MANAN SS-BETRAYAL TO LOVE(part 4 in page 9 and reread part 3 ) 7/8/16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE :
some where across the world in a country in mid night a girl was sitting in the balcony of her room and thinking about the incident that changed the perspective of love and emotions for her the day which was to be most beautiful day of her changed into a nightmare


in a canteen five of them were sitting and enjoying commenting and pulling each others leg but of them one boy was silent his eyes were full of rage and anger as if someone has broken her trust suddenly a girl entered the canteen in black kurthi white top and loose hair simple yet beautiful the boy who was silent till now looked up both eyes met the girl blushed seeing him but the boy turned his face the girl face fallen down she went and sat on table opposite to them they both were looking each other but there are different emotions in each others eyes one's eye filled with rage and anger others eye was filled with trust


suddenly there was a voice that was heard from the TV set as it was exceptionally loud . it was their college local channel broadcast, a boy went towards the center of the canteen and spoke loudly which is clear to everyone in the canteen

boy : so guys last night we all attended the most rocking performance of space on opening of musicana so leut's relieve some of the exciting moments again " he signed to start the video clip and they started showing the performance clips and cheering clips of students and the video got stopped
boy : now lets watch something more interesting and soon they saw boy following girl into back yard of college and their passionate kiss
everyone left stunned and shocked the girl couldn't believe what was happening she couldn't take that whole college is seeing their intense moments she fainted due to shock . her friend navya held her and took her to the sickbay
one of the four a boy came front and said : lets move from here
all the five went out of the canteen to their jam room while in sickbay doctor said due to stress she fainted after an hour she woke up at once from the bed
navya : nandini (yes the girl name is nandini) tum thik ho aur vo sab kya hei tum us monster ke saath meine pehle bhi kaha unse door raho see now what happened
nandini : not now i first want my answers tum hostel jao
navya : nahi nandini mei bhi tumhare saath chalthi hu
navya and nandini came out of the sick bay just then somone shouted "look guys whose here miss nandini murthy aka manik play toy is here" soon everyone in the corridor started gossiping about nandini (yes the boy is non other than manik malhothra )
navya : one more word against her i will kill u right here go mind your own loser business but nandini eyes filled with tears
her heart broke into pieces but taking courage neglecting other words she moved ahead followed by navya


IN JAM ROOM :

all were present in the jam room a silence prevailed over them unable to take the silence anymore manik broke it
manik : guys what happened lets jam
all thh efour agreed and they are jamming when suddenly the door of the jam room flung open nandini followed by navya entered manik looked at her with full of rage and anger where as nandini eyes filled with tears
a girl of five came front and said : how dare u bloody bitch to enter our jam room
nandini : mukti(yes the girl is mukti) not now mei manik se baath karne aaya hu
manik moved towards her grabbed her hand made her stand infront of him
nandini : manik please say me what is all this tum aise kyu kiya
manik let out a sarcastic laugh
manik : tumhe janna hei na mei aise kyu kiya ...kyu kiya mujhe ...ha yaar i forgot why i did so
nandini : manik it's not a joke
manik immediately with serious expression : even i am saying it's not a joke it is real truth of u r life
nandini could not believe what was happening she had tears in her eyes
nandini : manik please say something she was crying but manik was not at all looking at her
cabir : dude say something she is asking (he had soft corner for nandini) and another girl couldn't take anymore
girl moved front : you ...
she was about to say something harsh to nandini but manik stopped her
manik : alya (yes the furious girl is alya)
alya : what is wrong with u manik she entered our jam room and talking to u with out concern and u are not giving answers for her and uparse what is that video u kissed this girl behenji what happened to u r class
manik : alya tum itni worked up kyu hori ho
alya : this girl degraded u r image and manik shushed alya by his hand
manik : relax alya when i released the tape what is problem
manik announced leaving all the other 6 in shock
nandini : but why ?
manik looked at her with devilish smirk playing on his lips
manik : whu would i do that nice one ah
lets remind at u r starting days of college no one in this college has dare to raise voice against MANIK THE MANIK MALHOTHRA but u punched me in front of the college yaad aya ki nahi but i tried breaking u but u stood strong then i realised u are emotional fool so i thought to play with those emotions so see now where u are ...yes the emotions u have broke u it did
nandini who by now had gone numb ...she just looking at manik unable to speak navya came to her and hold her as if she releses she may fall down
manik : so here it is never mess with manik malhothra understand so get lost i have given u your answers
manik : kya samjhi tum that the MANIK MALHOTHRA would fall for a behenji bloody middle classs commener like u never it never happens a girl like u is not that affordable to get manik malhotra
nandini was left cold and numb she couldn't believe what happened just now ...she slumped onto ground even navya cabir and dhruv are shocked nandini kept looking at him when he walkes out of jamroom tears are flowing from her eyes followed by manik mukti and alya to left


