MaNan FS: Bas Itna hai tumse Kehna..(On Hold for sometime) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry guys photos did not uploaded in the story because of some technical network problem.. no pics are not able to b uploaded...Once t get right I'll surely upload it...Anyway u can imagine the casual outfit of Parth which he had wear in Guwahati...Black jacket ,white shirt with jeans..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
I just came across your story
And it is amazing
New concept
Manik is an alien
Waiting for manan meet
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ky2manan

I just came across your story
And it is amazing
New concept
Manik is an alien
Waiting for manan meet
Update soon



Thank u so much [:] & Yeah Manan will meet soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Amazing Story line Plzz Continue & Update soon Dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Loved the storyline
Continue soon...
Please pm me
Keep smiling always 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ottt Teri...Manik is an alien... 😲 Romance King ab earth m LOVE emotion smjh m aya h...!
That's nice...
Nice concept...!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angle123tanha

<font size="3">Ottt Teri...Manik is an alien...😲Romance King ab earth m LOVE emotion smjh m aya h...!</font>

<font size="3">That's nice...</font>
<font size="3">Nice concept...!</font>



Hehehehe I really liked your expression 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

ManRuv reached @ the venue well dressed...Well manik he was looking like a Greek god in Black tuxedo & denims with a white tee ..His hairs were perfectly jelled...



(guys I don't want to give Dhruv's (ullu's) 😡 dress pic )

Everyone in the hall was starring m1st nobody hadn't seen him b4 & 2nd Nobody haven't seen such a handsome hunk in their whole life 😉 (dekhega bhi kaise alien Jo thehra 😉 )

All girls in the hall were starring @ manik...He lil smirked & checked out the hall decor & he found it nice...When a girl came & hugged dhruv calling out baby... He understood that she was his (d) girlfriend Alya...

A: Baby how r u ? After long 2 days we met..Aww how I missed u ...& Who is this handsome guy with u ? I've never seen him b4 ?

D: Arey Arey Arey baby saans toh lo ...1st am f9 & yeah I missed u too ,3rd he is my friend..He is from US & came 1st time in India...So I thought to bring him along with me 😊 Akele akele kya karega aur upr se kisiko janta bhi nehi hai yeh yahan...

A: Oh that's great ..Um..What's his name ?

D: Oops baaton baaton me to bhul hi gaya..his name is manik ..Manik alya my gf & alya my best friend...

A: Oh Manik..Nice name ..Hi am alya ..Alya Saxena (forwarding her hand)

M: Hey Am Manik ..Manik Malhotra... Nice to meet u...I hope u didn't mind I've come here uninvited..

A: Oh no no not at all...Dhruv's friend means my friend...So u r more than welcome...

M: Thanks...😊

D: Arey where is the birthday girl ?

Suddenly a voice came from behind Ask for the devil & the devil is here...

They all turned to that way but there was no one..All gets surprised... Suddenly a girl wearing mask came in front of Dhruv & shouted.

Girl:Bhooo & he got (d) startled...

Then Manik turned & dhruv also turned to that girl..Now they were facing the girl..But which he saw that brought a small cute smile on his already handsome cute sa face ...He just saw that the girl's two big doe eyes



& her pouty lips..As she was wearing a mask...She was smiling hugely due to her smile her eyes started shining & manik was lost...& He started checking her out...



She was wearing a pink one piece frock..it was simple in embroidery but was hot & elegant..Till her mid belly it was stone studded... The dress was Till her mid thigh...He was so stunned seeing her thin hot legs...But when she opened her mask he was bowled...Clean bowled...



Her big doe eyes..Chubby cheek..Small nose..Pouty rosy lips..Thin chin & Long Hairs till her waist ..she was definitely the definition of beauty indeed
...She was smiling hugely...He also smiled with her unknowingly...

D: NANDINI 😡 U scared the shit out of me..

N: hehehehe I wanted that only..After all u r my bff's bf 😉 Thodi masti toh banti hai boss 😉

Manik smiled @ her pj...

D: BTW A very HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO U ...Here is your gift...

He handed over her 3 big box in layer wrapped box...

N: Wow kya hai isme ?

