ho mein dulha ka dost huin agar mujhe kuch ho jate toh mere bhagwan tumhe kabhi maff nahi karte... i mean my life is very precious...

the old woman is silently listening to cabir when her goons come out...

cabir(little scared)ha... han toh mein tumhre inn gundo se darta nahi hui. tum jante nahi ho ki mein kaun huin... sab dart hai yaha mujhse...

and suddenly the old woman took out a gun and put it on the forehead of cabir...

cabir:(very scared)mein... mein... toh aise hi bol raha tha... baki mein bahut shant baccha huin... mein badon ka bahut samaan karta huin... touching her feet... plz gun upas rakh digiye... apko free mein khana dunga... plz...

old woman called her goons...

old woman: hai uthao re isse...

and all the goons lifted cabir in their hands...

cabir: manik manik... nandini nandini... are bacche ki jaan loge kya... are koi to baccao...

nandini came out and was very happy seeing the old woman...

nandini:dadi... dadi was seeing laughing... nandini ran towards dadi...

dadi: aja meri bacchi...

all are out now and manik toiched the feet of dadi...

dadi:kaise ho manik beta...

manik: bas dadi thik huin...

dadi yeh sab he mere dost... yeh hai mukti(pointing towars mukti)yeh hai aliya(pointing towards aliya)yeh hai navya(pointing towards navya)yeh hai dhruv(pointing towards dhruv)and... are cabir kaha hai...

cabir:mein yaha huin...

dhruv: bahi aawaj toh aa raha hai par kahi dikhayi nahi de raha...

manik:bhai kaha hai tu...

cabir: are manik... ghum ja... manik turned to the back...

cabir:ab upar dekh...

manik looked up...

cabir was in the hand of dadi goons... and they have stretched him up... every one laughed...

Nandini:cabir waha kaha chale gaye tume...

cabir:ae nandini teri dadi bahut dangereous hai... bacche ko koi itna paresaan karta hai kya...

nandini:dadi isse niche utariye yeh hamare dost hai...

dadi:niche uttaro isse...

cabir:hiding before manik... jaaan chuti...

manik:cholo sab ander... aiye dadi... all of them took dadi inside and they had their break fast...

after breakfast...

manik:so jaisa ki ap sab jante hai ki aja raat sangeet hai... so hum group banaynge... mein nandini... dhruv aliya... navya an cabir...

thik hai...

every body said ok...

nandini:guys ap sab ke dance trainer aa gaye hai... so chaliye...

dadi:ek minute... mein bhi nacchungi aja...

cabir:itni buddhi ho gayi hai phir bhi isse nachana hai...

dadi:ky bole tumm...

cabir:ku.. ku... ku... kuchnahi...

manik:fantastic so aja dadi bhi hume join karengi...

nandini:so guys jo sbase best nachega usse meri taraf se ek surprise milega... lets rock today... practise suru kar digiye... meet u all at night...

precap:sangeet ceremony... first dadi...

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chocolate1234

@chocolate1234

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Hahahahaha
Cabir ki band baja barat nikal diya dadi aur Unke gondo ne
Hahahaha cabir ko utha liya it was damn funny yaar
Wow sangeet
Looking forward for dadi's and nandu performance
Awesome update
Update soon
With lots of love and hugs

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Part 26.. Kya khatarnak dadi hai..

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

so guys here is ur sangeet updates..! do like and enjoy... manan sangeet

CHAPTER 28

preparations are over and all are ready...

cabir: so as we know ki aja hamare do favourite doston ki sangeet hai... so jayda late na karake suru karte hai... pehele hai hamare sinior citizen... dadi... aur hum sab ki maaa...

everybody claps and screams... dadi dai dadi... nandini is very excoted to see dadi's performance...

and look at the stage its dadi

Honthon me aisi bat(keeping her fingers on her lips)

Honthon me aisi bat

Mai dabaake chali aayi(seeming like closing her mouth and slowly slipping towards the left)

Khul jaaye wohi bat toh(showing with the hands to open her mouth)

Duhaayi hai duhaayi(pointing towards the audiance)

Ha re ha bat jisame pyar(as done in the song)

Toh hai jaher bhi hai hay

Honthon me aisi bat

Mai dabaake chali aayi

Khul jaaye wohi bat

Toh duhaayi hai duhaayi

afterall dadi performance made a very good starting...

