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It was a usual day . Everyone was doing their usual job. Manik was like always sitting in his restaurant with his gang. After some tym nandu came there with a tray of cups in hand.
Dhruv - Oye nandu, aaj ye chai thandi to ni h na kal ki tarah.
Nandu - Ni dhruv bhai. Aaj chai ekdum garam h.
While nandu was serving everyone chai cabir started the conversation.
Cabir - Yaar manik, kuch help kar na. Vo madhubala mujhse bahut gussa ho gyi h.
Abhi - Arey cabir, ab tune kya kar diya.
Cabir - Maine kuch ni kiya. Bas kal m date par thoda sa late ho gya or vo mujhse gussa ho gyi.
Dhruv - Sach bol cabir. Kitna late hua kal tu.
Cabir - Vo main na kal bas 40 minutes late ho gya tha.
With that everyone burst out laughing. They were laughing on the bhulne ki aadat of cabir . But one person was lost in someone's smile. This one person was none other than manik. When he saw nandu laughing he was much lost in it that he was forgotting everything. But just at that moment nandu mistakenly put some tea on abhi 's dress while handing him the cup.
Abhi - Tu andha h kya nandu. Ye garam garam chai meri shirt par gira di.
Nandu - Sorry abhi bhai . Vo galti se gir gyi. ( As manik nd gang r quite popular as lafangey so everyone calls them bhai except to manik as he has warned everyone to call him manik only.)
Abhi - Tujhse roz hi koi galti ho jati h. Dhyan kahan rehta h tera.
Manik - Bas kar na abhi. Galti se hi to giri h chai , tu itna kyu bhadak raha h.
Cabir - Haa abhi chad na. Koi bat ni.
Abhi - Theek h. Is bar tujhe chod raha gu. Agli bar se aisi galti hui na to dekhna kya haal karta hu tera.
Nandu - Ji bhai. Aafe se aisa ni hoga.
Abhi - Achha ab mere sath chal or shirt saaf karne m meri help kar.
Nandu - K...kya main...
Cabir - Yahan nandu tu hi h na. Ja or uski help kar.
Nandu - Ni main ye keh raha tha ki mujhe itna kam hai. Main kaise aau aapke sath. Aap khud hi kar lo na.
With saying this , he left ftom there. Everyone was shocked on this reaction of nandu. As no one has dared to say no to manik nd his frnds.
Dhruv - Ye nandu ne abhi ko mana kiya. Iski himmat kaise hui. Manik isko abhi kam se bahar nikal.
Cabir - Haa yar . Iski akad to badti hi jaa rhi h.
Manik - Shant ho jao tum log. Subah itni bheed rehti h yahan, isliye kam me busy h. Is bat ka itna bawaal macha rhe ho tum log.
Abhi - Manik tujhe ho kya gaya h. Hamesha us nandu ki side leta hai. Kabhi bhi uski galti hone par b kisi ko use kuch bolne kyu ni deta.
Manik - Kuch ni hua mujhe. Tum log hmesha uske peeche kyu pade rehte ho.
After this, manik left . He was so much frustated. He also dont know what is happening with him. He came to his room nd started thinking tht why he is always lost after seeing nandu. Why is he not able to hear a word against him.
He dont want to let his feeling come true. He just hoping that his feeling are normal.
After sometym cabir, dhruv md abhi came to his room nd found him tensed. They also dont like their friend in this situation.
Cabir - Kya hua manik. Tu itna pareshan kyu h. Tu us nandu ki vajah se pareshan hai kya.
Dhruv - Haa cabir. Jabse ye nandu aaya h na tabse manik khoya khoya rehta h.
Abhi - Haa manik, tune hi sir chada rakha h use. Uski galti k bad b use kuch ni bolta. Is bar to hum use chodenge ni.
Manik(who is irritated by now)- Chup ho jao tum sab. Yahan main itna pareshan hu or tum log mujhse bat karne ki jagah khud hi mujhe pareshan kar rhe ho.
Dhruv - Okk okk. Manik tu gussa mat kar. Tu baith or bta hume kya problem h.
