#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1091

Hey

I'm so sorry I know I m commenting after 2 chpts

But I was really busy

Updates were fab like seriously

It was so awesome

Chpt previous to this

I loved the whole nandani mitin manik thing

Manik actually acted dumb

But this it was very funny

Loved the last part in which me takes her in the room forcefully

N gets so irritated

The whole nandani manik scene was awesome

Last mai he came back to the room n kissed her his words <3

This chapter toh Kamaal hi hogaya

Manik pov finally

Got toh kw the past problems

Drunk nandanii awww

It's so exciting

Loving the ff completely

Manik dumb hai Par bohot cute lagta hai mujhe... Lol

Update soon

PS: chapter names <3

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jashanpreet

@yash7717

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1092

Hahahhaha...
Manini and Manik...dou are the beat dad and daughter I have ever seen...
Loved the update...
God plz. ..bring them close together

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kas

@kasragav96

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1093

Manik POV awsme...awwee drunk nandhu always worth 2 watch...manini s sooo cute...manini n her mommy s d bestest awww...cant describe der cuteness...ur writing abt dem always fell in luv wth dem mre n mre...mke atleast hereaftr manik l knw rewa try 2 separate manan datz y she s close 2 him in4nt of nandhu plzzz close d rewa chap v lke d jealous parts (both especly manik's bt nandhu's r little bit hurt our heart also)bt itz tke 2o long coz still manik didnt knw d rewa intention datz y..mke manik l knw n react dat..dat l b really interesting 2 read us...bt dis chap s really superb...

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1094

This was amazingly out standing ... Jst as Manik said, words r nt enough to describe this chappy ... This was the best actually ... I really loveddd this chappy ...

U know I always wanted a chapter with only Manik's pov ... Nd this was actually a surprise fr me ... A lovely surprise ... I seriously didn't expected this ... I was jst laughing nd laughing nd laughing frm when the party started till now ... I mean I jst loveee Cabir ... Pta nhi q par uski simple bate bhi na mujhe hasa jati hai jab bhi I image Cabir saying those lines ... Lyk when Nandini came to the stage nd asked fr Manik calling him Gadha nd Cabir said ... "Ja teri biwi ne tujhe yaad kiya" 🤣🤣🤣

And and how can I forget the most hilarious one ... Manik you make me want to be gay"🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣

Lyk Cabir even I was also jst left to touch the floor laughing after what Manini did nd then Cabir's comments ... Nd Manini ... Ohh God !!! Sach me kya khake paisa kiya tha Nandini ne usse ... She is jst awesmmm ... Jab bhi baat R ki hoti hai Manini se Bst koi nhi unhe sabak dikhane me ...

Omg I was imagining tht scene Rose clinging to Cabir nd then her great fall nd tht uncle on her nd Cabir laughing out loud ... Nd then I was jst 🤣 🤣 🤣🤣 I was jst abt to fall frm bed ...

Manik nd Nandini k bare me kya kahu ... Waise aj manik ka pov padh k bht so cheeze clear ho gyi abt their past ... Bt again one thing ... Manik as nothing abt Rewa in his heart ... It's one n only Nandini who is ruling it with full ryt ... Nd Manik is with her jst fr business purpose ... Thts it ...

Waise bechara Manik ... He had to go to each nd every guest present there nd repeat Nandini's words to them bt when it came to Mitin he was nt at all embarrased nd with full authority he said "I am her husband and I love her"

Mitin ki toh halat kharab ho gyi ... He he he he ... Nandini was total out of control nd I'm sure she had those shots becoz of Rewa ...

All in all I jst lovvveeeddd this update ... Thank u sooo much fr this surprise nd this long update ...

Edited by Sm0405 - 9 years ago

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Danny92

@Danny92

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1095

Super update nd thanks for the pm

Ur surprise was awesome loved it manik's pov wow

Manin is super wen it cumes to doing things she is just awesom love her sooo much

Rewa I just like to kill her sum time

Drunk nandu ufff that's something tough to handle

Cabir is awesom yar

Manik nd nandini they love eachother sooo much hope they cum together very sooonnn

This update can't get enough of it

Wat will happen wen nandini gets her senses bcak

Continue sooonnn

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life_923

@life_923

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1096

I loved ur surprise.

Getting to read story from Manik's perspective was nice n of course peek in the past to understand their issues was interesting too.

Manini is love, like seriously, she is always their to rescue Manik or Cabir from Rewa n Rose. Jst love her.

Love ur story n ur writing.

Waiting for ur next update. 😊

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piyu008

@piyu008

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#1097

I knew it they aren't going to do it so I never asked😆 waise nice surprise. .lovef Manik ka pov..chalo at least he knows half of the stuff ..I thought he wasn't even aware of what he wad doing. .he is been always adorable confused gadha😆 n I love him like anything😳

N drunk nandu🤣 I was laughing like fool that my roommate thought that I officially lost it😆 .I mean seriously going to each n every one n making your husband say that he is your husband😆 only MaNan are capable of doing such stuff n of course all this credit goes the writer only.

Dear you amaze my every time. .you should take writing seriously. .try to contact some news paper or magazine. .you are truly blessed dear..from serious to humour n from romance to fight you always nailed it. .

Coming to nandu..did she really kissed Manik in public...lol.

Its high time manik talk to her..

Its awesome update soonish😳

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lovely-009

@lovely-009

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#1098

fantastic!!!!!
just loved manik''s pov😃😃😃
please cont soon...

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ershilpavyas

@ershilpavyas

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#1099

Hehe i just loved drunk nandu avatar...i liked d way u described manik's pov it was an awsm update...full drama nd cherry on cake manini nd her naughtiness ;) As i said earlier pls start giving us 2 Updates a week if u hav time...pretty pls

Edited by ershilpavyas - 9 years ago

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parekh71

@parekh71

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1100

the whole ch in manik POV is really treat for us...really u nailed it...I like manik's side story...and he really loves her a lot..awww...ur one line that is'i m nandini's personal zoo' is amazing...hahaha..and the party is just hilarious... I like 'kaha hai woh gadha' the most...hahaha and went to everyone and make manik to say that he is her husband is rally crazy...plz continue soon...

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