Manan marriage : from arrange to love (chapter 27 - page 64) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
It was awsme.
Loving the way the story is going ahead.
All the best for ur exms
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Can't post images guys.. Need your help.. Plz help me..
I have added a picture see if you can see. Plz help me.
Edited by angle19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
hmm...img is not uploaded..
let me try once more
with different image wt say..
Edited by Drashtiii - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
http://imgur.com/4ldgF07 see I even tried from imgur.. Nthng is happening yaar... Donno.what's wrong... Let's see... Help guys.. Plz..
Ok guys it's finally happening... Now I'll post photos for necessary chapters... And this is our story cover. Tell me.of.like you like it. And next post will be when I'll get 20 likes or 1 full page of comments. Of u want next part early then do fulfill my wish.😉
Edited by angle19 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Hey
for images u can use photobucket app
I also use it
btw story is awesome
loved it
LFTR
I wanna suggest u
the word u used for initial in conversation
for manik nd mukti are same so change it
like
M manik
MU mukti
N nandini
NA navya
C cabir
A alya
D dhruv
MD Manik' Dad
MM Manik' Mom
NM Nandini' Mom
ND Nandini's Dad
R Rishabh
AB abhi

if u want then only
thanks for ur each nd every Pm
take care
keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Chapter -8
Leaving manan behind mukbir and navbhi got settled down on.another table. But it was clearly written on faces of our 2nd lovebirds that they want some time alone. Then mukti and abhi told them to go and spend some.time alone. Thanking them they both also were sitting on another table now. Here on mukbhi and manan's table an awkward silence was there. At manan's because both were hell nervous. And mukbhi because both were desperate to talk to each other. Because they both just started liking each other.

At manan's table

Breaking the silence manik asked

M : Kya logi tum? Tea or coffee or something else.

N : tea. Nandini said still looking down.

Then manik ordered a tea and one coffee for himself.

Again the silence was broken by mAnik

M : hi. I am manik.

N : hii. Nandini.

And again manik was speechless by her voice. But composing himself he said

M : well as you know I am a singer. Well everybody says that I am good singer but it's just that I sing from my heart. Because music is my first love. Other than than music I love my frnz and family. Fab 5 they r my life. They r just like family. If anything wrongs happens with them or my family o can't bear that.

All this whil e nandini was just smiling listening to him. He saw her smiling and felt embressed.

M : I am sorry. Kabse me hi bole ja raha Hu. Tum bhi kuch bolo na.

N : kya bolu?

M : Umm.. Tumhare bare me kuch batao

N : mere bareme? Aisa kuch khas nahi. Bas me interior designer Hu MMC pvt.lim. Me aur baki kuch nahi.meri sirf ek hi bff he navya. Vo meri bahen jaisi hai. Me bhi apani family se bahot pyar karati Hu.

M : hmm..Quite interesting. Tumhari hobbies kya kya hai? Jaisi meri he music music and music...

They both laughed. And then she answered

N : muze sketching karana bahot pasand hai. Aur reading bhi.

By the time waiter came with their order. And then rest of the time there was silence in between them drinking tea and coffee and Ofcourse stealing glances of each other. After sometime manik again broke the silence.

M : Umm..Chale?

In response she just smiled at him. Then they both head towards the rest. They all sat on one table with an ackward silence. They all were sitting when they heard some.boys entering the cafe. They were looking like total spoilt brites. Ignoring them abhi asked

A : Ithink we should leave now. Everyone will be waiting for us.what's say?

C : ha. It's quite late. We should leave now.

Everyone agreed then walked towards exit. When they were about to leave they heard those boys commenting on navniti and mukti. Listening their rant manbirbhi's anger reached to its peak. Manik fisted his hand controlling his anger. His eyes were blood red due to anger. Everyone watched this. Nandini knew about his anger. So she singled abhi and abhi understood the situation he singled mukbir and Cabir kept h's hand on manik shoulder telling him to.control his anger. Buy manik was in no mood to listen any one. He just wanted to go and dig their grave. He started walking towards them but nandini held his hand and shook her head in a NO. Manik looked at her and immediately melted. he stepped back. Everyone was amazed yo see how easily his anger melted but they were also happy that how easily she handled him. When nandini realises whet she did she immediately left his hand and looked down in embressed. No one also teased them as it was not the right time. They all left the cafe but the two poor souls were not able to understand what was happening with them.

Manik's POV

We talked for a bit. Most of the times I was talking and she was just listening hehe.. But when she told her about herself I was just lost in her voice. After some time when we were leaving herd those ba****d speaking I'll about our girls. Bt when the spoke about nandini my anger just reached its peak. I just so wanted to kill them right there. I even stepped ahead ignoring Cabir's plead for doing anything but I wasn't in any mood to listen to him bt something stopped me. I felt someone's shaking hands trying to hold me. I looked back and found nandini holding my hand and saying shaking her head not to go. I looked at her angelic face which was scared and I immediately forgot that I was angry. I stopped. I myself dint know why I did that but I had to. Then when she realised she left my hand being embressed. But actually I liked it. When she held my rightfully I actually liked it.. Ohh God I am smiling?? No no I am blushing... What's wrong with me?? Aahhh... This girl will surely drive me crazy.

Nandini's POV

We talked to each other. Most of the times he was talking and I was enjoying.it. O never felt this with anyone. Anyone who talked about music infront of me will surely receive his gifts for his deeds. Bt when he was talking I actually enjoying. Oh God.. What's wrong with me? Bt When.he were leaving I saw his new side. When the boys spoke ill about me His already rising anger reached its peak. Cabir tried to stop him. But he was not going to listen to them. Then I was a knife kind.of thing with the boys. Now I was worried. Worried for him. No body else noticed the knife. But I was hell scared. What if they attack him? What if something happens to.him? NOOO... My heart almost screamed. I don't know why bt this mere thought scared the shit out of me. I have to stop him anyhow. Then I didn't even realised when my hand reached towards his and I held his hand. He looked at me and I don't know.bt somehow he.looked normal.after sometime. I was suprised because navya already told me that he is very short and high tempered. Bt how his anger melted was not the point at that time. But it melted was the thing. Then I realised what I did and a immediately left his hand...god what he must be thinking about me?? Oh god what's happening to me?

Two poor souls were unknown of theirfeelings for each other..bt one thing was sure that they both were liking this newfound feelings. Let's see what happens next???

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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Amazing update...
wow...manik talk and nadu listen lovingly...
And manik anger melted when nadini held his hand...
lovely ...
when read ur story.. automatically feel that I'm ablart of this sorry ...
thank u for this.
continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Amazing.
Nandani can control manik's anger
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Awesome update
nandini control manik's anger
loved it
waiting for next part
update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Wowooo😃😛awesome awesome superb amazing update plz cont soon thanks for pm😉

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