Manan FF-One Night With My MOnStEr!!(COMPLETED) epilogue-2 pg~122 - Page 17

Originally posted by: s2sultan

loved the update. it was nice for Manik to let Nandani to use his phone to call her mom and friends. I think they should spend small amounts of time together like night walks or playing sports games or something before their one night. wondering if Nandani will be the last girl on the list to spend time with?? also three months is long time. it is unfortunate that she won't be able to attend her classes and graduate with everyone in her class. It would be nice to see Cabir and Mukti join her in the castle. I guess her friends will come in near the end of the journey. very excited to read your next update. will be interesting to see how Manik will try to win Nandani over.

Originally posted by: tas456

Awesome update

Loved it completely

Can't wait for the next part

Tqvm for the pm dear

Will be eagerly waiting for your update

Take care and stay blessed

Originally posted by: roops14

Nice update... When will dey realise their feelings... Waiting l..

Originally posted by: elsaanna

awesome update...

nandini push him. 😆

she misses her friend and mom...manik gives her his phn for call.thts so sweet..

that girl...yucky...thanks to jet..manik's ijjot got saved...

what he said to manik?

plz don't leave forum...u r great writer...

plz continue...take care

Originally posted by: Pravallika69

Hahahha hilarious update
Nandu s jus awesome n too good
She pushed Manik hilarious tat was
Manik jo chahe she s dng all opposite hehehe too good n awesome
Awww Manik have his phone to her
I love nandu mom Cabir n mukti too much they r jus awesome
Lovely dey are
Hehe now wat did Jet tel Manik can't wait for next update
Super awesome dear waiting

Lots of love
Pravallika

Originally posted by: mananneetu

awesome nd hilarious one
just loved it
all the manan moments were my fav
god !! that elise!! she is too much.. 😡
nd i.really like JET ND maniks dad's characters..
looking frward fr nxt parts
plz try to update soon na
just cant wait fr it
thnx fr pm
take care 😃

Originally posted by: ChocolatePie14

AWSOME... LOVED IT... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... LOVE YOU...

Originally posted by: kyaramalhotra

OOMMGG !!! I JUST LOVE UR STORY YAAR,,,,
IT WAS DAMN AWSMMM!!!
YAAAR NANCY SHE IS SOOO COOOL
EVEN HER MOM TOOO HAHAHA LOV HER MOM ,,,U KNO MY MOM IS SAME AS LIKE HER MOM,,,,,,,,,, SUPER COOOL ,,, LOVE U MOM
NANCY AND HER MOM CONVERSATION WAS GREAT AND THAT LINE
''I CAN FLY OVER THERE AND KICK SOME ASS'''
HAHAH THAT WAS AWSM... AND CABIRAA WALA PART "Hello, you've reached the pleasure dome, where your wildest fantasies are our realities. How can we pleasure you today?" THIS ONE IS HILLARIOUS
AND POOR MANIK OOPS PRINCE MANIK,,,,,,, HAWW ELICE KISS HIM I DONT LIKE HER BUT I LOVE UR STORYYY
WOWW NAANCY MOM ND FRENDS ARE COMING WOHOO DAMN EXCITED
LOVE UR STORY
UPDATE SOON

Originally posted by: rizaak7

Awesome