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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohk...
This is interesting...
Nandu confronting manik...
Ehmmm...
Vse agar movie ki heroine hi Mar jaegi to karni me mazak nhi aega..
Soo let's see what has to come in our way of SANAM TERI KASAM...
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Keep writing...
Continue soon...
AVNEET.. (AVI...)
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome and different concept...
loved it...

they love each other ...manik ko nandu ke saath rehna chahiye...itni jaldi haar nahi manni chahiye...

pls update soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
Where r u guys pls update soon na yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
Guys update are coming in a while
Edited by JasShanPari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 1A

It was a stormy night , the trees were clashing,thrashing and writhing around it and dancing in destruction and to compliment the weather , rain also started heavily drenching the two souls who were totally devastated, describing the state of their heart

These two souls were our very own Manik Malhotra and Nandini Murthy who are irrevocably in love with each other.

Manik and Nandini were standing on the cliff. Nandini was on the edge of the cliff and was confronting Manik.

Nandini: Manik I no u love me but the thing is u r not accepting it

She said it in a high pitched voice , anger was clearly visible on her face but there was just not anger ,there was pain in her voice which ached Manik's heart as whatever he says that he don't love her or he can't love her but the truth was different. He loved her loved her with all his heart, mind and soul.
After gathering some courage Manik said

Manik: Nandini tum kyo nahi samjh rahi that we can't be together
Nandini: mein kya samjhu Manik?... Why don't u understand that I love u and I can't live without u

Saying this nandini started crying vigorously and sat on the floor and seeing nandini in this state was last thing Manik wanted. He went forward to console her but seeing manik come to her , she stopped him by showing her hand to him.This broke manik's heart

Manik's pov
Kyo nandini kyon mushkil kar Rahi ho yeh sab mere liye I no u r hurt but this pain is less than the pain u will suffer after being with me. U don't know how much broken I m from inside after seeing u in this state... tumhe aise dekh ke mein hi janta hu how I m controlling myself not to breakdown in front of u...plz aisa mat karo apne sath nandini...plz
End

After stopping Manik, nandini again got up and asked Manik

Nandini: Manik mein tumse aakhiri baar puch Rahi hu u love me or not Aur agar tumne nahi bataya I will jump from here...

Listening this Manik was shocked as how can HIS Nandini can think of leaving him and being away from him and this mere thought shook him to the core and he said

Manik: nandini kya kah rahi ho pagal ho gayi ho kya ...Tumhe pata bhi hai tum kya bol Rahi ho Haan
Nandini: mein janti hu mein kya keh Rahi hu Aur Manik tum mujhe apni baton mein mat phasau just tell me u love me or not..

Manik was totally numb as what he should say if he say that he loves her than the consequences of them being together will hurt her and if he say that he doesn't love her she will jump off the cliff which Manik can't let happen. He was on a cross road, totally trapped but anyhow he can't let her jump so he said

Manik: nandini plz come here we will talk and sought it out
Nandini: no just say yes or no
Manik: nandini u know everything then also u are doing this
Nandini: I don't know anything bus mujhe yeh batao that u love me or not
Manik: nandini plz be mature and think properly
Nandini: no just say yes or no
Manik: accha nandini think about ur dad and ur amms they love u so much...just think yeh sab janne ke baad unko kaise lagega..
Nandini: I know they will be hurt but kam se kam woh uss pain se bach jayenge jo wo mujhe dekh ke hoenge after seeing me living death without u...Aur yeh sab baand karo and tell me yes or no..

Listening this Manik remained quite as he was not knowing what to say but his this gesture made nandini more furious towards him and she warned him

Nandini: Manik I m warning u say fast or else...

Saying this nandini moved more forward to the edge of cliff and seeing this Manik shouted Nandini 's name loudly. Care,concern ,fear all were visible on his face. Listening Manik's loud shout and due to the rain because of which the soil (mud) became slippery made nandini lose her balance and fell off the cliff .

