MANAN SS-BETRAYAL TO LOVE(part 4 in page 9 and reread part 3 ) 7/8/16 - Page 6

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part-4




Cabir stopped talking when he noticed nandini coming back to living room ,while dhruv gestured others to stop talking they all remained silent when nandini came back

Nandini: kya hua sab aise kyu dekhre ho mujhe...bhoot jaisa dhik rahi hu kya

Alya murmured to mukti standing beside her : bhoot jaisa nahi tu to bhoot hi hei hamare liye . Mukti giggled hearing alya while navya glared at them as she heared them bitching about nandini

Navya: kuch nahi nandu tune dawai liya kya

Nandini: arrey yaar ab tu shuru mat hojana us ghandhe medicines ko leke she said to cutely exaggerating ghandhe medicines dramatically

Manik looked at her and smiled for the first time after seeing her because she is looking so cute forgetting everything but immediately covers himself while cabir laughs seeing his friend lost in his sister but composes himself while navya is smiling seeing her bestie trying to be herself in front of her worst night mare

Navya: bilkul nahi chalega navya is going to continue while the landline phone rings navya takes the call hears the person on the other side and smiles and looks at nandini and gives it to her

Nandini: kaun hei navya

Navya: kudh hi puch lo

Nandini takes the cardless phone and sais : hello nandini murthy speaking

Hearing the voice of person on the other side big smile forms on her face so she looks at others and moves from there to the lawn taking the phone with her

Inside the mansion

Manik is still shocked thinking about the person whom nandini went talking in her phone with lot of smile on her face which smile not at all occurred on her face when she is with him . this thought made him more angrier then before causing him to make wrong assumptions. Soon he came out of his thoughts by the voice of navya

Navya : arya please show them their rooms

Cabir : nahi navya uski zarurath nahi hei mujhe patha hei i'll show them

When manik heard cabir's words he thought to himself: cabir ko patha hei rooms ke bareme mathlab he already came here kya hora hei yah ape fab5 mei secrets. Immediately composing himself he turns towards alya and mukti they also look at him and nod that is they are also thinking same as him so he turned towards cabir and dhruv

Manik in his dominating voice : cabir and dhruv we need to talk while mukti and alya stand either side of manik to nod .

Cabir and dhruv already knew this is coming so they nod as they knew their answers.cabir turned towards navya and arya who has a question mark on her face indicating what are u gonna talk so he gives them a confident smile indicating I can manage them look and moves towards their rooms along with others . while moving forward he turns around and said

Cabir : navya shone anne ke baad dawai dena bhulna math ok

Navya glares him saying that she knows how to manage her friends health look

Manik looks at their talks and thinks what medicines kya hua hei usse . Is anything serious

Cabir turns towards them saying chale seeing manik lost in thoughts .

Manik : huh...kya

Cabir : chale he said indicating rooms

Manik : ha chalo he said and starts walking along with others.

Nandini came back after talking on the phone and saw only navya and arya left in living room. She has a content smile on her face when she returned which changed into confusing on seeing only arya and navya and asks them

Nandini : baki sab kaha hei

Navya : apni apni rooms mei cabir aur dhruv lekar gaya hei unlogo ko she says making disgust face at them of her sentence indicating her hatred towards the three of them

Nandini : navya bhul jao jo hua so hua ab kyu baar baar dhaurane se pain badtha hei bhul jao

Navya : tum bhul gayi ho kya

Nandini s face colour changed on hearing the question made by navya she immediately turns around and take a deep breath answers : ha bhul gayi hu mei

Navya : nandini khud ko dhoka dene se kuch nahi hoga accept it ki aaj tumhari halath ka karan sirf vo hei .

Nandini : ab in bato ka time nahi hei go and freshen up dinner time mei milthe hei

And goes to her room not for once looking back at arya and navya standing there. While both navya and arya looks at the direction she went and look at each other

Navya : aaj bhi usko eke k shabh yaad hei jo usne suna hei von nahi bhul pari hei

Arya : huh ...ab kya kare honeypot ka mujhe tho lagtha hei hame bhai ko batha dena chahiye nahi tho baath aur bigad jayega

Navya : nahi arya bhai ko pata chal gaya tho vo kisi ko bhi maarne se ek baar bhi nahi sochega aur tho aur nandu bhi yeh nahi chahthi nahi tho kabka bhai ko pata chal gaya hotha

Arya: teek hei ab kya kare nandu ki mood thik karne ka

Navya : theek karne ki jarurath nahi hei vo ari hei kal so mood automatically theek hojayegi tumhe patha hei na nandini ki jaan basthi hei usme

Arya : ha theek hei meri maa mujhe patha hei vo meri pumpkin bhi hei

Navya : tho kya vo meri sweety bhi hei

Arya: tumse koyi nahi jeet saktha chalo chalthe hei

Navya ; tum freshen up hojao mei nandu ki dawai dekhe athi hu

And navya moves towards nandini room.

