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Nidhibansod

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Wowww awesome dear, super duper amazing update,plzzz continue soon

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nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Nice update plz update next part soon plz...take care

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

CHAPTER 20

Nandini has regained her sense...manik is sitting beside her...

Nandini: sir ...

Manik: yes nandini...

Tum utho mat muje bolo...

Nandini: sir i need water..

Manik: ek second ruko...

Manik bring the jug of water and pour it to a glass...

Manik: yeh lo pani...

Nandini drinks water...

Doctors entry...

Doctor: sir she is fine u can take her home...but she is having a vry bad nutrition content...dont give her any oily food...or masale wali kahne se inhe dur rakhiye...

Nandini: wht ...kya useless advice hai...oil or masala nahi hoga khane mein to khane ka maza nahi hai..

Manik: nandini jo doctor ne bola tumhe wohi khana hai...samjhi...

Nandini: yeh bahut galat hai...( nandini with a sad face)

Plot is on manik's house...nandini os asleep...

Manik: nandini utho yeh lo tumhara khana...

Nandini gets up slowly...

Nandini: aj kya hai khane mein...

Nandini shouts seeing the plate...no...

Manik: stop doing drama and eat it...

Nandini: isse...

Now u got a view of the food in the plate...its a salad which nandini hates...

Nandini: muje nahi khana...

Manik: pk ...matt khau...aj tumje aur kuch masale wali cheg nahi milega...

Saying this manik gets out of the room...

Nandini pick up a gazar frm the plate and started crying...

Nandini: god help me...muje nahi kahna...i am not a cow...

SO HOW WAS MY UPDATE ...DO COMMENT AND LET ME KNOW...

AND THANKS GUYS FOR UR PREVIOUS COMMENTS...

Edited by MadhusmitaMm - 9 years ago

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Cooki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

It's amazing update..
Manik is taking care of her...
Salad part was funny...
Thnxx for the pm..
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further parts...

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ROOP0605

@ROOP0605

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

superb

salad, i'm not a cow

hahaha

😆😆😆

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Nidhibansod

@Nidhibansod

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Awww poor nandu,... Superb part tha yaar, ab next part bhi phataphat de do..
Hahaha, sorry jokes a part, take your time dear...
Take care
Love nidhi

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nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Hehehe seriously mujhey nahi khana I'm not cow...hehehe hehehe...continue soon waiting eagerly take care

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MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

CHAPTER- 21

Nandini is sleeping as a cute girl...

Manik: u will be fine soon nandini...telling this he left the room...

After manik left...

Nandini: lagta hai manik sir chale gaye...cholo nandu kitchen mein gayo air Jo man chahe kha lo...yes yes yes...

Nandini happily walks to kitchen...

Nandini reached the kitchen...

Nandini: hmm...kuch na much toh milega...

Manik is standing at the kitchen entry door...

Nandini: as so nice ...halwa ...I love it... cholo cholo jaldi se khalate huin...

Nandini turns around...

Nandini sees manik ...manik is giving a smile...

Nandini: hmm...

Manik: kya chal raga hai...

Nandini: kuch nahi kya chlega...mein toh base hi ghum rahi this...

Manik: acha...kitchen koi ghumne ki jagah hai kya...

Nandini: yeah mera style hai...

Manik:oh...tumhara style...lagta hai an she kitchen lock karke rakhna hoga...

Nandini: what no no no...

And started crying like a kid...

Manik :cholo cholo abhi room mein cholo...mein tumara karele ka juice le kar as raha huin...

Nandini: karele ka juice.,...nahiii...

Nandini quitely move to her room...

Nandini: kuch toh karna yoga...mein karela nahi kha sakta...

Manik arrives...

Manik: common pee lo...

Nandini: sir apko pata hai karela kitana kadwa hai...

Manik: muje pata hai...

Nandini: ap agar piyege toh hi mein piungi...

Manik: OK thin hai mein bhi piunga...

Nandini: what ap piyenge...

Manik: ruko...

Manik goes out and brings a glass of juice for him...

Manik: cholo piyo...

Nandini: pehele app...

Manik: acha ek sath pite hai...

1 2 3...start...

Both of them start drinking the juice...

Nandini: kitna kadwa hai...

