manan friends forever ff ch 3B updated 22/02/16 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Awsmmm


Awsmmm

Socute why manik have a spl place in nans heart

Horrer punishment

New wala nandu

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Chapter 1B
Next morning

Nandini woke and got ready for another day at college.
As usual she knew what was going to happen today.
They all will be late
She will be angry with them
And their Manao session will start.

But when she went into the living room the scene in front of her shocked her
They were all there
And ready for college
It felt like a dream to her
She stood there in shock with her mouth left hanging open.


Cabir walked up to nandini closes get mouth and speaks

"Humne kaha tha na nandini ji, we will be on time today. So here we are all ready waiting for you"

Mukti: so Chale, we're getting late for college.

That was it for nandini, she couldn't control her happiness and as usual her rona dona started.

Alya: arre why you crying, what happened

Nandini: nothing happened, I'm just happy you'll fulfilled yiu promise. I love you guys. Group hug?

And she opened get arms, they jumped onto nandini amd hugged her laughing.

They had their breakfast and left for college

Manik nandini Cabir and Mukti in one car
Navya harshad Alya and dhruv in the other.

As they reached college, they all stepped out walking beside each other towards space entrance.

There stood the principle "stop there all of you" He shouted holding his hand up

"Oh god, whats his problem now" Mukti muttered into Cabir ears.

Kya hua sir nandini started the conversation with princi

"Kya hua" are you really asking me this nandini murthy.
Everyday you fools are late for college and when you do come you're always in some sort of ruckas, yeh ek sophisticated college hai. Not a roadside dhaba. The principal started his rant again nandini thought.

"So this is why I am expelling you 8 for 3 weeks" that gave them all a shock except for nandini and harshad this Is exactly what they needed, their plan was working.


"Wow that's great Sir, it's about time yoi removed the useless students from our college" came a voice from behind the princi.

Oh god it just had to be her. Dhruv rubbed his forehead showing his irritation.

Mukti: listen khurana stay out of this, it's none of your business

Soha: stay outta what vhardan look around you, now this isn't just between you guys and principal, it's now a college affair.

Cabir: so it a college affair right khurana

Soha: of course dhawan

Cabir: well then we should get the whole colleges view on this too.
So who thinks we should get expelled.
No one spoke
And who thinks we should remain in college.
That's when the whole college went crazy and started screaming.

This made Soha angry and I mean very angry.

Principle spoke again
Shut up everyone
Iv made my decision now all of you may leave and I don't wanna see your faces for the next 3 weeks.
Go dissappear now

All of them sat back in their cars left for home
Except for manik who said he'll join them later.

When reaching their apartment, they threw their bags in anger and started their rant, excluding nandini and harshad who were just awaiting for Maniks return.

As time was passing the rest bagan to ask for manik and it was getting difficult for nandini and harshad to cover up.

Mukti: yaar where the hell is manik

Cabir: exactly where is he at this time.

"Main yahan Hoon" came a voice from the door

And the scene shocked all of them once again excluding nandini and harshad who were expecting this only.


I know this is a short update but it was the second half of part one

Chapter two will be longer



Please please please please please please please please please please
Guys do read, like and comment.


All criticisms and insults are also welcome

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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
😊 superb update...interesting..plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Really nice update. ..
Plz sow bond between nandini n manik. ..
Waiting for next update. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Awssmmm

Nice

Super

Wts manik uptp waiting for next

Soha is the villan ahh

Coun sooon

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Chapter 2

Manik dragged two human objects who's faces were covered and threw them in the center of the room.

"Here nandu they're all yours"

Confused and question filled expressions filled the room

Everyone was clueless, what on earth was going on

Nandini smirked and harshad started "guys we'll explain it's a long story but you'll know very soon what's going on, so just relax"
Harshad spoke calming the rest before their 101 questions started.

Nandini walked towards the femanine figure and harshad Walked towards the other.

Together they both removed the masks

"Khuranas"

Fab 4 and Navya were in shock

Manik nandini and harshad obviously knew what they were doing

"What the hell is going on" Soha screamed.
"Tum Hume yaha kyun lye ho" now it Was aryamans turn to rant, how could he not after all he was Soha khuranas brother.
That was their "thing"

Nandini went and picked up a baseball bat that was siting near the front door and walked towards Soha swinging it's around in the air "mein batati Hoon why you a**holes are here"

"Does the name Anju murthy ring any bells"
Nandini spoke standing right opposite Soha.