nandini throat prevented her from talking due to lump formed in her she was seeing her worst nightmare everymoment cabir looked at navya and said : lets take from here
navya looking at her friend replied : tumhari jarurath nahi hei mei sambhal lungi apni friend ko kya pata tum log kaise honge
with her sentence cabir could speak anymore navya made nandini stand and slowly took her alone without any one
they both leave the college

nandini to herself : manik jo tumne mere saath khel ke meri emotions ko mazak bana ke rakha sambke samne i hate u manik malhothra i hate u to the core of my heart . tum prove kiya that love doesn't exist in this world may or may not u betrayed me . tumne bola to keep u in my prayers meine maan liya i trusted u but ur BETRAYAL that day i am unable to forget in my eyes



other side of world
a boy was sitting in the corner of the room holding a lamp in his hand tears are continuosly flowing from his eyes he is non other than manik malhotra
manik to himself : nandini how could u cheat me vo raat jam mei tumhara ghar ayi thi tum kisi aur ke saath tha kyu tum mujhe dokha diya iss monster ko darkness se nikalke phir se darkness mei chod kar chali gayi ...phir uske baad mei tumhe break kiya it broke me too but mei kuch nahi kar patha tumhe jab meine dekha kisi aur ki baho mei tab tumhe meri yaad bhi nahi thi ...vo sab hone ke baad mei apna answers keliye aya par tum chali gayi aaj bhi vahi questions mere samne hei kya bigada meine tumhara is tarah tum mujhe ek question with out answer ke roop mei chod kar chali gayi i hate u ...i hate u ...u betrayed me ur BETRAYAL is unforgettable he thought and remember the musicana opening night


manik pov :
nandini what have u done to me i can't wait for tomorrow mei aise kabhi nahi tha aaj kya ...urghh god this girl is driving me crazy i can't stay here i want to meet her
immediately i took my car keys and left for nandini house in thirty minutes when i step out of my car and called her she was not lifting my call i looked at her room window the lights are on so i thought to climb through the pipe i mean see for this girl i THE MANIK MALHOTRA is climbing pipe for a girl hey god kya zamana agaya i entered into her balcony and peeped in her room the sight was enough to drain out my blood my girl is sleeping in lap of a boy he is not her family member then who is he then i heard him saying babydoll (what the hell yeh nandini ko babydoll kyu bolra hei)
boy : love u my babydoll
girl : love u too angry bird
that was it for me i couldn't speak any more i quickly came down through same pipe and rushed to home. i wwent to room and closed the door smashed all the things in my room and shouted out of my lungs : nandiniiiu don't love me then what was all those u said to me u said u trust me u broke my trust very badly that means u are cheating me u have messed with manik malhotra yeh tumne acha nahi kiya u have broken me right i will do same get ready miss murthy to face the wrath of a monster



aise kya hua jo manik aur nandini ke beech is it a misunderstanding or betrayal we will know further so stay tuned ur lovely writer


