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Sciencebuddy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#741

Such a wonderful update ... Way more to come ..

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mickeym

@mickeym

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Posted: 9 years ago

#742

very emotional .. awesome dear 😊

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daddysjaan

@daddysjaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#743

it was scary... literally...I felt lyk m watching it infrnt f mah eyes...it was so painful.. nandini's pain.. manik's situation... his horrified thoughts...his dilemma...every single emotions...I felt
.. it was lyk I was in his place.. its so painful... I was expecting ds...her father vl take her away... nandini wanted to stay...both r in pain...so much pain...
u r en exceptional writer dear...I don't have words to praise you...u r just too too good

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snehmit

@snehmit

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Posted: 9 years ago

#744

you just nailed it gal !! what a beautiful update..every scene, every emotion was so perfect.. you made me cry in this chappy :-( both of them has gone through a lot of pain.. poor manik, he got the biggest punishment of his life..to stay away from his 2 lady love.. but plz now enough of this separation part plz make them together & happy with their princess :-)

luv u lot for ur excellent writing <3 <3

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#745

❤️ ❤️ take those hearts just for you 😆
But now m pittying manik truly but what he did was not forgivable still heart aches of we go back to those past with full of agony but the thing is if we have better&beautiful future ahead why to look name to those painful past which gives nothing but pain so.. love ahead towards the light..

If nandu choose to live with her family I.e manik and their daughter than yeah she should.. afterall manik realised and regrets those painful phase.. and the thing is he want to make everything okk..

As a reader I can never forgive manik, but still nandini needs him.. and the most important thing is realisation matter..

Anyways, cried like hell.. hoping best.. sorry for commenting late..

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Aashna_chawla

@Aashna_chawla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22
❤️ ❤️ take those hearts just for you 😆
But now m pittying manik truly but what he did was not forgivable still heart aches of we go back to those past with full of agony but the thing is if we have better&beautiful future ahead why to look name to those painful past which gives nothing but pain so.. love ahead towards the light..

If nandu choose to live with her family I.e manik and their daughter than yeah she should.. afterall manik realised and regrets those painful phase.. and the thing is he want to make everything okk..

As a reader I can never forgive manik, but still nandini needs him.. and the most important thing is realisation matter..

Anyways, cried like hell.. hoping best.. sorry for commenting late..

hmm seems like now you started showing some mercy on manik 😆 i was waiting for your reaction chlo i like it but promise won't forgive manik until each one of you will say i hope i will make you forgive manik i know it is hard still i will try my best long way to go thanks for the comment 😊