Manan ff - Bad Boy wants me CH 30 updated on PG 135 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ishikaaa

Amazing 👏
I love this ff 😃 ...and nandu's POV was way too hilarious when she met cabir..I was rolling on my room floor 😆
Damm excited for manan's meeting 😉
Update soon ..
And plzz pm me..

in this story nandini will entertain you the most.. And sorry dear.. I cant send you pm..because i use mobile to update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
hey,richa dear..just read your story and must say...it's different..loved it.specially independent nandini Aka cupid assistance..
kabir knows about her every detail...suspense...it's killing me man...plz update soon...waiting for manan meeting...God bless
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
I red the two chapters n liking it very much. Love the story. It's different and most of all, love your writing. It has some kind of a spark in it.

So continue soon. Please n thank you.
Edited by MSIKura - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Awesome update

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update


Waiting for the next part


Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: MSIKura

I red the two chapters n liking it very much. Love the story. It's different and most of all, love your writing. It has some kind of a spark in it.

So continue soon. Please n thank you.

i am glad you liked it..and thanxx for the appreciation..will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: elsaanna


hey,richa dear..just read your story and must say...it's different..loved it.specially independent nandini Aka cupid assistance..

kabir knows about her every detail...suspense...it's killing me man...plz update soon...waiting for manan meeting...God bless

thank you for the lovely comment..will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Awesome update

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update


Waiting for the next part


Update the next part soon

thanxx dear..will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
I am really glad..you guys are liking this story of mine..thank you so much for the lovely comments..so i am here with the next update..

Chapter 3

Recap- nandini saved cabir.. Nandini gets shock of her life that cabir knows about her..cabir and nandini are neighbours..

So here goes next...

I opened the door angrily.. But the next moment my anger vanished and replaced with the shock.. Ohh crap!! I am taking my comment back..i am not going to chop his head.. Because right now most dangerous member of THREE MUKETEERS is standing in front of me.. And may be he is looking drunk..
Ayappa what is he doing here?? I hope he is not here to make me his SPOT..ayappa aaj main kuchh bhul gai thi kya aap ke liye karna..to aap mujhe aisi punishment de rahe ho..but my talk with ayappa got interrupted by one push..he pushed me aside and entered in my flat..
" cabir tu kaha tha kal se..tujhse ek kam nahi hota na?? kaminey.. maine tujhe bola tha to find..but no..you are such a useless" he is speaking to some imaginery cabir whom i cant see.. Before i can say him that he is in wrong flat..he turned around..his steps were very wobbled.. I dont think he can even see clearly..
" cabir.. Yaar teri height ko kya ho gya?? Aur tu waha kyu khada hai??" Ayappa..this guy is mad..wo mujhe cabir samaj raha hai..and how dare he comment about my height..my height is not that short..agar woh kutub minar jitna lamba hai to koi kya kar sakta hai..because of my thoughts..i didnt realise when he came near me and held my hand..
Ohh..no..please dont throw me out of the flat right now..please leave my hand.. I really hope he can read my mind..because i cant speak in front of him anything..
" cabir..i am going to stay here tonight..and why are your hands so soft..aisa lag raha hai maine kisi ladki ka hath pakda hai.."
Because i am a girl.. you idiot..and get out of here..i wanted to yell at him..but i cant do that..otherwise tomorrow .. I will be his target..and i will have to clean his room..
He left my hand and started walking towards my room..just great..now he will hijack my room..i should inform cabir about it..he will handle him..

I rang the doorbell of the chipku cabir 's flat..yes he is chipku.. I still remember how he was being as if i am his long lost friend..
He shouted from inside.." Whoever it is..go away before i kill you.. "
What the hell..evening mein he was showing me all his teeths by smiling at me and now he is threatening to kill a person.. I dont want to die..but i have to do this..ayappa if i will die after this then please mere puppy ko help karna to find a new house..mere friends and family ko happy and safe rakhna..tell them i love you..after my last wish session..i again pressed the doorbell..after exact 30 seconds of my holding breath for any death sentence..cabir opened the door..and exact opposite thing happened from my thoughts..
" nandini..are you ok?? Do you need anything?? " he asked me worriedly..and i was ataring at him as if he had spoken in chinese..
" ya..your friend is in my room??? " i told him stammeringly..and because of that it was sounding like a question more than a sentence..
" my friend?? " he asked me in confusion..
" yes.. Your friend..MANIK..he is drunk..so i think he thought it was your flat." I dont know why but after listening that he panicked..i thought i am the one who should be scared..these two guys are really weird..we entered into my flat and cabir went to my room to check on manik..he came back and his face was showing relief..
"He is sleeping..i hope you dont mind..if he stays tonight here..i mean its impossible to take him back to my flat.." He was looking at me with his hopeful eyes..ofcourse..i wont mind..come on why would i mind..it is not like i have never dealt with bad boys before..badboys roz mere room mein sote hai..it is nothing new..right?( note my sarcasm )but i really love my peaceful life so i am not going to tell him that.." I dont mind??" I tried my best to sound confident but it came out as more like a question..i hope he didnt notice it..he smiled at me..so he didnt notice..or he just ignored it.. He left from my flat after bidding me good night..and i locked my door behind him..
I cant believe..i am still alive or i should say in one piece after meeting two members of the THREE MUSKETEERS. But i am really scared for tomorrow..what will happen when that kutub minar will be awake.. Half an hour ago..i was tired and sleepy..and now here i am thinking how to get rid of these two badboys..
I cant sleep when one bad boy is sleeping in my room..who is bully, arrogant, badass and hot..did i just say hot?? Nandini you really need to sleep..otherwise they will make you crazy..so i slept not so peacefully on the couch of living room..