D: Pls do the honour 😊

N:OK..Am so exited...



she exclaimed...

N: Koi vegetables toh nehi hai na 😉 (she winked)

D: Huh..hahaha hasi nehi aya...[:p]

N: Toh hasne ko koun bola ? Chup kr gift dekhne de...

Saying this she opened the wrap..& When she saw the gift her eyes started glittering due to happiness...


(Imagine as if this r a big big boxes of chocolates 😉 )

OMG chocolates 😃 Am so happy...Thank u so much...U know na I love chocolates... Thank u once again 😃

D:My pleasure...OK leave this...Let me introduce...(to nandu) Nandu this Is Manik..Manik Malhotra my friend... He is from London... & (to manik) manik she is Nandini ...Nandini Murthy...She is the birthday girl...

M: Hello 😊 (forwarded his hands for a hand shake (

N: Hey...(she happily took it)

They smiles @ each other...

M: Um..Happy Birthday... Many many happy returns of the day...

N:Thank u 😳

M: U ..U r looking beautifully cute today 😊

N: My pleasure 😳 (she blushed).. B comfortable...

Saying this she strtd leaving but manik stopped her...

M: Nandini actually I've brought something for u as dhruv told me that u kinda like this type of things which am going to give u...Hope u like it...

N: Yeah ..am sure it will be awesome... Vaise bhi I don't differentiate between gifts 😊

M: That's good...

N: Vaise where is my gift 😊 Am kinda exited...

D: Dekha manik told u she is always like this...Gifts ka naam sunte hi ekdum baccho jaisi baan jati hai ..

M: hahaha...

N: Chupkar dhruv k bacche...& y r u laughing give my gift 😉 quickly...

M: Oh sure...

Saying this he called someone & 2 people came from the door holding a big wrapped long box...& put that in front of Nandini... She was shocked to see such a big box...Then manik paid them & they left...

M: All yours ...Open it & see your gift...

She excitedly rubbed her hands palm & started opening the box...When done she was awestruck... It was a big white teddy in her double size... She was very much happy seeing the gift...



(Guys ab yeh maat batana k manik k pass paise kaha se aye...If u have forgotten check the prologue)

M: So liked it 😊

Nandini looked @ him & suddenly hugged him & Manik was stunned...But did hugged her from her waist...Both were feeling peace in each others arms...After sometime both broker the hug & looked away shyly...

D: Wow manik so u had gone outside for this only ?

M: Yes...

FLASHBACK

While he was going to ready for the party a sudden urge of giving a gift to the birthday girl arises in his heart ...He had the money as his leader had arranged it b4 ..Because his leader had a great communications with earth...So he directly went to dhruv & asked him about nandini's likes & dislikes about gifts etc...So dhruv told him that he likes Chocolates & teddy most...But teddy would b very childish so dhruv decided to give her chocolate box...& then manik also decided to give her teddy...So after asking the way to the shop manik left for buying her gift...

FLASHBACK ENDS

N: Thank u so much manik...Awww it's so cute (she hugged the teddy tightly & all smiles @ her childish act) This is the best gift...Thank u very much manik...So FRIENDS...

She forwarded her hand & he happily nodded & shake their hands...

M: FRIENDS...

Dhrulya smiles seeing this new bond which Is growing...

A: Accha enough of this let's cut the cake...Nandu come here & cut the cake...

N: Yeah...Manik let's go...

With one hand she hold the teddy & with other Manik's hand & dragged him with her...

& here manik was smiling like a fool...New FEELINGS were growing...Aag dono taraf se lagrahi hai bosss 😉

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Guys am not happy with the response but still giving it because of those who commented ...& am seriously hell busy...Am not getting enough time...So I think this small part is enough ...If I get good response then a big part is waiting for Friday... Hope u all liked this part...
Thank u people...
Stay blessed...



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazinggg update
Interstnggg story
Nycc gfts
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Areee...jab u cn gv ths much hatke wala prodialoug thn mere reaction bhi toh waisa hi hoga Na...! 😉
Bt
Trust me...it was awsm...& alag one...!
Plzzz
Continue soon...!

Stay happy
TanHa

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