Index
Part 1 - page 1
Part 2 - page 2
Part 3 - page 4
part 4 - page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good start.
The word babydoll tells that it might be abhi or Aryaman.
And I guess manik will really feel guilty knowing the truth who he is to her.
Continue soon.
Quiet long prologue.
But I liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon, eagerly waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thachu

Continue soon, eagerly waiting for the update


Of course today I will post part 1
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhillon90

Sounds interstnggg
Continue soon


Yeah I am also as excited as u to post
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Posted: 9 years ago
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the part 1 starts after 5years after the college insult of nandini both nandini and navya disappear any one don't know where they went musicana nh3 not even participated ofcourse fab5 won the title the family of nandini also shifted by night

Part 1

a boy was sleeping on his bed with well built body and there is sexy tatoo on his back the person is in deep slumber which was broken by continuous buzzing of the phone he took up the phone irritatedly

boy : kya hei

person on phone : manik baba kripya karke jaldi alya ke ghar aja (he sounded serious)

manik : kya hua sab thik heina cabir

cabir : ha everything is fine justcome alya aur mukti ne hame kuch batana chahthe

manik : ha ara hu just30 min

cabir : ok

they both hung up the phone manik immediately went to freshen up and left for alya's place

on other side of the world

a girl of mid twenties is working on her laptop suddenly the door flung open another girl in mid twenties entered and shouted

girl : whatis this nandini tum abhi bhi kaam karri ho

the girl working on laptop : nothing navya ek important meeting usi keliye presentation prepare kaari hu aur vo ho bhi gaya bhai ko mail kardiya vo sambhal lega ab chalo batao kya baath tu itne gusse mei kyu ho

navya : kuch nai tumhe midnightwork karthe hue gussa agaya bas

nandini : ok sojao

navya : day after tomorrow hame jana hei do u remember

nandini : ha how can i forgetmy world lies there mei daina ko boldiya to book tickets and complete both of our packing

navya : tumna mujhe ek kaam bhi nahi karne dogi kya

nandini : hame jarurath kya hei ithne log heina

navya : acha maa mangaya chalo sojathe nahi tho tumhara arya aur bhai mera sar pe dance karega meri honey pot aur babydoll abtak kyu nahi soyi

both laughs on her sentence nandini controlled her laugh

nandini :navya tum arya aur bhai ka mazak mt udao

navya : ok meri nandu good night

nandini : good night

both sleep in nandini room peacefully

in mumbai

alya house

fab4 are waiting for manik but he still didn't arrive unable to bear the urge to know about what alya should talk cabir again called manik but he didn't lift the call

cabir : arre yaar yeh manik mera phone nahi utra ha hei

dhruv : chill cabir ajayega

all wait for manik restlessly while of them 2 are super excited to share the news they are mukti and alya after 15 minutes manik entered with his cool attitude mukti pounced upon him

manik : mukti kya hua

mukti : mei yeh news jab bataungi tum log bhi pagal hojaogi

cabir : aise kya hua

mukti : hua nai hone wala hei

dhruv : what is it mukti

mukti : we got a new album offer

manik : isme itni excited wali baath kya hei

mukti : hei kic music labels puchogi nahi

alya : don't tell me we got it from our favourite music labels

mukti : and guess what it is yes

cabir : means

mukti : we got a new album offer from "NAM MUSIC LABELS"

manik : what

mukti : yeah manik u r dream music company

manik took mukti in her hands and made her twirled : u know i am so so so happy it was my dream to work with num1 music company finally we did it

alya : yeha of course we are fab5 we would do

cabir : that's good to know about new album

mukti : and guess what we have to leave for newyork tomorrow i already booked the tickets for all of us

manik : but how do u know about album who called u

mukti : manik last week when i went to london i met a person there he is member of NAM music labels he was impressed with our previous albums he gave me an offer to meet and finalise about the deal with the md of NAM music labels i know we are best they won't deny us

manik : ok fine

alya : guys i want to say u all something

cabir : ab tumhe kya bolna hei alya

dhruv : cabir usse bolne do baad me puch lena kyu kya all

alya : guys actually my designs were recognised by the best fashion house in world they want to meet me day after tomorrow

cabir : but we have to go for album right

alya : that's not a problem the meeting is atnewyork itself

mukti : that's a great news but what is the fashion house name

alya : my dream fashion house "FASHION PARADISE" if they agree with my designs my designs would be world famous they may also offer me partnership there or i can get a fashion designer job there .