Manik - okk. Guys , kya tum logon k sath kabhi aisa hua h ki tum kisi insan se milte hi baki sab bhul jao. Sirf us insan k sath rehna chaho. Usko dekhkar tumhare dil ko sukoon mil jaata ho.
Cabir - bas bas manik. Tu ye itni filmy baatein kyu kar rha h. Mere sath aisa sirf tabhi hota h jab m meri gf k sath hu.
Dhruv - Mere sath b tabhi hota h jab main meri gf k sath hota hu. Usko dekhkar mere dil ko sukoon milta h.
Abhi - Mere sath b tabhi hota h.
Manij - Yar tum log samajh kyu ni rhe. Zaroori thode h na h ki m pyaar ki bat kar rha hu. M sirf puch rha hu ki general m is feeling ko kya bolte h.
Dhruv - Manik ye general m kya hota h. Is feeling ko har tarah se hi pyar bolte h.
Cabir - Dhruv sahi bol rha h. Ye feeling ishq, pyar , mohabbat hi hoti h.
Abhi - Matlab humara manik ab majnu manik banne wala h.
Manik - Tum log samajh ni rhe .
Cabir - Hum to samajh gye manik. Tu nhi samajh rha. Tu ye bta ki kisko dekhkar tujhe ye feel hota h.
Manik - Vo mu...mujhe ye...ye...
Dhruv - Tu itna atak kyu rha h manik. Tu hume kuch b bol sakta h. Tujhe pta h na.
Manik(after taking a deep breath) - Vo mu...mujhe nandu ko dekhkar ye feel hota h.
All three of them start laughing like mads. They were not able to stop their laughter.
Manik - Chup ho jao , tum sab. M isliye tum logon ko btana ni chahta tha.
Cabir - Manik beta, pyar andha hota h par itna b ni hota ki ladke or ladki m antar na kar sake.
Dhruv - Haa manik, tujhe pta b h tu kya bol rha h.
Manik - Main vo h bol rha hu jo main uske pas hote waqt feel karta hu.
Now cabir, dhruv nd abhi are serious. They r also tensed. They know tht if his feelings r true nd it will cause a big problem to them.
Cabir - Manik, tu tension mat le. Ho sakta h ki sach me tujhe nandu ki parwaah ho ek dost jaise, ek humdard jaise. Isliye tujhe ye lag raha ho.
Manik - Pta ni , kta ho rha h mere sath.
After some tym manik left for his resaurant. Whole day he was there stealing glances of nandu. The way he talked with customers with love, got confused when he has to serve more than one customers, smiling on jokes of customers. Manik was all lost in nandu.
Now, it was tym to shut restaurant. All workers had already left for their houses nd nandu used to sleep in restaurant only. Manik was luking for nandu as he hasnt seen him from last half an hour. He was feeling restless . Atlast he found him standing at terrace with tears on cheeks. At that moment manik's whole world come upside down. He went near nandu nd wiped tears.
Manik - (cupping nandu's face) Arey tujhe kya hua. Kyu ro rha h ? Kisi ne kuch bola kya. Mujhe bata.
Nandu - Nhi manik, kisi ne kuch ni bola. Vo bas maa papa ki yad aa gyi.
After listening this manik's eyes was also moist. He has so much pain with himself for years nd never shown to anyone. But now he wanted to tell it to someone .
Manik - Tujhe pta h nandu jab main do saal ka tha na tab mere maa baap mujhe ek mandir ki seediyon par chod gye.
Nandu who has till now controlled the emotions was shocked. Nandu has no idea that the person who shows himself so brave nd carefree has suffered so much. This news got tears in nandu's eyes too. Nd nandu just hugged manik tightly. As soon as nandu hugged him a thousand volt current passed through their bodies. Both were feeling at peace.
Manik - Pta hai nandu, jab main chota tha na to dusre bachho ko unke maa papa k sath dekhkar bahut rota tha. Phir mujhe cabir, dhruv or abhi mile. Vo b meri tarah akele the. Hum charo bachpan me sath me choti choti dukaano par kam karte the or apna pet bharte the. Hmara dhyaan rakhne wala koi ni tha. Hum hi ek dusre ka dhyan rakhte the. Phir humne paise bacha kar yahan ek chai ki dukaan kholi or aaj usi dukaan ko ek restaurant banaya. Aaj jab jaib(pocket) me paisa hai par aisa koi ni hai jo mujhe pyar jar sake. Jo mera ghar par intezar kare, meri khushi me khush ho ormere dard me mujhe sambhale. Par zindagi me sab kuch hmari marzi se ni hota.
