Well ...what I like d mostIn this beautiful update was d
Nyo-manik convo...!!! Maza aa gaya padh k ...hahahahaha poor nyo...bichari ko bhaga diya...
So now nyo-nandu face off ...ahhh just can't wait to read it ...n ya d reply given by nandu...superb ,excellent
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Poor nyo ...
Jab us k sath aisa hota h na toh alag hi maza aata h update me ...
BT ufff yeh nyo ab nandu k piche pad gayee ...won't change na...!!!
Koi ni all I can see is mast wala twist coning up...
I hope so ...baki toh its ur wish...!!
N ya not to mention nandani ka letter
Aww so cute na!!!
Dil aa gaya nandu pe...
So sweetly written
Ohhh sorry me hello toh karna bhul hi gayee...
Koi ni hey ...a big virtual hello to u
All d way from Delhi...
N ya I would suggest ki make nyo Lil bit more negative as in ur story pain is lil less ...!!!
It's all sweet sweet...
N show how strong manan bonding n love is ...
Lil more drama...!!!
N dhasu wala sass bahut wale serials me jaise hota h na ...full on drama waise wala I wanna see...
I hope u got my POV
In short jaise kyy me soha ki entry se hua tha na vaisa kuch...!!!
It will b a rolar coaster ride for all d readers...
DAT what I think...
N u will also ...get to discovere ur writing skills more ...
Baki plz don't kill me for this idea plz
Plz...
I gave my POV...n u can depict through this track ki its not always DAT mothers r good ...their r greedy women too in Di's small world...
N ya bad me nyo realises her mistake n accept d true lovers...!!! Who met in fashion house ...as two strangers n now r one ...!!!forever n hamesha...
Hahahahaha mene toh puri story hi bata Di ...
Sorry got carried away ...
U knw manan effect...
Finally
Don't b offended...with my view
Its my crazy imagination... Just...
Not any thing against u n ur write up
Go with what u feel like is good ...
As its ur hardwork only...
I m a fellow reader ...just conveying my thoughts...
N ya d update was beautiful...
Naughty manik...never leaves a chance...
Sorry for my long essay...
I knw I bored u ...
U can say it on my face I won't mind...
BT u knw what ..I m still not gonna leave u... (Virtually)
N will trouble u with my POV...
On ur amazing story...
So chaep u m na ...I knw ...
Kya karu aadat se majboor...
Love u loads
Yashika
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