"Huh, that old hag who lives in banglore and runs a music school, yah she insulted me so we ruined her place"

"Kyun woh tumhari kuch lagti hai kya" aryaman spoke smirking with his tongue in his cheek.
He knew very well who they were to each other, but he also loved testing nandinis patience

But today wasn't his day because nandini was pissed as hell

Manik and harshad grabbed his collers "did any one tell you to speak" manik spat out in anger, manik always found it hard to control his anger and today it was reaching its height as these Khuranas had gone too far this time.

One thing the whole Mumbai city knew about these school kids, who weren't just normal school kids, they were also the "laute varis" of the biggest business tycoons in India

So as it is the media were always at their necks wanting to know about their personal lives

The khuranas were big business rivals of fab 5 and Nh3 parents who are all business partners of the biggest industries all over India.
The khurana couldn't take how successful they were so tried a numerous amount of times to destroy them

Even though they didn't live with their families they still loved them like anything.

Back to the present situation

"Wait guys" Nandini raised her hand up to stop the duo who were about to beat aryaman.

Nandini picked up her baseball bat and "BANG" into sohas legs.

Soha fell to the ground and shrieked in pain.

Nandini kneeled down in front of her "awww Soha baby ko dard hua Tch Tch Tch, hua na, toh apne ladle bhai se kaho apne muh band rake, because every time he speaks you'll have to suffer" Nandini spat out in anger there was no stopping today

"You guys will have to pay for this" aryaman tried to get outta manik and harshads grip.
Nandini hit Soha again on her legs and she screamed even louder in pain this time.

"Looks like you wanna see your sister get beaten up" nandu raised her eyebrow and looked at aryaman who nodded his head in a no.

"Good dog, finally your learning" she giggled and ruffled his hair the way she would to a dog.

She turned towards the rest who stood there still with clueless expressions on their face.

And nandini knew it was time to tell them the truth, yes they will get upset and angry but they have the right to know. So nandini spoke

"So basically guys, last month amz held a musical work shop, the one we missed remember"

They all nodded in afirmation and smiled a little remembering how amz had scolded them all for missing the workshop.

Each and everyone of them loved amz like she was their own

"Well these two ba****d's went to that workshop and insulted amz and jab amz ne indono ko saza diya, they couldn't take it and burnt the whole place down while amz was sleeping inside"

By now the rest were fuming in anger and Maniks and harshads grip tightened on aryaman.
"Amz is still in hospital and is in complete shock due to that incident, she's not talking or willing to meet anyone"

Mukti being mukti was the first to speak and as usual her anger was shown in her words "nandu so much happened and your telling us now, and your letting these to off so lightly, this Soha won't learn her lesson just by hitting her and this aryaman won't either"

She walked and stood between the Khuranas

"Exactly we need to teach them a good lesson" Alya spoke this time

"And that's why we're going to do guys, what does Soha love the most about her self, her legs because dil toh nai hai iske paas to love a human and what does aryaman love more then anything in this world, his pyari si behna right guys"

They all nodded but still confused not knowing what nandini was upto.

Except manik and harshad but now Cabir amd dhruv had understood what she was doing, so they both went and encircled their arms around nandini

"So we're going to hurt what they love the most, Soha ki lambi lambi tange and aryaman ki behn" dhurv said looking at the rest who now understood what nandu wanted to do.
"Our sherni nandu is back with a bang" Cabir added laughing at what his baby sis had planned for the Khuranas

"Manik are you going to allow this to happen, I thought you liked me" Soha started her emotional drama and looked at manik who walked towards nandini and Cabir and dhruv moved giving him space.

"Liked you" manik raised his eyebrow and laughed.

"I only like sorry love one person and one person only, she's standing right beside me, in front of your eyes" He said proudly looking at nandini after placing a soft kiss on her forehead whilst the rest looked at them in awe.

Soha looked at them in shock and utter embarrassment she felt like a h*e had she been flirting with someone else's boyfriend. This was very new to her.




Sorry for not updating for so long

Iv been really busy at work

Here's a little longer update

I'll try to update sooner next time

More manan in the next chapter

im just trying balance all the characters

as the concept is more about friendship between fab
5 and Nh3

So please be a little patient if the mananess isn't satisfying as of now

Please please leave some comments

And im only gonna pm whoever commented because I sent loads of pms last time and only a few commented

Take care guys

Kanwal xx
Edited by pwincess_rani - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Superb update...
Luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm

Awsmmm nandu's beating idea

Lovely friendship

I want to smash soha's face

Lovely part

Wating for more manan

Thanks for the pm

Counsooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
very nice update...
but very short...
update fast
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Chapter 3A
Soha was still staring at manan like she had seen a ghost or an alien

Nandini realised and thought to add fuel to the fire

So she tiptoed on her feet and reached Maniks height and placed a small kiss on his lips
The rest of their friends just stood there staring in awe

Manans relationship was truly an example for them

They adored them like hell and never allowed any differences to come between them

Manik and nandini had been dating ever since they were in High school
It had started of with just a mere liking for one another

Neither of them realised when it had turned into something so serious and deep.

