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parekh71

@parekh71

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Posted: 9 years ago

#841

u r just amazing writer the letter which manik has written was superb even I can felt his pain...plz I want a happy ending...manik deserves forgiveness... but I want a nandini to trouble manik...some what funny...like u write in starting of the story... so plz come up with happy ending and continue soon

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Bijal Shah

@gurl_cool

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Posted: 9 years ago

#842

Gr8 update as always ... I vote happy ending plzzz

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tanyasrivastava

@tanyasrivastava

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#843

Whatever you orignally thought or want to do now ... I'll support your decision. But one request do not give it an open ending I personally hate it

Rest is up to you

😊😃

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#844

Beautiful update..
God..seriously after a long..i really missed this...sachi u complete my day..
Avni..actually beautiful name ..i liked it..
About the ending..I want a happy ending..
But but... before that i want some more comedy parts..like u have given in the beginning..
Like nandini giving him a chance..and during that process..something cute+comedy..
Just a thought..
Rest Totally depends on u..
Loved it.
Cont soon.

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#845

Wt 2 say dear??? U seriously left me speechless.

Uodate was really awesum...luvd it so much...

So much emotional one... Sach mein rula diya tune...

Manik s hell sufferin vidout nandu n avni...

Galathyn realise krne mein der hogyi manik...

U perfectly penned d mental state of manik...

He s vry much lonely... He jst wanna b vid nandu n avni..

Manik's monologue was so suprb...

Naming ceremony was so suprb..nandu's appa dnt wanna manik near nandu nor avni...he s takin revenge...

In one pov he s crct in his way.. But on othr side, he s makin dat pure tiny soul suffer...she needs both hr parents...

Appa deliberately keepin avni away frm manik...

It was really sad..apne bacche ko ek baar gle lagane ke bhi permussion nhi he bechare ko...manik named avni...

Nandu tryin 2 gv avni 2 manik..bt she cnt also b success in dat..

Appa warnin manik 2 stay away frm nandu n avni...

Manik s longing 2 meet avni...such a horrible situations...

Sbse chupake aagya bechara avni ko dekhne...

Dat prts n all was reallu awesum...u penned it perfectly...

Manik s unable 2 ctrl cryin avni...😭😭

Nandu finally confrontin appa...appa wanna make taste manik d pain..but he already suffered a lot na...nw dis revenge shud b stop...ma pov s dat...

manik explain day he didnt do anythng 2 avni..

He s afraid on may b nandu vil misunderstood him...

Manik's letter 2 nandu was spectacular...

Manik poured all his emotions in a single piece if paper..

D intensity in which u expressed it waz splendid dear...

U perfectly expressed it yaar...hopeanik vil get 4gvness soon..

I wanna happy ending...bcz manik sufferef a lot tilk now..

Yeh sach he ki manik past deeds was nt forgvble phir bhi he also shud gt a chance na...

Do continue dear..waitin 4 nxt update...

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#846

hey thanks for the pm...

longg tymmm haan ..but update was long enough to compensate the wait...

loved it...manik was really longing for both his lifelines to come back to him...

u described the Naming ceremony very well...loved it...

nice name...

now dhruv n alya wants to settle down...but her appa hasn't forgive her till now...

i agree with nanduz appa...it's not easy for him to forgive manik...

manik had tears in His eyes seeing avni crying n not being able to stop her from crying... awww that was very cute moment...

that letter part was also very good...

n about the question... yess definitely wants the happy ending because firstly whatever manik did was definitely a big mistake but this was something which he didn't did deliberately he had his past so much clumsy that it makes him do so...

n secondly when a person has realized his mistakes n is ready to do anything to overcome his guilt then he should be given a chance...

n besides all this what is the fault of that little life...why to keep her away from her parents warmth...a child needs both his parents love, care n warmth in his side to grow...

so give a happy ending with happy family bonding..

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88RUPALI

@88RUPALI

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#847

ye b koi puchane ki bat hai,

obviously happy ending yaar

make happy complete family

about update

its awesome

i know manik ne galati ki hai par wo ye punishment deserve nahi karata.

avni ko bi father ka love milana chahiye na. what is her mistake in all this?

nandini have to thik about it

continue soon

dont be late 😊

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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#848

Happy ending plz...

Plz continue soon...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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happyhappy

@happyhappy

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#849

Awesome update dear, want a happy ending n an epilogue full of manan moments. It's shocking hw manik didn't try to meet nandini in 3 weeks, want manik to take some efforts n earn forgiveness from Nandu n her appa...

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nabilaa456

@nabilaa456

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#850

Wow wow wow
Amazing
Truly the way u penned all the emotions were superb
Manik letter made me cry
I truly feel now that Manik has served his punishment and this story should have a happy ending
A ending which will always remain alie in our hearts
I know u can do this
Continent soon
Willl be waiting eagerly

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