cabir:so iss senior performance ke baad ayegi hamari ag raat ki khas performance... mr manik malhotra and to be mrs malhotra

every body shouts

comeon manik and nandini...

and the performance starts

Zara zara sar se sarakne laga.. mera aasmaan(manik is standind and nandini comes putting her hands up towards the sky)

Dabe dabe paanv nikalne laga.. tera raasta(slowly coming towards manik)

Tumko humara hai, humko tumhara.. waasta(manik takes her closer )

O.. leke ek duje ko baahon mein(hug each other)

Banayein.. apna jahaan

Saamne Hai Savera(nandini stretching her hands towrds the front and manik looking at the direction)

Thoda tera, thoda mera(againg looking at each other)

Haan.. saamne hai savera aa..

Zara zara sar se sarakne laga.. mera aasmaan

cabir comes

cabir: it wasreally amazing... samne hai savera... i love this song... ab cholo age jate hai... ab bari hai hamere dhruv aur aliya ki...

cheer up guys and welcome dhruv and aliya

Bach-kaniyaan, thodi thodi aaj hogi(same asthe song)

Zara bachh ke dikha

Man-maaniyaan, phir bhi nahi chalegi

Chahe hoja tu khafa

Jaana hai toh jaa, tujhe bhi hai pata

Saari raat hogi chedd-khaniyaan

Banda main bachelor, tu kanya kanwari

Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me

Banda main bachelor, tu kanya kanwari

Aaja ho jaaye thoda, lucky tu lucky me

cabir: so iss performance ke bad ayenge navya aur mukti...

mukti: no yaar plz mujhe nahi nachana plz...

nandimi: commom mukti...

cabir:acha rehene do... usse bhi hum ladke hi itna acha dance karte hai ki ladkiyan ke pass stage chod kar bhag jane ke alawa aur koi way hi nahi hai...

nandini: cabir aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...

manik:actually mujhe bhi lagta hai aisa hai...

aliya:tumlogo ke kahena ka kya matlab hai... tum hum se acha nachte hao... aisa ho hi nahi sakta...

dhruv :aisa hi hai...

dadi: chup karo... abhi pata chal gayega khoun acha nachta hai... ho gaue mukabila...

nandini: mukti aj girls ke dance pe saval utha hai... aja nahi haar sakte... aja toh inhe harana hoga...

mukti:ok nandini... cholo...

all boys:han dekhte hai koun jittata hai...

lits offf... and starting with the boys...

Ho.. Badshah hain dil ke(same as the song... a little change)

Aish farmaate hain

Gaadi ke bonnet pe

Peete hain khate hain (x2)

Fitrat apni atpati

Upar se jeans bhi phati

Aur khol ke rakhte

Apni shirt ke button

O kudiya kya nachengi re

Dancing floor ke legend hum

Hai laage latko jhatko se

Hero ke bhi hero hum (x2)

Dance ke legend hain hum

Speaker bole dhum dhum dhum

Main cheez original(and girls starts)

Tu chalu note hai

Tere dance se zyaada

Meri adaa hot hai (x2)

Hey!

Samjho na humko duffer(both boys and girls in pairs)

Hai apna high caliber(girls are trying to ignor the boys)

Baaton se zyada apne moves mein hai dum

Munde kya nachenge re(again th girls)

Dancing floor ke legend hum

Apne latko jhatko se

Speaker bole dhum dhum dhum

O kudiyan kya naachengi re(and now the boys)

Dancing floor ke legend hum

Hai laage latko jhatko se

Hero ke bhi hero hum...

result time...

dadi: ladkiyan aur ladkon ke bich sabse acha nachhe hai...

all are listening quitely...

dadi: ladkiyan... (all the girls got very happy)aur ladke(now all the boys got happy... girls are confused)... dono hai winner... dono hi achha nachte ho...

precap: manan haldi ceremony

coming soon :a very big shocking twist in manan marriage

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

CHAPTER 29

as we know guys... sangeet is over and now is the hatke mehendi and haldi...

at the morning...

cabir has got up and he is holding his brush and mouth freshner and is roming in the haveli...

and now cabir os looking here and there and moving towards the gate...