Manik is smiling...

Nandini: sir apko kadwa nahi laga...

Manik: nahi bilkol nahi...

Nandini: what kaise...

Manik: kuinki meinne karele ka juice piya hi nahi...it was kaccha mango juice...

Nandini: kya cheating not good sir...

HERE WAS MY UPDATE...SRY FOR THE LATE UPDATES COMMENT AND TELL ME U ALL HAVE FORGIVEN ME AND LIKED MY UPDATE

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nanoNikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Hehehe kaccha mango juice continue

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

CHAPTER 21

Next morning...while manik was getting ready to go to office ...nandini was sitting in the bed and looking at him...

Manik: kya hua ...aise kuin dekh rahe ho...

Nandini: sir ap aja bahut handsome lag rage ho...

Manik: oh sach mein...thanks...

Nandini: so kya mein an Petries kah sakta huin...

Manik: oh tabhi mein sochu ki aja yeah amul butter kuin lagaya ja raha hai...not at all...

Suddenly the servant entered the room and

Servant: sir bahut sare log aye hai...

Suddenly sound comes from the downstairs... An old woman with many goons was standing...

Old women: nandu nandu...

Nandini in the room...

Nandini: dadi ji...oh set...

Telling this nandini ran down...following her manik ran down...

N dadi: nandu idar aa...yahi Sab kar rahi hai tu sahar aa kar...pura khandan ki izat mitti mein mila diya...holding his hand titghtly...

Nandini:(crying)dadi meine kuch nahi kiya...

Manik: plz ap use chod digiye...USSe hurt ho raha hai...she is not well...

N dadi: tu chup rahe...warna yahi tumhara kriya karam kar dungi...

Was he bhi meine nandu me liye rista dhund liya hai...an jaldi she saddi ho gaye...

Nandini: mein nahi jaungi...and nor I will marry...

Dadi taking out gun and pointing to manik...

N dadi: chalegi...ya udadun issue...

Nandini got very worried and see looked at manik and eyelock between them...

Suddenly tears fall from both there eyes...

Nandini: mein jaunigi...plz manik sir ko kuch mat karna ...chod do unhe...

N dadi: an boli na tu...cholo re issue le gayo...

Aur tum ...yeah lo...saddi ka nimantran patra...pohanch Jana saddi mein...

Dadi smiles...

N dadi: cholo re...

Didi holds nandini's hand and force fully take her...while nandini is looking at manik and walking and manik with tears filled eyes looking at him...suddenly song flows in the background...

Mori jaan gayi (mori jaan gayi)
O.. tora khel hua (tora khel hua)
Mujh se main rootha
Mujh mein main toota..

O.. mujh se main rootha
Mujh mein main toota
Mujhko maine ishq wafaa mein
Khud hi hai loota (khud hi hai loota..)

Lut-lut ke.. lut-lut ke..
Jeena hai marna baanke yaar bina

Saaiyaan.. hun main ki karaan
Saaiyaan.. jee laan ya maraan
Saaiyaan.. Rab mujhse khafaa
Saaiyaan.. (x2)

And after that nandini has finally left the place...

Manik sits in her knees...and mean while cabir enters...

Cabir: bahi ab yeah nandini kaha gayi...

Manik was totally silent ...tears rolled down his eyes...

Cabir: bahi are u OK...

Manik: bahi won nandini ko le kar chale gaye...won uske saddi kar denge...

Cabir: muje pehele she hi lagta tha ki tu nandini se pyaar Marta hai...

Manik: but nandini toh mujhse hamesha ke liye due ho gayi hai...

Cabir: mein sure huin ki nandini bhi tumse pyaar karti hai...meine dekha hai usske ankhon mein there liye pyarr...

Manik: its late cabir...

Cabir: it's never late bahi...an yaha devdas banke Rone see acha tu jaa nandini ke village mein...Usse ehesas dila ki who tujhse pyaar karti hai...

Manik:(stands up) tu sahi bol raha hai cabir...mein jaunga nandini ke pas...or usse yeah feel karwa me rahunga ki won shrif mere sath khus rahegi...

Percap: manik will arrive at nandini's village...and will struggle to meet nandini...

If u guys liked the twist ...plz like and comment...the story will be now very much interesting...

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