Nandu - Manik, aap plzzz aise dukhi mat ho. Main hu aapke sath humesha.
Manik nd nandu were hugging each other for a long tym. After some tym nandu realised their position nd broke the hug. Both were embaressed nd were not able to look in each other's eyes. Manik left from there not making situation more awkward. Nandu also went
downstairs nd slept thinking about manik nd the 180 degree turn of life. It was just 2 months ago, when nandu's life has everything nd now there is nothing . Now there are only hardships, troubles in life.
Again a new morning started, but the difference is only that this day is gonna be a upside down in manik nd nandu's life.
Manik was at his home thinking about the last night encounter with nandu. Now he also knew that there is something between him nd nandu. He was also confused whether he should tell nandu about it or not. Manik was lost in all these thoughts when suddenly abhi came running nd was looking horrified.
Abhi - Manik vo harshad...
Manik( he bcame furious by listening harshad's name)- Is bar kya kiya us harshad ne.
Abhi - Vo harshad nandu ko zabardasti apne sath lekar jaa raha hai.
Manik was numb listening this . He was not able to understand the link between harshad nd nandu. But he knew that he has to do something. He just ran to his restaurant nd what he saw was enough to boil his blood . Harshad was dragging nandu out of his room nd dhruv nd cabir were lying there unconsious. There was no one else other than them as it was quite early nd other workers havnt came till tht time.
Manik punched hard on harshad's face. Manik has lost his senses after watching tht scenerio. His frnds were lying there nd nandu was struggling in the grip of harshad.
Manij - Teri himmat kaise hui harshad mere doston ko hath lagane ki. Or nandu ko kahan lekar jaa rha h tu.
Harshad - Manik dekh mere raste mai mat aa. Ye jise tum sab log nandu bolte ho na vo nandini hai. Ladki hai ye.
Manik and abhi were shocked now. They have never imagined that nandu is a girl.
Abhi - Kya bol raha hai tu harshad.
Harshad - Sahi bol raha hu main. Manik mujhe bas ye ladki de de or main kabhi rere mamle mai bolunga.
Listening that manik started beating harshad. He beated black nd blue out of him.
Manik - Sochna bhi mat harshad ki main tujhe ise yahan se le jaane dunga. Ab tu nikal yahan se varna zinda ni bachega.
Harshad - Manik tu mujhse oanga mat le. Mujhe le jaane de is ladki ko varna tere liye achha ni hoga.
Manik - Agar tu abhi yahan se nhi gya na to achha tere liye nhi higa harshad.
Harshad - Abhi to mai jaa raha hu manik lekin vapas aakar is ladki ko apne sath lekar jaunga.
Harshad left after this. Manik looked at nandu(or u can say nandini). She was so much frightened with this incident that she was shivering. Manik nd abhi took nandini to their home with cabir nd dhruv. Cabir nd dhruv gained consiousness nd after that abhi tild them everything about incident. They were also shocked.
Nandini was sitting in manik's room. After some tym manik came with a glass of water nd made nandini drink it.
Manik - Tum tension mat lo nandini. Vo harshad tumhe kabhi apne sath nhi lekar jaa paega.
Listening this nandini hugged manik tightly. He also hugged her tightly. Finally nandini was feeling at peace. After some tym when nandini became normal manik broke hug nd made her sit.
Manik - Tum yahan kaise pahunchi nandini or vo harshad tumhe kaise jaanta hai.
Nandini - Vo ma...manik...
Hola people, i m back with the first chapter.
Vaise to i know its not up to the mark nd complete crap with very less manan. But trust me next part is gonna full of manan nd some past story.
Thanxxx a lot to those people who liked nd commented on prolouge.
Agar ye part b achha laga ho to plzzz hit like nd comment.
Or agar achha na laga ho to sorry from my side.
