manan friends forever ff ch 3B updated 22/02/16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys myself kanwal rani

I wanted to write a story based on all the characters.
The concept is based on pure friendship and how they overcome hurdles and obstacles together
Obvs I also wanted to include all the love
and romance between the couples

here it goes

"Kya yaar aj tum sab firse late ho"
I screamed at all 7 of them as they all ran past me into the classroom and settled down.
I followed them in and gave them an angry glare, they just stared at me with aplogetic looks.
Like seriously im not gonna forgive them today they're
gone for sure.

Mr Patel walked in and started maths class. As usual is Patel ne humme itna pakaya class mein.
I tell you guys seriously This is why we have been failing maths for the past 2 years because of this pakao Patel.

Finally the class was now over.

I stormed out not waiting for them because
I knew I wouldn't be able to stay angry with them otherwise.

Oh sorry sorry sorry I forgot to introduce myself
Hi im nandini murthy age 20 and in my final year of space academy
and them 7 idiots whom im pissed of with are my stupid bachpan ke dost
Manik
Mukti
Alya
Dhruv
Cabir
Navya
And harshad

Pichle 3 years se hum space academy mein hain.
We're all studying music which binds us all together
maths and English kyunki hum Baar Baar fail hote hai.

We're all from broken families divorces, difference etc etc. You know what it's like.
Now back to why I'm angry with these idiots
Today they were all late again for pakao Patel class like seriously hamesha they're late for his class only.
Aj se I won't be saving them and today no one can save them from me.


Here's a start should I continue or no
Please to like and comment all feedback is welcome



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abcd00

awesome prlogue...

continue soon


Thanks hun

Will do If I get a good response
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index

Prologue page 1

Chapter 1A page 1

Chapter 1B page 2

Chapter 2 page 3

Chapter 3A page 4

Chapter 3B page 5
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds damn interesting...
Will luv 2 read more...
Plz update soon...
Will b waiting 4 d update...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaan...

Sounds damn interesting...

Will luv 2 read more...
Plz update soon...
Will b waiting 4 d update...
Take care...
Stay blessed...


Finally another comment thanks you and will do x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Even tho I didn't get much of a response im still updating first part of chapter 1
Please do leave some sort of response even if it is just one word
That'll mean alot too

All criticisms are welcome too

Chapter 1A

Nandinis pov

I stormed into my apartment while they all followed like silent puppies
Yes they knew I was really pissed this time
Like they think they can do these stupid little antics and get away with it
No way not this time.
I, nandini murthy has had enough.
I could hear harshd whispering
(Manao murthy session start guys)


Cabir: come on yaar nandu humne sorry bola na

Navya; haan nandu ab gussa thuk de

I ignored them
The whole way home they all tried to pacify me
But no im not gonna listen now

Mukti: chill na nandini, it's ok

Nandini: no mukti it is not ok, you can't do this all the time and get away with it.

Mein hamesha tum logo ko maaf karti Hoon but no you guys still carry on

I stood facing my back towards them, I could sense them all telling him to move forward
They know only he can pacify me now.
But I could also sense him rejecting because he knew how pissed I was

Dhruv: kal se na nandu we'll be on time pakka promise.

Alya: haan nandu dhruvs right we'll defo be on time
Pakka walla promise
She pinched her throat to show she really means it.

I started walking towards my room and he spoke

Manik; nandini

I stopped, I had to.
Till today I have always listened to him.

He walked behind nandini, held her from her shoulders and turned her around to face him
He placed his hands on her cheeks and spoke
"Nandini we're all really sorry na, haan look we all admit we shouldn't have partied till late and also we should've been on time to that pakao patels class
Lekin this time na pakka nandu wala promise this was the last time"
He placed his hand on my head which showed that he genuinely meant it.

Manik: right guys

All: haan haan

They all walked towards nandini and surrounded her holding their ears to show they were sorry.

But nandini was nandini she had to teach them a lesson

So she spoke

Nandini; so yoi guys are sorry right

They all nod in agreement

"And kuch bhi karne ke liye tayaar ho" pointing her finger towards them

Harshad: yes whatever you want

Mukti: ditto

Navya: jo tum bolo

Dhruv: anything nandu just say

Alya:haan nandu, anything

Cabir: yes ms murthy bataiye na jo bhi saza ho sar akho pe

Cabir tried his humour but nandini just glared at him which silenced him straightaway.

Manik: nandini just tell us we'll do anything, anything you want
He said holding both her hands in his

Nandini: so fine guys all of you put your phone's in here
She spoke picking up an empty vase from the shelf in her living area

All : WHAT

nandini: kya hua just now yiu guys said kuch bhi and all
So haan this is what I want
Come now fast I don't have time

They all unwillingly did what she wanted after all they had to Manao the angry murthy

Nandini: and yes one more thing guys, aj raat for dinner you're all having daal

And they all growned, except nayva

Navya: kya, Sach mein nandu daal. Yaay i toh love Daal

Nandini: Navya ji, you're not gettin daal, you're getting bengan

Navya: chi chi chi this is not fair nandu

Everyone laughed including nandini this time.

They all had their dinner and the boys left for their apartment to sleep and the girls bid goodnight and left for their rooms. As they had promised to be on time tomorrow so nibhana toh padega na.





That's all for now
please comment
thank you
Kanwal x
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update...
Luved it...
Luv their friendship...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very short but super cute...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: suraiya77

Awesome update
loved it


Thanks you :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abcd00

Very short but super cute...


Thank you
Will try and update longer next time

It's all very new to me

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