Cabir first showed mukti and alya their room saying that they will meet at their room in 15 minutes so that they can freshen up themselves in that mean time. he then showed dhruv his room and finally manik and cabir room .

Cabir and manik entered their room while the servants followed them with their luggage

Manik sat on the bed while cabir moved towards washroom to get freshen up. When he returned he saw manik sitting at the same place .He moved towards him and placed his hand on his shoulder. Manik looked up to find cabir looking at him intently as if reading his eyes he immediately took a deep breath closing his eyes in order cover his thoughts. He got up and freshened up.

After 15 minutes everyone assembled themselves at mukti and alya room after 10 minutes of silence

Manik : kyu

Cabir : huh

Manik :; kyu nahi bataya u both were in contact with her

Cabir : batha bhi dethi tho kya kartha

Mukti : tu batana jaruri samajna chahiye . u don't know fab5 doesn't have secrets

Cabir : nahi bataya tho koyi thuphan aayi kya

Alya : aur kitna secrets rakhi hei hamse chupke us besharam aurath ke saath kabse chal raha hei yeh sab

Cabir and dhruv yelled at her: LANGUAGE . when cabir and dhruv yelled at alya mukti alya and manik are looking at the ferocious faces of both dhruv and cabir who are famous for their cool and calm attitude but they are confused with their look on their faces does they are ever cool and calm are not they are looking horribly dangerous. Looking at their faces both mukti and alya gulped down their saliva while manik looked astonished at them

Cabir cooled down and said: language ...vo meri behen hei suna tumne meri behen ..meri behen ke bareme koyi bhi language nahi use karetho mujhse jyada koyi bhura nahi hoga

Mukti: vo kabse teri behen ban gayi cabir

Cabir: jabse tumlogo ne usse sab college students ke saamne usse humiliate kiya...aur kya tumlog no secrets between fab5 lagha rakha hei tab kaha gaya no secrets between fab5 when manik humiliated her infront of her college . tum logo ko is plan ke bareme usse bataya nahi na tab u supported him right now support us also mei aaj apni behen ke saath hu . support me also ..kya hua koi jawab nahi hei na kuch hoga bhi nahi . ye yaha khada hei na pointing at manik isko ladkiyo ki izzat karna bhi nahi atha hei ...tumlog mujhe gyaan dero ho na suppose for suppose think that on that day anyone of u both are in the place of nandini what would u be ? what would u r state of mind ...tum dono ladki hothe huye bhi kuch nahi kaha ...

Dhruv: par hame showing himself and cabir sharam naam ki cheez hei . ham fab5 ka part jarur hei hame proud hei is baath ko lekar ki we are best itna bhi nahi ki ek ladki ki izat karna bhul jaye ...us din ham ne kuch nahi kaha on the base of our friendship par aaj mujhe yeh kehthe huye sharam aari hei kit um meri friend ho ..par any ways I am still with u par isbaar mei apni pari par ek karonch bhi bardaash nahi karsaktha

Cabir : ha mujhe yeh nahi patha ki manik ne aisa kyu kiya par itna patha hei ki meri friend ke paas jaroor koyi vajah tho hogi par itna bhi strong nahi hei ki kisi ki self respect ko chot pahunchaye he said those words looking at manik

Mukti alya and manik hung their heads down in shame thinking of what all they have done in the pride of fab5 that they can do anything to everyone.while cabir and dhruv are watching their heads hung down unable to see their friends unable to meet their eyes







update after months sorry but i am back with a bang ...please forgive me for the late and pm me for the update ...extremely sorry but please shower with lots and lots of comments and likes

Edited by yamini96 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Awesome..plz plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
awsome
love this story
pls continue ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
nice update dear and update soon plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Wow update...
Finally dhruvbir showed them the mirror..
Fab3 were soo guilty...
Jst want truth to revel...
Luved it..
Waiting for next..
Thmx for pm..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Read all parts in one go and it's amazing story...hate feb 3...eagerly waiting for next update

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