As Nandini fell off the cliff she shouted Manik 's name loudly and this made him run towards her but till the time he reached near the edge , it was already late . Nandini fell off the cliff and because of the dark and stormy weather Manik was not able to see down the cliff clearly. And this made him think that he lost nandini forever.
The mere thought of not having nandini in his life shook him to the core. He broke down then and there only , crying the hell out of him. He was just crying and shouting sitting on the cliff

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Chapter 1B

Manik: NANDINI...Nandini plz ...plz co..come back plz..plz ...I can't ...li..live with out u plz...wapas ajao...I pro...promise mein tumhe sa..sa..sab bata dunga
Plz Yaar I lOVE YOU plz...

He was crying and stammering saying all this . He was feeling like he lost his everything . Nandini was just not his love she was his life, his heartbeat, his soul, she was his EVERYTHING

He was totally broken, he was crying cursing himself not to tell her the truth before just then he felt some weight on his shoulder which made him turn and see who was the person who kept hand on his shoulder. The thing he saw made him speechless and shocked. Actually shocked would be an understatement
There was NANDINI standing in front of him grinning widely covered with mud on her clothes and face . As soon as he saw her he hugged her tightly and started sobbing in nandini's arms. Seeing Manik crying so cutely in her arms she wrapped him in her embrace and started caressing his head.


Nandini: shhh...bas bas I m fine...shh see nothing happened to me

Nandini's pov
Manik bhi na ek dam ek cute se baby ki tarah hai . He 's crying just like a small baby in my arms but I love my this baby. When I fell off the cliff I felt I lost everything I lost My Manik but god is not that cruel, when I fell I held on to the long grass which were erupting from the soil and saved myself . While saving myself I heard Manik yelling my name and crying and this made me understand that he thought I died . I was struggling to come up, when I heard him saying I LOVE YOU which made me so happy and contented.
His words gave me strength to try more harder to save myself. To save myself for him,for his love and most importantly to be with him. And after lot of trying, I succeeded in climbing up the cliff and when I reached up I saw Manik crying sitting on the cliff with his face in his palms . Seeing his vulnerable state I just ran towards him to console him. I just sat down on the cliff to match his height and kept my hand on his shoulder he turned around and just hugged me tightly. It was hurting me but I didn't said anything as I know Manik needs assurance right now that I m still there for him . So I let it be
End

Manik: Nandini...nandini (sobbing badly on her shoulder ) I..i..I knew it tu...tum mu..mujhe aide cho...choor kar na...nahi ja sakti.
Nandini: relax Manik I m here only..shh..bas bas...relax

After sometime, when Manik's breathing became normal , Nandini slowly broke the hug and looked in his eyes lovingly. Seeing in his eyes she could easily figured out what was going in his mind. She moved up a little and kissed all his tears away and bussed his forehead to make him realize that it's not his dream, it's reality. Feeling her touch he just closed his eyes and realized her presence and as soon as he did that he shot open his eyes.


Manik: tum toh wahan se gir Gayi thi na ...And I thought I ...I lost u (being lost somewhere)

Understanding Manik's state, she just smiled and kept looking at him. This annnoyed and confused Manik. Not able to hold more he asked her out of curiosity.

Manik: why are u smiling nandini??...say something are u fine na... Tumhe kahin lagi toh nahi na...Bolo

Not wanting to make Manik more confused and worried she answered smilingly

Nandini: relax Manik I m fine ...mujhe much nahi hua ...dekho

Listening nandini, Manik checked her from head to toe and left his breath which he was holding unknowingly. As soon as he was assured he once again hugged her tightly and nandini happily gave in his arms.
Manik's state was very disturbed by all that which happened few minutes ago. Understanding Manik's state nandini tried to cheer his mood .