dhruv : congrats alya

manik : congratulations alya ofcourse u would do it

cabir : it time for double celebration guys

mukti : ha celebration to banta hei

manik : ok done tonight malhotra mansion waise nyonika bhi nahi hei kisi kaam se bahar gayi hei

all four : done

manik : nahi get all the luggage to malhotra mansion kal subah ham vahase hi airport ko nikhlenge

all : cool bye






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Amazingg update
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Wow love it
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Stupid manik misundestndg clear nahi kar saktha tha..
Whr all ds lead bth of dem...
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Part 2


fab5 are partying in malhotra mansion dancing dinging and drinking but two of them are not involved in it they are manik and

cabir different thought are going on in their mind

manik to himself : my dream is now coming true by this album fab5 will be world famous and become one of the popular band but

i have different feeling arising in me i dont know whether its good or bad may be something is ahead may be only for me either for

all of us in these five years much changed the ever so cool cabir became silent he sometimes used to ignore us dhruv my buddy

there is something inside them but they are not sharing this so not fab5 but one for all and all for one they are there for three of

us but their mind was far away mukti she is behaving girl since a week she is not like that i should know what happened and alya

as usual she is the who not at all changed same insulting others by class

cabir to himself : shona tomorrow i am coming to meet u i know u will be surprised even i want to come u will be surprised seeing

me and dhruv there i hope these again don't create a problem to u i make sure they will stay away from u

mukti came towards both manik and cabir and pulled them for drinks they partied and left for sleep in malhotra mansion as it is

early morning flight

on the other side of world

nandini is sleeping in her kking sized bed surrounded with cusions and pillows sun is trying to peep in her room through the

curtains nandini covered herself with duvet

nandini : shoo ...shoo go away sun mujhe sona hei ...jao tum

navya who is standing at the door smiled seeing the girl too cute and bubbly at her cute antics she has 2 coffee cups in her hand

she went and placed the cups on side table and opened the curtains such that sun rays hit nandini's sleep she took one coffee cup

climbed on the bed pulled of the bedsheet of her and kept it near her nose

nandini woke up smelling the coffee stretching her hands and seeing navya with coffee cup in her hands

nandini while yawning : good morning navi tumhari coffee ke bina mei kya karungi

navya smiled and replied : good morning nandu

navya took nandini in the side hug and said : ab chalo jaldi se take coffee and freshen up

nandini : ha tum jao we have to leave for shopping for jaan

navya : ha par tum jao na

navya said and went to make breakfast nandini freshened up and came down wearing a blue crop top and black shorts meanwhile

she got a call from her pa

nandini : hello aman

pa : mam u r tickets are conformed and web check in is also done the flight is at early morning tomorrow

nandini : ok any other meetings to be held tomorrow

pa : there is a meeting mam but sir said he will handle it

nandini : say sir i am also attending it and ha make sure by the time i return i need all the reports regarding employees salaries

pa : buthow can it be possible

nandini shouts : am i clear ?

pa " ye ...yes mam

nandini : good

and hung up the phone to see navya watching her with a question mark

nandini : ky aaise kyu khadi ho jaldi chalo

navya : usko sunane ki kya zarurath thi

nandini : ab nahi tume 2 or 3 days me patha chalega

navya nods both complete their breakfast and leave for the best mall in that city and buys many gifts toys dresses painting books

for her jaan navya also purchases her set of gifts for her jaan

both complete their shopping around afternoon and return to home exhausted while theservant diana serves them luch they eat

and watch a movie while cracking jokes and spending thier time as they are soul sisters they almost forget about world when they

are with each other they care for each other alot time passed they completed their dinner and slept diana packed their luggages.

