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Chapter 1A
Nandinis pov
I stormed into my apartment while they all followed like silent puppies
Yes they knew I was really pissed this time
Like they think they can do these stupid little antics and get away with it
No way not this time.
I, nandini murthy has had enough.
I could hear harshd whispering
(Manao murthy session start guys)
Cabir: come on yaar nandu humne sorry bola na
Navya; haan nandu ab gussa thuk de
I ignored them
The whole way home they all tried to pacify me
But no im not gonna listen now
Mukti: chill na nandini, it's ok
Nandini: no mukti it is not ok, you can't do this all the time and get away with it.
Mein hamesha tum logo ko maaf karti Hoon but no you guys still carry on
I stood facing my back towards them, I could sense them all telling him to move forward
They know only he can pacify me now.
But I could also sense him rejecting because he knew how pissed I was
Dhruv: kal se na nandu we'll be on time pakka promise.
Alya: haan nandu dhruvs right we'll defo be on time
Pakka walla promise
She pinched her throat to show she really means it.
I started walking towards my room and he spoke
Manik; nandini
I stopped, I had to.
Till today I have always listened to him.
He walked behind nandini, held her from her shoulders and turned her around to face him
He placed his hands on her cheeks and spoke
"Nandini we're all really sorry na, haan look we all admit we shouldn't have partied till late and also we should've been on time to that pakao patels class
Lekin this time na pakka nandu wala promise this was the last time"
He placed his hand on my head which showed that he genuinely meant it.
Manik: right guys
All: haan haan
They all walked towards nandini and surrounded her holding their ears to show they were sorry.
But nandini was nandini she had to teach them a lesson
So she spoke
Nandini; so yoi guys are sorry right
They all nod in agreement
"And kuch bhi karne ke liye tayaar ho" pointing her finger towards them
Harshad: yes whatever you want
Mukti: ditto
Navya: jo tum bolo
Dhruv: anything nandu just say
Alya:haan nandu, anything
Cabir: yes ms murthy bataiye na jo bhi saza ho sar akho pe
Cabir tried his humour but nandini just glared at him which silenced him straightaway.
Manik: nandini just tell us we'll do anything, anything you want
He said holding both her hands in his
Nandini: so fine guys all of you put your phone's in here
She spoke picking up an empty vase from the shelf in her living area
All : WHAT
nandini: kya hua just now yiu guys said kuch bhi and all
So haan this is what I want
Come now fast I don't have time
They all unwillingly did what she wanted after all they had to Manao the angry murthy
Nandini: and yes one more thing guys, aj raat for dinner you're all having daal
And they all growned, except nayva
Navya: kya, Sach mein nandu daal. Yaay i toh love Daal
Nandini: Navya ji, you're not gettin daal, you're getting bengan
Navya: chi chi chi this is not fair nandu
Everyone laughed including nandini this time.
They all had their dinner and the boys left for their apartment to sleep and the girls bid goodnight and left for their rooms. As they had promised to be on time tomorrow so nibhana toh padega na.
That's all for now
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Kanwal x