His, and only his- Manan FF Chp 32 Pg 135

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tas456

@tas456

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Awesome update dear

The story is really very interesting

Manik and nandini's characters are very unique

Can't wait for the story to unfold

Will be eagerly waiting for your next update

Tqvm for the pm dear

Take care and always keep smiling😊

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siyaaaali

@siyaaaali

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Nice update...ur story is very interesting... Love nandu and rishabh's bond...but dono ka relation kya hai plz clear it..

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bashful_moon

@bashful_moon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#133

It is intriguing, it is crazy and it is one hell of a very well written fiction...

So Manik is not a human and Nandini has a dark past...

Will look forward to reading more...

As a writer you might doubt your work and it is a good sign that you want genuine comments and improve there upon.. But as a reader, your work is absolutely flawless - at least for me.

Keep writing, keep shining... for you are a brilliant writer and your writing is scintillating

Edited by bashful_moon - 9 years ago

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riddhima11

@riddhima11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

How do you do this?? Damn!!

such an interesting, consuming story it is..

I read each chapter in the hope of reaching some clarity of the situation..but the mysteries increased and now I feel a compelling magnetic force towards these two.. Gosh!!! you are a brilliant writer..

I need to gather my thoughts and then write down a good piece of appreciation for you.. Gimme time for that..

till the time you update the coming chapters, I will keep on thinking, WHO ARE THEY? WHO IS HE? WHO IS SHE? and tons of questions like that...😆

waiting for the next chapter

love

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Wow that was awesome...

This fight is going to be very dirty and nasty..

Both r attracted towards each other..

Jst hope nandu never back out and have a upper hand on manik...

Luved rishabh and nandu's bond...

Luved it...

Thnx for pm...

Update soon...

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#136

What I liked

Nandini she is strong and gives it back to Manik instead of accepting his horrible treatment
Each chapter leaves me hanging
What has happened to Nandini
Will we get Maniks POV
But IF we do, will the mystery element stay?

I cant decide

What I disliked

There was nothing that I didnt like
If you want me to be honest than I would also point out which parts I didnt like
I am asking because some writers are a bit sensitive

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@navk

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#137

oh wow
awesome update
loved it
that fight sequence was soo damn amazing

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simkapoor

@simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

hey...

beautiful stry...
update ws rocking...
really lvd it...
it clearly shows tht nandini hs a vry painful pastt...

will b eagr to read more...
cntinue soonnn..
tc

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#139

really intriguing. I had BTW forgotten about the paat lines so glad u told again.

also ur stories, I swear are really cool and well written so I totally think u deserve more appreciation. Also I'm glad u r editing the titles finally! this will help more ppl see ur ffs.