loved it very much
u penned it very beautifully hats off to you
the way u described manan situation was awesome
manik was heart broken seeing nandani in that state bt he don't fall weak infront of her n he stood by her when she needed him the most being her support system
manik's felling being a father was lovely
finally nandani's safe
yeah manik had done some mistakes in past bt nandani's father can see how he stood by her all the time when she needed him most I think he should ask nandani once what she want
loved it very very much
will b wait for next part
keep smiling
stay blessed