mumbai :

fab5 boarded thier flight all were busy in their works alya in painting her nailpolish mukti is fighting with cabir on a silly topic

dhruv is silently reading his novel manik is sitting and watching outside the window

manik to himself : i am have a very strong feeling that something is going to happen there god after the betrayal of her i don't

have strength to face any issue again but this loneliness is haunting me more more i think to forgether the more it hurts

cabir observed manik lost in thoughts but he choose to ignore those as he himself has bought in for his own

the flight from mumbai to america langed fab5 reached the exit of airport to see a manager and a driver with a name plate written

fab5 on it

manager : good evening i am manager of NAM MUSIC LABELS welcome to newyork he said handing a boquet to them which alya

too it in her hands

fab5 : thank u its our pleasure

manager : lets move to hotel

fab 5 : ok

manager dropped them at hotel informing that meeting is at 10'0 clock in the morning and said he will come to escort them to the

company he then wished them good night and left from there the rooms arrangement was like manik and cabir in one room alya

and mukti in one room dhruv in one room

in manik and cabir room manik is standing in the balcony looking outside at the night city of newyork and went into the memory

lane where manik and nandini were sitting on the bench nandini keeping her head on his shoulder and manik wrapped his hands

on her waist

manik : nandini tum kabhi mujhe chodke nahi jaogi na

nandini : manik mei kabhi nahi jaunga tumhe chodke

manik to himself : tum sab jhut bolti ho nandini tum mujhe dokha diya mujhe chodke chali gayi mei chahtha hu ki tum meri

samne phirse na aaye and he end u will cheat and leave me

manik was brought out of his thoughts by cabir voice he was talking to someone on phone

cabir : tum newyork mei nahi ho kya

cabir : ok i will meet u tomorrow sho...but stopped seeing manik as he was lookingat her

cabir : ok bye

manik came inside and asked him : kisse baath karri ho cabir

cabir : meri friend se

manik : mujhe nahi patha kya vo frnd

cabir : nahi she is from newyork american citizen

manik : ok but vo tujhe recieve karne kyu nahi ayi

cabir : she is out of town she will meet me tomorrow tab tu dekh

manik : ok naam kya hei tumhari frnd ka

cabir : kitna questions puchti ho tum manik she will come tomorrow tab thak don't eat my brain

manik : cabir tum itna hyper kyu hori manik maine simple saa question pucha ok never mind he went and slept on the bed

cabir to himself : jab tu dekhega na tab behosh hojaogi manik its time for sloving some unsolved mysteries trust me this time ur ego will be crushed nto pieces because of this u r ego u made my shona cry now time for counter attack

on the other side after talking with cabir nandini and navya boarded their flight nandini slept on navya's shoulder as she woke up too early for the flight navya kept reading the novel and also dozed off of on nandini head covering themselves witha blanket.

next day :

all the fab5 woke up early and freshen up themselves completed their brakfast and the manager came escorted them to the company while going in the car alya asked how much time the meeting takes place

manager : don't know mam depends on sir mood

alya : ok

manik : what is ur sir name

manager : aryaman khurhana

mukti : wahi heina heir of khurana group of industries

manager : yes mam

dhruv : does he own NAM MUSIC LABELS also

manager : no mam md of NAM MUSIC LABELS is mam her name is before he could say he gets a call and all gets diverted from the topic finally they reach company

on the other isde nandini and navya flight gets landed nandini changed herself into business women get up formal shirt balzeron it and skirt till her knees

nandini : navya tum ghar jao mujhe ek meeting hei mei atha hu

navya : ok

outside the airport 2 mercedes and 2 bmw stop navya goes in a bmw nandini in another bmw folloed by one merceded front and another mercedes atback with guard with full tight security

fab5 went inside the company manager made their way towards waiting room all settled themselves in waiting room the waiting room was filled with little child pictures actually it was a playing room but now used as waiting room