Meanwhile police sirens started to go off
And the Khuranas thought they gonna get help
But they didn't know that nandini had called the them an they were here to arrest them

Nandini wasn't someone to torture another person
She just wanted to teach Soha a lesson which she managed to do.

The khurana left with the cops not forgetting to throw empty threats to nandini and the rest.

They all fell into the sofas sighing and feeling relieved
It had been a long day for them.

"So much bulls**t in one day, too much for me to handle man" Mukti spoke making eveyone giggle

"True but hey its all over and done with now" Harshad spoke and the walked towards nandini and manik who were seated on the sofa in front of them.

He kneeled down near them and spoke "was I able to prove my loyalty to you guys, am I forgiven"

A tear escaped nayvas eyes because she knew what harshad was talking about and where this was going to lead to.

"There's only one person you owe an apology to and that's her" manik said pointing towards Navya who was almost in tears now.

"Haan harshad Maniks right, you failed Navya not us, we supported Navya because you was wrong you came into sohas trap and betrayed the one person who loved you the most" Harshad had tears in his eyes because even though he made so many mistakes his friends never left his side they always showed him the right way.

Manik nudged him in his shoulder "look kyun dehraha hai jaake sorry bol meri Patna wali behn se"

Harshad crawled towards Navya and held his ears "sorry Navya I know ke meri galti bohat bari hai Lekin please let me fix things, please forgive me"

Navya held his hands and bought them down, she wiped his tears and spoke "dost kabhie sorry nai bolte, let's start afresh and Forget the past"

To lighten up the mood nandini offered to make coffee for everyone from behind Cabir and Mukti shouted "bhabiji we want bear no coffee" Mukti and Cabir always saw manik as their older brother who supported them and guided them through the right and wrong, because manan had been in a relationship for so long then would call nandini bhabiji sometimes just to tease her.

Soon eveyone got busy in what they were doing, so manik took the chance to sneak into the kitchen and spend some quality time with his nandu.

Manik walked into the kitchen very slowly making sure nandini doesn't hear him but to his misfortune she did. "Manik I know you're here"

Manik just sighed and encircled his arms around nandinis waist while testing his chin on her shoulder.
"how do you know everytime" He closed his eyes just taking in the peace je was getting.

Nandini was the only peace in his life, ever since nyonika has betrayed manik and his father, manik had lost trust in everyone. But nandini bought that back into his life, ever since nandini came into Maniks life manik felt at peace.

Nandini: manik what are you doing, koi ajayga.
Manik: what koi ajayga, how about when you kissed me in front of everyone
Tum karo toh sahi mein karu toh galat
Wah madam kya logic hai

Nandini turns around slaps manik on his chest showing a little annoyance because she knew manik was teasing her again. "That was just to show Soha nothing else"

Manik: acha it was nothing else, really.
He said while tracing his right hand on Nandinis arm sending shivers down her arm.
"Oye bhabiji coffee banrahi hai ya kuch aur"
Mukti screamed as she was the first one to notice that they still hadn't come back

"Ek tum ho, who keeps saying manik nai, manik abhi nai, manik bhaad mein, and ek hamare dost jo araam se Hume Pyaar nai karne dete"

Manik was clearly irritated because just a little time with nandini meant 101 interferences
Nandini just giggled and told him to move into the living area before the whole gang moves into the kitchen.

Cabir: you two won't spare any place na, har jaga romance.

Manik: kyun tuje jalan horahi hai, there's your girlfriend (signaling towards Navya) go romance her.
Mere Pyaar pe nazar mat daal.

Cabir: arre mein pagal hu kya jo tere Pyaar pe nazar dalunga, after seeing nandini today im scared to even be friends with you man.

Everyone was laughing in the room enjoying Maniks and Cabirs nok jhok it was always a treat to watch, especially after going through so much.

Nandini: guys

Everyone looked up at nandini seeing her serious expression.

Nandini: seeing as we're suspended for 2 weeks let's go out somewhere what say.

Mukti: omg ya let's go

Alya: yeesss it's been so long since we all traveled

Manik: sounds good, let's make a plan then


First of all sorry sorry sorry sorry for not updating for sooo long Iv been extremely busy.

He's a chotu sa update

I promise to update again tomorrow or maybe the day after

Also I promise to update longer and regularly

I know iv got alot of silent readers seeing the views on the thread

Please please please Guys comment karo

It'll mean alot to me

Thank you
Kanwal


Ps; it's not proof read sorry for any mistakes

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