cabir: kya yaar aj toh koi nahi dikh raha... kya aisa ho sakta hai ki mein jaldi uth gaya huin... nahi nahi earth chahe ulti direction pe ghum sakta hai lekin mein das baje se pehele nahi utth sakta... isiliye toh mein unique huin... par aja koi dikh nahi raha...

cabir put the mouth freshner in his moth and is looking every where and moving towards the gate... as he reacbed the gate unknowly he spouts the mouth freshner and it falls on the dress of a someone... when he looked up he saw the man had dressed up like a pandit...

pandit: tucch manushya... tumne ek punya pandit ko aapavitra kar diya...

cabir: tuccha... what... ho tum ho kaun... aur mein koi amm insan nahi huin... do thapaad lagaunga sari acting bahar aa jayegi...

pandit: tu muje marega... itna sahasa hai... mujhe abhi snana karna hoga... tumne mujhe apavitra kar diye...

cabir: aa bhai bas kar... bas lar tera yeh drama... yaha ek chudel raheti hai... din bhar uski noutanki sunta rahata huin aur nahi aun sakta...

pandit: balak mein tumhe shraap de dunga...

cabir: are baah tum mujhe kuch dene aye ho... mujhe laga ke bikkh mangne aye ho... acha bolo yeh shraap kya chig hai jo app mujhe dena chhati hai... koi sunder see item... i mean ladki hai kya...

pandit: chi mujhe inn moha maya ki koi jarrurat nahi...

cabir:band karo yeh sanskrutik bhasa... jao jao... kisi aur bakre ko dundho...

and suddenly manik comes from the back...

manik:so cabir kya baat kar raha tha insse...

cabir: are kahe ki baat mein inhhe yaha see dhake maar kar bahar nikalana chhata tha...

manik is shocked... manik holds cabir and tell in his ears...

manik:abe tu janta hai yeh koun hai...

cabir: koi garib bhikhari chor...

manik: nahi yaar... issne dadi ji ne bulaya hai saadi ki date fix karne... (cabir showing scary face) aur soch... agar dadini ko pata chala ki tumne aisa kiya toh...

cabir is thinking... in his thought he saw dadi is holding his color and...

dadi: tumhari himaat kaise hui maharaj ji ko aosa bolne ki... tumhari bahe se nandu ke saadi mein badha ayye... ab tum bhi aja ke baad nahi dikhoge

and she takes out her gun and dhoots cabir...

cabir shouts nahi...

manik wakes him up...

cabir after wakeing... falls down on the pandit's feet...

cabir: baba mujhe maaf kardigiye... chahe toh mein apke saab kapde dho dunga par app us chudel... i mean dadi ko kuch matt batana... barna ap isse ghar se jayenge aur mein iss duniya see...

pandit: thik hai baccha... tum mere kapde dhoge...

cabir thinking: are yeh toh saach man gaye... cholo cabir ji bola hai toh karna padhega... cholo cabir ji chhadh jao suli par...

pandit changed the cloths and gave his kurta to clean it...

after sometime every are at the haal...

dadi: ayiye aiye mahadish ji... anne mein koi taklif toh nahi hui na...

padit: nahi... nahi...

dadi: sab aa gaye...

manik: han dadi saab aa gaye...

dadi is searching for someone...

dadi: are manik beta... tumhara woh nalayak... dost nahi dikh raha hai... kaha hai...

manik: woh dho raha hai...

dadi: matbal...

manik: matlab woh aj deer se nahaya issiliye apne kapde dho raha hai...

dadi: kamal hai aja tak toh kabhi kapade dhone ko haath nahi lagaya. ... chodo... mahadish ji... yeh ligiye dono ki kundali... aur achi si saadhi ki date nikaliye...

pandit is searching... he is acting like he is counting something... after few minutes...

pandit: ek hafte baad purnima ki raat hai... ussi din inki saadi ho sakta hai...

all became very happy...

dadi: itne jaldi sari rashma karnne honge... sarri tayari jaldi karni hogi...

mukti: ap chinta maat kijiye dadi ji hum saab he naa...

sab say yes... after dat every body left to their respective rooms...

manik and nandini are alone in the haal...

manik: saadi ki date bhi fix ho gayi... ab ek kiss toh banta hai...

namdini: nahi... abhi nahi...

manik: nandini tumhe meri kasam ek kisss...

nandini brought manik face closer to her and gave him a sweet sweet kiss...

manik was mesmorised and cabir was coming from that side...