#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1

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prasanna77

@prasanna77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#621

Awesome update...manani was chooo cute...he spilled the entire lotion of rose one her hair..haha loved it...yaar can't get over ur cute and chotu manani...love her to the core...and manik had no clue about nandu's gussa..hope he will cheer up nandu again by clearing out that rewa's thing...rewa was a bitch..just hate her..hope our impulsive manan will be happy always..I love them..they are so cute...thanks for pm...take care

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#622

Ohhh god wat an update ...
Bt nandini is taking it al wrong...
Bichara manik...
Plzzz update new part soon

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aarzooarora

@aarzooarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#623

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nilambariya99

@nilambariya99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#624

Maza agaya... plz ab jyada time mat lena next part me

Cant wait 😭

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shonUle

@shonUle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#625

Hey amazing... last part tohhh ekdam amazing... n jealous manik tohhh ahahh... plz keep writing...

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Nawrin Jahan

@NJahan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#626

it was awesome

nxt part jaldi se update kardena plz

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@ps_angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#627

soo much of agression

nandini

cmon

speak uppp

or ye mitin

mauka pe chauka maarne ki koshish kr rha thaa

bechara manik

he has no ideaaa

nandini ne pagal bnaa diya h usee

loved jab subh nandini use bite n ol kr ri

n wo rhino ki trh

unaffctd

lolzzz

or end me to

kamaal e krr diyaaa

awesme

soo gud to read ur stry ftr such a long tym

cntnue asap :)

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love_is_manan

@love_is_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#628

Wow when I got your PM I was so damn happy...

Missed you very very much...

And chapter was superb fabulous awesome... Daddy n daughter moments was always Cute to read... Manini is showing him doremon...hehehe...😆😆😆

And that stupid Rewa sit beside Manik😡😡😡 seriously I just want to kill her Man... And my baby poured all cream on Ros's hair... Navya was right Rewa pe bhi pour karna chahiye tha yaar...koi nahi next time...am sure Manini will love to do it 😃😃😃

And pool scene was awesome... Manik was literally boiling in anger...and MaNan fighting... I must say you portay Nandu's emotions so brilliantly... Whole dialogues n situation you nailed that... But Poor Manik use samajh hi nahi aa raha ki why is she behaving like this...and na hi she is clearly telling him...without reason ladh rahe hai dono...I hope they will sort out soon...

And last part was too too awesome... I was actually waiting for it...and he came... Now just can't wait to read what will happen next... Arey you are making me greedy... Tum likhti hi ho itna awesome ki we just can't wait to read more n more...

Please update soon...keep smiling... Stay blessed...