Take care
byeee
It was a usual day . Everyone was doing their usual job. Manik was like always sitting in his restaurant with his gang. After some tym nandu came there with a tray of cups in hand.
Dhruv - Oye nandu, aaj ye chai thandi to ni h na kal ki tarah.
Nandu - Ni dhruv bhai. Aaj chai ekdum garam h.
While nandu was serving everyone chai cabir started the conversation.
Cabir - Yaar manik, kuch help kar na. Vo madhubala mujhse bahut gussa ho gyi h.
Abhi - Arey cabir, ab tune kya kar diya.
Cabir - Maine kuch ni kiya. Bas kal m date par thoda sa late ho gya or vo mujhse gussa ho gyi.
Dhruv - Sach bol cabir. Kitna late hua kal tu.
Cabir - Vo main na kal bas 40 minutes late ho gya tha.
With that everyone burst out laughing. They were laughing on the bhulne ki aadat of cabir . But one person was lost in someone's smile. This one person was none other than manik. When he saw nandu laughing he was much lost in it that he was forgotting everything. But just at that moment nandu mistakenly put some tea on abhi 's dress while handing him the cup.
Abhi - Tu andha h kya nandu. Ye garam garam chai meri shirt par gira di.
Nandu - Sorry abhi bhai . Vo galti se gir gyi. ( As manik nd gang r quite popular as lafangey so everyone calls them bhai except to manik as he has warned everyone to call him manik only.)
Abhi - Tujhse roz hi koi galti ho jati h. Dhyan kahan rehta h tera.
Manik - Bas kar na abhi. Galti se hi to giri h chai , tu itna kyu bhadak raha h.
Cabir - Haa abhi chad na. Koi bat ni.
Abhi - Theek h. Is bar tujhe chod raha gu. Agli bar se aisi galti hui na to dekhna kya haal karta hu tera.
Nandu - Ji bhai. Aafe se aisa ni hoga.
Abhi - Achha ab mere sath chal or shirt saaf karne m meri help kar.
Nandu - K...kya main...
Cabir - Yahan nandu tu hi h na. Ja or uski help kar.
Nandu - Ni main ye keh raha tha ki mujhe itna kam hai. Main kaise aau aapke sath. Aap khud hi kar lo na.
With saying this , he left ftom there. Everyone was shocked on this reaction of nandu. As no one has dared to say no to manik nd his frnds.
Dhruv - Ye nandu ne abhi ko mana kiya. Iski himmat kaise hui. Manik isko abhi kam se bahar nikal.
Cabir - Haa yar . Iski akad to badti hi jaa rhi h.
Manik - Shant ho jao tum log. Subah itni bheed rehti h yahan, isliye kam me busy h. Is bat ka itna bawaal macha rhe ho tum log.
Abhi - Manik tujhe ho kya gaya h. Hamesha us nandu ki side leta hai. Kabhi bhi uski galti hone par b kisi ko use kuch bolne kyu ni deta.
Manik - Kuch ni hua mujhe. Tum log hmesha uske peeche kyu pade rehte ho.
After this, manik left . He was so much frustated. He also dont know what is happening with him. He came to his room nd started thinking tht why he is always lost after seeing nandu. Why is he not able to hear a word against him.
He dont want to let his feeling come true. He just hoping that his feeling are normal.
After sometym cabir, dhruv md abhi came to his room nd found him tensed. They also dont like their friend in this situation.
Cabir - Kya hua manik. Tu itna pareshan kyu h. Tu us nandu ki vajah se pareshan hai kya.
Dhruv - Haa cabir. Jabse ye nandu aaya h na tabse manik khoya khoya rehta h.
Abhi - Haa manik, tune hi sir chada rakha h use. Uski galti k bad b use kuch ni bolta. Is bar to hum use chodenge ni.
Manik(who is irritated by now)- Chup ho jao tum sab. Yahan main itna pareshan hu or tum log mujhse bat karne ki jagah khud hi mujhe pareshan kar rhe ho.
Dhruv - Okk okk. Manik tu gussa mat kar. Tu baith or bta hume kya problem h.