I am feeling my neck is sore..and i am feeling very uncomfortable..i am feeling back pain also..i really have to change my mattress its really uncomfortable..i sat up and finally i realised i was sleeping on the couch..and suddenly i remembered all the events of last day..
Crap!! I hope he is not in my room still..i walked towards my room and the door is not locked..so i peeked in my room..but i widened my eyes after what i saw.. My puppy is on the bed and licking his face..no..i have to do something..what if he hates dogs..what if he will get angry because of puppy..so i very slowly entered in the room without making any noise..
I reached near the bed and very carefully picked up puppy..i am really feeling like theif in my own house..when i was walking back towards the door..my hand collided with the lamp and because of it i lost my grip on the puppy and it fell from my hand...my poor doggy..but it made noise..wow..so much of not making noise..you cant do anything properly nandini..before i can register what is happening someone pulled me on the bed and pinned me down on it... Manik was hovering over me..my hands were pinned up above my head by him..and suddenly i met with the amazing pair of brown eyes..it was soo deep like a sea.. There was so much depth in it..i felt my self drawning in it..so many emotions were flickering in his eyes..if you blink a once you will miss that..suddenly one emotion finally setteled in his eyes and may be that was relief..and his lips twitched upwards in a small smile..his smile is enchanting..i noticed his sharp jawline..and his mole upward of his upper lip..it was so sexy..suddenly i felt his hand moving towards my hair..finally i realised our position..and started pushing him off me.. he frowned at me and finally got off me..before i can speak a word anything..he asked me.." What are you doing here in my room??" I gave him confused expression..of course i am confused..because it is my room.. Finally realisation downed upon him..but again he asked me stupid question.." This is not my place..where am i?? " may be he is suffering from short term memory loss..i mean it can only explain his stupid questions..i hope he doesnt ask me next that" who am i?? "..my thoughts were broken by him he shook me from my shoulder..
" nandini..why are you standing like a statue..answer me.." He was sounding annoyed..but he also knows my name..i think i am really in danger now..
" this is my flat.." I told him so he can remember last night..but suddenly his expression was changed to anger and he was looking down at my puppy with his murderous glare because he was licking his feet..i quickly picked him up before he can do more damage.." What is he doing in your flat?? I know you never had any pet two days ago..then where that came from?? " he was angrily staring at my puppy.." I found him in lost and found department of college yeasterday" i am annoyed at him..he is so bossy..
" what the hell nandini?? Tum aise hi kisi ko utha k apne ghar nahi la sakti..it can be dangerous..what if he will bite you??" He was shouting at me on top of his voice.. " what is your problem?? I like him so i brought him home with me..unlike you..jo aise hi without permission kisi k ghar me ghus jata hai..isse zyada tum dangerous ho.." I snapped at him..this time not in my mind...but unfortunately on his face..i am regretting every bit of it..because he is glaring at me..nandini murthy..you are gone now..get ready to be punished..but to my surprise he just stormed out of my flat without any word..
Wow..good morning nandini..you are successful in digging your own grave..

Precap - cabir to offer nandini a lift..nandini to meet third member of three musketeers.. Three musketeers to join nandini for lunch break..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome update

Superb update


Manan convo was superb


Fab update


Loved it



Loved the update


Waiting for the next part


Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Awesome loved it..Nandini self talk is funny but I would like her to talk more rather than self talk and finally she did talk to manik..and reading this chapter I guess manik already likes her the way he is concerned about bringing the dog and cabir is fine with manik in her room and both of them seem to know a lot about her loved the first meet of manan and the precap is interesting..can't get enough of the story so please next time long update and can we get regular updates pretty please 😳
Edited by Kuushi - 9 years ago

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