#3 Mr Malhotra will see you now MaNan FF Part 28 page~103finalnote 116

Redcrystal

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Nice one

Another awesome update

I liked it

But again suspense

Making your readers glued to the story

Chapter after chapter

Good one

Thanks for a nice and romantic update

Stay blessed

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megha94kumari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#352

nyc update dear... too gd.. update soon

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jashanpreet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#353

Awesome update that was
Manik is so mysterious
Loved it

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Nicky31

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Posted: 9 years ago

#354

Awesome update

Love it

Manik's life is fully with twisters

But Nandani's love n trust on him is remarkable

So now what is next

Pls continue soon

Keep writing stay blessed

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Kuushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update...some happy moments of manan after long..both are scared of the extent of their love for eachother that just the thought of being seperated is unbearable..the reaction of manik when she agreed to move in with him is awesome the smiles and laughter that followed with dhrulya in home and
Before they could enjoy the day there is another trouble another mystery who is the woman he is so scared of who has set his security code and can change it before they could know..a woman of his past that can destroy his present..Nandini said she will wait for manik to open up about his past hope the wait and not knowing his past doesn't create a distance between them with the storm brewing up manik should reveal things to her before it gets too late..waiting for the next chapter please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)

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absnads

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Fab update..

Lovely manan moments after so long...

So soha is the new villian...

Hz she related to manik... I mean she knows all the security passwords n even knows to alter it... She installed it all... So definitely it z not a small relation whatever it was...

Pls continue soon

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aarzooarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

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It was so different from other updates. I loved it was so nice, the convo. And hola again some mystery, jesus. Let's see what ll happen than.

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sanikagokhale

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Posted: 9 years ago

#358

Amazing update!

So beautiful!👏

I loved it!

Really a big fan of the way you pen stories!

Manik and Nandini's heart to heart talk was so beautiful!

Manik's love for Nandini and Nandini's understanding nature is so well potrayed!👏

I loved the entire scene woth Dhruv and Alya too!

And the twist in end got me more excited!

Eagerly waiting for next!

Thanks for the pm dear!

Continue soon..

Take care😃

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sreesri

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Amazing update..

Whoz ds she..

Hwz she related 2 hr..

Waiting 4 d nxt..

Thnkz 4 d pm..

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ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#360

Ab yeh SHE koun hai???
So many mysteries ... Will wait till u unfold
Awesome update
Awww such cute MaNan scenes
Those talks n kisses
Hehhehe aaliya n dhruv teasing them
So cute dhruv n manik's tom n jerry scene
Superb
Thnkz 4 the pm

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