alya and manik went towards the pics caressed itand said : how cute

mukti : yeah really too cute

dhruv and cabir watched each others face as they know who it is while manager returned saying saying sir has arrived all moved towards his cabin

manager knocked the cabin and siad : may i come in sir

the response came yes come in

they all went inside there was a man in middle twenties reading a file and working on his laptop he used sinfully handsome clean shave gelled hair perfect business man

manager : sir they are fab5

the man moved his eyes from file and laptop and said : hello take u r seat aman u get me the file i'll take care of it

fab5 took their seat and shook hands with him

man : hello i am aryman khurana

fab5 : pleasure to meet u sir

arya : don't call me sir even i am of u r age call me aryaman

manik : thank u aryaman that's nice of u

arya : well lets come to the album deal there will be five songs u have to complete it in a month the genre of songs u decide and before u all sign album deal i am warningu all the songs will be accepted only if the md agrees for it and if she likes it

mukti : but

arya : no buts and if md will be here by tomorrow i agreed for this deal because of my friend as he himself suggested u

manik : can we meet the md before we sign deal

arya smilingly : she is not there here today maybe tomorrow

manik : lets finalise the deal

arya : ok here is the contract study the terms and conditions throughly

fab5 : ok

fab5 went through the terms and conditions all of them signed the deal

arya : as the formality is completed introduce urself

manik : manik malhotra guitarist and lead singer of fab5

cabir smilingly :cabir dhawan drummer(cabir and dhruv noticed aryaman but stayed silent and winked him to stay silnt how they know each other kaise kab aage dekho in story )

dhruv smilingly: dhurv vedant guitarist

mukti : mukti vardhan on electric guitar

alya : alya saxena on keyboard

arya : nice u all will stay at our mansion for this complete one month as u all studied its part of the rule

manik : we don't have any problem aryaman unless u don't have but an we know the name of md of world but manik sentence was left incomplete when aryaman phone rings he smiled seeing the caller where fab3 were confused seeing him smiling he answered the call

arya : hello honeypot

arya: what u are here ? wait i am coming

he hung the phone and said : guys wait i will come back in 5 min

fab5 : ok aryaman no problem

before aryaman out a girl came she looked as a perfect business woman black skirt that ended on her knees black blazer she came in and said : arya

aryaman and fab5 turned towards her she was looking in her phone and called him aryaman runned towards her and took her in a hug which startled her he twirled her around

nandini : arya please put me down behave its an office not our home arya !!!! she glared at her

aryaman chucled at her and kissed her forehead she kissed him on his cheeks smiling

aryaman : honey pot i missed u so much

nandini : i missed u too arya itna saara she said stretching her hands aryaman smiled seeing her

nandini now turned towards the people in her room to get a live shock whole fab5 standing there confused mukti and alya are shocked dhruv and cabir are smiling while manik eyes are red with anger the moment when manik and nandini eyes met tears formed in her eyes they became red

nandini : arya 2 minutes i will join u again

she said and moved out manager came in and handed him the file he asked

arya : guys u wait here i will just come

there was no reaction from them except cabir and dhruv they blinked their eyes, so he left while manager shacked them bringing out of trance no one was there in the cabin

alya: how come that behenji in newyork that to in this music company

mukti : hogi koyi employee

alya : but how can aryaman hug her and twirl her

mukti : hogi uski bedmate

cabir : just shut up

alya : galat kya bola Cabir mukti ne

manik closed his with her words

alya : manik why are u so silent

manik : kuch nai

cabir : justwait i will tell u who is she

cabir on purposely called the called the manager

manager : how can i help u sir

cabir : who is the girl who just left the cabin

manager : girl not sir madam

alya: means

manager : she is MD OF NAM MUSIC LABELS

fab3 : what ?

manager : NANDINI MURTHY SHE IS MD OF NAM MUSIC LABELS



screen freezes on their shocked faces


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