Manik - okk. Guys , kya tum logon k sath kabhi aisa hua h ki tum kisi insan se milte hi baki sab bhul jao. Sirf us insan k sath rehna chaho. Usko dekhkar tumhare dil ko sukoon mil jaata ho.
Cabir - bas bas manik. Tu ye itni filmy baatein kyu kar rha h. Mere sath aisa sirf tabhi hota h jab m meri gf k sath hu.
Dhruv - Mere sath b tabhi hota h jab main meri gf k sath hota hu. Usko dekhkar mere dil ko sukoon milta h.
Abhi - Mere sath b tabhi hota h.
Manij - Yar tum log samajh kyu ni rhe. Zaroori thode h na h ki m pyaar ki bat kar rha hu. M sirf puch rha hu ki general m is feeling ko kya bolte h.
Dhruv - Manik ye general m kya hota h. Is feeling ko har tarah se hi pyar bolte h.
Cabir - Dhruv sahi bol rha h. Ye feeling ishq, pyar , mohabbat hi hoti h.
Abhi - Matlab humara manik ab majnu manik banne wala h.
Manik - Tum log samajh ni rhe .
Cabir - Hum to samajh gye manik. Tu nhi samajh rha. Tu ye bta ki kisko dekhkar tujhe ye feel hota h.
Manik - Vo mu...mujhe ye...ye...
Dhruv - Tu itna atak kyu rha h manik. Tu hume kuch b bol sakta h. Tujhe pta h na.
Manik(after taking a deep breath) - Vo mu...mujhe nandu ko dekhkar ye feel hota h.
All three of them start laughing like mads. They were not able to stop their laughter.
Manik - Chup ho jao , tum sab. M isliye tum logon ko btana ni chahta tha.
Cabir - Manik beta, pyar andha hota h par itna b ni hota ki ladke or ladki m antar na kar sake.
Dhruv - Haa manik, tujhe pta b h tu kya bol rha h.
Manik - Main vo h bol rha hu jo main uske pas hote waqt feel karta hu.
Now cabir, dhruv nd abhi are serious. They r also tensed. They know tht if his feelings r true nd it will cause a big problem to them.
Cabir - Manik, tu tension mat le. Ho sakta h ki sach me tujhe nandu ki parwaah ho ek dost jaise, ek humdard jaise. Isliye tujhe ye lag raha ho.
Manik - Pta ni , kta ho rha h mere sath.
After some tym manik left for his resaurant. Whole day he was there stealing glances of nandu. The way he talked with customers with love, got confused when he has to serve more than one customers, smiling on jokes of customers. Manik was all lost in nandu.
Now, it was tym to shut restaurant. All workers had already left for their houses nd nandu used to sleep in restaurant only. Manik was luking for nandu as he hasnt seen him from last half an hour. He was feeling restless . Atlast he found him standing at terrace with tears on cheeks. At that moment manik's whole world come upside down. He went near nandu nd wiped tears.
Manik - (cupping nandu's face) Arey tujhe kya hua. Kyu ro rha h ? Kisi ne kuch bola kya. Mujhe bata.
Nandu - Nhi manik, kisi ne kuch ni bola. Vo bas maa papa ki yad aa gyi.
After listening this manik's eyes was also moist. He has so much pain with himself for years nd never shown to anyone. But now he wanted to tell it to someone .
Manik - Tujhe pta h nandu jab main do saal ka tha na tab mere maa baap mujhe ek mandir ki seediyon par chod gye.
Nandu who has till now controlled the emotions was shocked. Nandu has no idea that the person who shows himself so brave nd carefree has suffered so much. This news got tears in nandu's eyes too. Nd nandu just hugged manik tightly. As soon as nandu hugged him a thousand volt current passed through their bodies. Both were feeling at peace.
Manik - Pta hai nandu, jab main chota tha na to dusre bachho ko unke maa papa k sath dekhkar bahut rota tha. Phir mujhe cabir, dhruv or abhi mile. Vo b meri tarah akele the. Hum charo bachpan me sath me choti choti dukaano par kam karte the or apna pet bharte the. Hmara dhyaan rakhne wala koi ni tha. Hum hi ek dusre ka dhyan rakhte the. Phir humne paise bacha kar yahan ek chai ki dukaan kholi or aaj usi dukaan ko ek restaurant banaya. Aaj jab jaib(pocket) me paisa hai par aisa koi ni hai jo mujhe pyar jar sake. Jo mera ghar par intezar kare, meri khushi me khush ho ormere dard me mujhe sambhale. Par zindagi me sab kuch hmari marzi se ni hota.
