MaNan FS: Bas Itna hai tumse Kehna..(On Hold for sometime)

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[FONT=Times]Bas Itna Hai Tumse Kehna
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Somewhere in some **** planet

Today your training is over..Now u will have to go to the earth..To learn what is emotion..To understand how it feels when u r in love..In whole u will have to research about HUMAN BEINGS FEELINGS... U will research about the word LOVE...Did u get that ?.. a man around his early 45 asked a young handsome man after giving him some knowledge after giving him a (Y m)long 8 month training...

Yes sir,U don't worry..I've learn their languages & had gone through with their talking & lifestyle... said the young man

..Good 😃...Listen don't u dare to behave like an irresponsible man..U r the most responsible person in this planet..That's y am sending u ..Because i trust your honesty..Don't u dare to forget about your MISSION EARTH..Always keep remember you & they are same only the difference is about u & theirs technology.. & MANIK also don't forget you r an ALIEN ..who will go to EARTH to research about human beings...

That person told the young man whose name is Manik...

Yes..I remember.. Don't u worry ..You can trust me..I'll fulfil my duty..Just keep blessing me... Told manik assuring him.

.Yes I know that.&I will..All the best..& keep updating Us..& After someday CABIR might join u their..Also take some needed arrangements which might need u in earth..Like cloths & all..Our planet wearing won't make it up..& Listen u will live there like a human OK ? I mean sorry u r human but not like them.. u will behave like the persons who live in earth instead like us...& U won't have to worry I've made all the arrangements like where u will stay OK ?..I think I had Told u where u will stay right ?..Hadn't I ?..

Yeah..I know where to stay..&Cloths & other arrangements r done..I'll leave for earth after sometime..ByeAll the best..Do well.. ...
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Hey guys this is Priya...Please before u people bash me I am telling u don't kill me for starting a new story as one is ongoing... But sorry guys I'll update the previous one later..This idea was popping me from so long ..So thought to write down.. Hawww manik is a alien 😲 Kya likhdiya ..Humare hero ko hi alien bana dali Maine 😉 Sorry guys if it's confusing..I think it's a different plot in this forum..I tried to make it a unique one..Hope u like this idea guys...Pls do appreciate me if u like it 😉 ..I'll like it anyway 😉 So pls do give your feedbacks.. Be happy..Stay blessed..Love Priya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very unique concept.
Please continue soon.
Waiting to read the entire story.
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Prologue
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Prologue
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kind of very different idea...
I m sure its going to be interesting...
Cont soon...
Thank for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Originally posted by: aarohi_angel98

Kind of very different idea...
I m sure its going to be interesting...
Cont soon...
Thank for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...


Am glad u like it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very soon dear
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Very interesting concept.
Waiting for update...
Thanks for pm.
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Originally posted by: Angel_manan

Very interesting concept.
Waiting for update...
Thanks for pm.



Thank u Purna 😃
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Chapter 1

(Guys I want to change something.. In Prologue I had directly named Manik ...Now I want to change that..It will b Mani7 ..& Manik it will named in this chapter...So don't get confused.. Happy reading )

A tall handsome Man was standing in terrace facing his back ..His hands were in his pocket...He was wearing a different kind of costume..


(Guys imagine manik's face in this 😉 )

He was looking in a direction.. Suddenly a man came & patted his shoulder...

Man:Hey who r u ?

That person turned now He was looking that man..

Man:U r looking different..U don't look like a normal human being...your dress is very different...

Person: Yes u got it right...Am not like a normal human...Am an alien...

Hearing this that man remembered something...

Man:Oh Damn I forgot .. r u MANI7 ?

Person: Yes...& U r Dhruv right ? Dhruv Verdant ? Son of Vikrant Verdant ? The Scientist ?

Dhruv: Yes ...He told me that he had a talk with your leader who has send u here...He had to go London urgently for some work so he let me do the honor to stay & take care of u..But he didn't told me the reason of Your coming...Can u pls tell me for exactly what reason u r here ?

Mani7:We r just like u all..We r also human but different kind..Yours & ours technologies r different...this is the Only the difference between you all & ours...But there is 1 more reason...& that is We have emotions but there r some kind of it which we can feel like we can laugh ,cry etc... We can manage this things but 1 thing we can't manage ..That's because we don't understand that...& that is LOVE...We can't feel this... So y don't we understand that thing & y that thing is beyond our technology I am here to research about it...Only for this reason u people r able to live in this global... I just want to understand it...

D: OK...I got...Mujhse jitna hoga main help karunga OK ..Oops sorry I forgot u don't understand our language.. Sorry I just forgot that am talking with an alien..😉 hahaha

M: hehehe Koi baat nehi..😉

Dhruv got a mild attack...

D: U know Hindi ? 😲 Does people talk Hindi in your planet with English 😲 😉

saying this he starts laughing & M7 was also smiling...

D: Accha OK am ready to help u..But b4 that you will have to change ur get up...Yes you will have to change your dress up ..As you will stay here until your research get over ,you will have to behave like a normal boy...Will u able to do that ?

M: Yeah ..I will...Am here with proper training so don't worry...Only the thing is what kind of outfits people wear here ?

D: Don't bother about that...Dad has arranged all things like your clothes etc..

M: Yeah...

D: OK so come with me...I'll give u your dresses...

M: OK...

After Changing clothes


[Manik's Attire]

D:Owww u look good...You r looking like a handsome stud...

M:Um..yeah I think am not looking that bad...

D:Arey not at all...U r not looking like alien...U r looking handsome dude...Koun kahega k u r an alien ?

M: Tum 😉 hehehe Anyway Thank u...Let's go out ..what's say ?

D:Yeah..of course we will but b4 that I want to change one more thing ...

M:What ?

D:Your name...

M:My name ? what's wrong with that ?

D:It is..Because you r in earth...Where peoples have good nice name..So let me think a name for u OK ? ...um...um..man..mani..(after thinking) ..Yes got it...From now your name will b MANIK..OK ?

M: Manik ?

D: Yeah Only manik...Um..Only manik is not a good option.. I think some surname will match this name...Um..let me think..Manik Verdant ? Nope ..Manik Sarna ? Nope it's sounds like Punjabi...[:p] Manik Saxena? No way yeh toh meri girlfriend ki surname hai ...Um...What about Malhotra ?

M7:Malhotra ? What do u mean by Malhotra?

D: Arey your name..Malhotra will b your surname.. Your full name will b MANIK MALHOTRA... How does it sounds ?

M: yup it's cool...

D:So done..From now as long you r in earth I'll call u manik..So now manik u can go out for your research ...

M: OK..

Saying this he starts getting out but dhruv stopped him in mid...

D: Hey buddy stop...If U don't mind u can come with me...I am going for a party in my gf's best friend's house for her birthday... So u can join me...

M: Me ? How can I join u ? Even I don't know anyone except u..So how can I ?

D: Arey u don't bother about that...I'll cook some thing in my khurrafati mind 😉 Get ready we r going @ 7:00 pm OK ?

M: Yeah OK...

D: Wait am giving u clothes ..U can change in that...

M: Oops I forgot about that 😉 Thank u for reminding me 😉

D:Mention not 😉

They laughed a lil & after getting ready they leave for the party..

Precap: MaNan meet ...
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am not at all happy with the response but a big sorry for u all who liked it..& Also for this short 1...Actually time nehi nikalparahi hu...I shouldn't had posted the prologue..My exams r going to start so am busy preparing that 1...But I am trying..Pls do try to understand... I'll post the next part asap if I get enough response...Sorry if this part dissatisfied u...Manan meet will in next part.. Hope u all can wait ...
Stay blessed...

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