Nandini: waise Manik tum jaanna nahi chahoge how I got rescued? Haan

After listening this, Manik broke the hug slowly and looked at her blankly as he got lost in the moment which shooked him a little ago and didn't reply her

Nandini: arre Tumhe yeh ho kya jata hai todhi todhi Der mein tum yeh lost kyun ho jate ho ...agar tumhe nahi jaan na Toh Thik hai I will not tell

Her voice brought him out of trance and he said desperately

Manik: of course tell me how did u saved yourself and why didn't u called me for help
(In an angry tone)
Nandini: arre arre itna gussa...batati hu ...Listen

Then nandini told him everything how she saved herself skipping the part that she listened what he said. As she finished Manik just thank god in his mind for saving her.
Nandini was always a peace and fun loving girl who always love to crack jokes , to make everyone smile so Sensing the atmosphere getting serious nandini thought to lighten it

Nandini: waise tumhe pata hai Manik why I tried so much to climb up Haan
(She said this having a mischievous smile on her face)
Manik: Haan...why not
(In a confused way)
Nandini: jaise hi mein niche giri and held onto to the grass I readily thought to save myself kyunki agar mein Mar jati toh tumse shaadi kon karta and mein Tumhe saari zindagi kuwara nahi dekh sakti

Understanding nandini's mischievous words Manik thought to play along

Manik: tum pagal ho kya...mein kyun kuwara rahunga handsome hu ...paise bhi Thik thak kama leta hu and I m fit in every ways that a girl will fall for me
Nandini: accha ji so you have everything that a girl will fall for hmm... so tell me what do I have that YOU FELL FOR ME

Nandini's words startled Manik to the core. Gathering some courage and recovering from his shock . Manik said stammeringly

Manik: ye...yeh kya ke..keh Rahi h..ho wh..when I sa..said I fe..fell for u
Nandini: Tumhe kya lagta ha I didn't heard u when I fell off the cliff
Manik(in an astonished tone): tum ne suna woh sab
Nandini: of course I heard what u said
Manik : wh..what did..did I say
Nandini: Manik stop being stubborn I heard saying u I LOVE YOU to me

Nandini was totally annoyed with Manik's stubborn behavior that even after the all cliff incident also he didn't budge to tell her the truth. Not ready to confess her his feelings. And to add more fuel to her anger he said

Manik: I didn't said anything u must be hallucinating as the thing u said is what u want to hear
Nandini(in angry tone): shut up Manik...just shut up and speak up the truth u idiot

Seeing nandini's anger Manik understood that there is no escape today. Now he has to confess her every thing but still he tried to convince her once again

Manik: nandini relax tum kya keh rahi ho I don't know what u r talking about
Nandini: so u will not say the truth...Okay then if u will not say then I will definitely jump from this cliff

Saying this , she just started walking towards the edge. Not wanting to lose nandini Manik just held her hand and said

Manik: I LOVE YOU

And that was it nandini turned around in a jiffy and just hugged Manik tightly. The hug was so intense that Manik almost lost his balance but somehow managed to stand still and reply to her hug .

Nandini: I LOVE YOU TOO MANIK...I love you very very much
Manik : I know

He replied casually. They just stood like in that position hugging each other , feeling each other's warmth .


Sorry sorry sorry very sorry! I know we are late but we all three are very busy with our school and exams so couldn't post
But don't worry now we have posted
And we want lots of comments from u all
Thanks for appreciating and liking our story
We are very grateful to u all
This chapter is written by me(Shanhavi) so very sorry for any mistakes as it's my first time
And I m very nervous that whether u people will like it or not so Finger Crossed!
Hope u guys liked it

Lots of love and hugs
Jasmine
Pari
Shanhavi

Edited by JasShanPari - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very short but it was awesome
Don't know what will happen after their confession
It will be good to see both of them struggle to win for their love
And don't worry u have written very well and their were no mistakes
But pls do update soon next time
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. nyc..
Finally both confessed..
What truth is manik hiding..
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved the chappy yaarrr...it was really beautifulll...so nandu saved herself from falling off the cliff...i thought manik will save her...hehehe...bt i loved nandu tricks to make him confess his love for her...i mean...she is stubborn...bt loved the whole update very much...
waiting fr next...
cont. soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
itna chhotu sa
bt its ok
it was vry sweet
want 2 knw bout manik's past
tum logone to ate hi six mardiya hmm
so much real life action n drama
plz cntinue soon
luving it

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