Nandu - Manik, aap plzzz aise dukhi mat ho. Main hu aapke sath humesha.
Manik nd nandu were hugging each other for a long tym. After some tym nandu realised their position nd broke the hug. Both were embaressed nd were not able to look in each other's eyes. Manik left from there not making situation more awkward. Nandu also went
downstairs nd slept thinking about manik nd the 180 degree turn of life. It was just 2 months ago, when nandu's life has everything nd now there is nothing . Now there are only hardships, troubles in life.
Again a new morning started, but the difference is only that this day is gonna be a upside down in manik nd nandu's life.
Manik was at his home thinking about the last night encounter with nandu. Now he also knew that there is something between him nd nandu. He was also confused whether he should tell nandu about it or not. Manik was lost in all these thoughts when suddenly abhi came running nd was looking horrified.
Abhi - Manik vo harshad...
Manik( he bcame furious by listening harshad's name)- Is bar kya kiya us harshad ne.
Abhi - Vo harshad nandu ko zabardasti apne sath lekar jaa raha hai.
Manik was numb listening this . He was not able to understand the link between harshad nd nandu. But he knew that he has to do something. He just ran to his restaurant nd what he saw was enough to boil his blood . Harshad was dragging nandu out of his room nd dhruv nd cabir were lying there unconsious. There was no one else other than them as it was quite early nd other workers havnt came till tht time.
Manik punched hard on harshad's face. Manik has lost his senses after watching tht scenerio. His frnds were lying there nd nandu was struggling in the grip of harshad.
Manij - Teri himmat kaise hui harshad mere doston ko hath lagane ki. Or nandu ko kahan lekar jaa rha h tu.
Harshad - Manik dekh mere raste mai mat aa. Ye jise tum sab log nandu bolte ho na vo nandini hai. Ladki hai ye.
Manik and abhi were shocked now. They have never imagined that nandu is a girl.
Abhi - Kya bol raha hai tu harshad.
Harshad - Sahi bol raha hu main. Manik mujhe bas ye ladki de de or main kabhi rere mamle mai bolunga.
Listening that manik started beating harshad. He beated black nd blue out of him.
Manik - Sochna bhi mat harshad ki main tujhe ise yahan se le jaane dunga. Ab tu nikal yahan se varna zinda ni bachega.
Harshad - Manik tu mujhse oanga mat le. Mujhe le jaane de is ladki ko varna tere liye achha ni hoga.
Manik - Agar tu abhi yahan se nhi gya na to achha tere liye nhi higa harshad.
Harshad - Abhi to mai jaa raha hu manik lekin vapas aakar is ladki ko apne sath lekar jaunga.
Harshad left after this. Manik looked at nandu(or u can say nandini). She was so much frightened with this incident that she was shivering. Manik nd abhi took nandini to their home with cabir nd dhruv. Cabir nd dhruv gained consiousness nd after that abhi tild them everything about incident. They were also shocked.
Nandini was sitting in manik's room. After some tym manik came with a glass of water nd made nandini drink it.
Manik - Tum tension mat lo nandini. Vo harshad tumhe kabhi apne sath nhi lekar jaa paega.
Listening this nandini hugged manik tightly. He also hugged her tightly. Finally nandini was feeling at peace. After some tym when nandini became normal manik broke hug nd made her sit.
Manik - Tum yahan kaise pahunchi nandini or vo harshad tumhe kaise jaanta hai.
Nandini - Vo ma...manik...
Hola people, i m back with the first chapter.
Vaise to i know its not up to the mark nd complete crap with very less manan. But trust me next part is gonna full of manan nd some past story.
Thanxxx a lot to those people who liked nd commented on prolouge.
Agar ye part b achha laga ho to plzzz hit like nd comment.
Or agar achha na laga ho to sorry from my side.
Take care
byeee
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