MaNan FF- Just Married#6 (part 71- page 139) - Page 3

Congrats for new thread. The story is mindblowing and it showed ur writing skills. Keep up the good work. Awesome update.combo of present and past track was amazing. Super idea.the way u penned the reason behind aashi's name was blissful. Manan's moments and convos were beautifully penned. The way u penned manan's bond in present track was mindblowing like manik's help for nandini in households,nandini appearance before manik when he enters home and their breakfast sessions.everything was fab.nandini moodswings were well written especially nandini's moodswing of eating full ice cream pack. Nyonika and manik's convo was fabulous.manik understood her moodswings and cared nandini with love and calmness. The way u made aashi's intro showing her importance in everyone's life was phenomenal. Manan's care and love towards aashi were beautifully penned. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.

Hey dear first of all congrates for the thread and coming to the update it was awesome mananhaving a baby girl ashi how cute na and flahback parts were amazing and her mood swings thanks for the lovely long update and for pm also

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Wohooo congos for new thread..

Soo sweet ... nandus mood swings and maniks care towards her was soo nice... and the name aashi Is also nice...

Congrats for new thread.
You totally deserve it.

And about the update...
It was sooo cute and awesome.
Loved it.
Loved this new way of writing

Keep it up
Continue soon

Take care

awesome lovely cuteee update dea...

Wow..

Awesome!! Manik is so cute... He is the best husband, the way he handled her mood swings was just amazing... Congratulations for the new thread... Pls continue soon... Thanks for the pm... 😊 😊

Awww such an amazing cute lovely and adorable update...
Manan Daughter Aashi... So cute...

I so love the flashback... Nd nandu's tantrums...

Plzzz update new part soon