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Hadjer13

@Hadjer13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#561

Wooow That Was Awsome...

Sorry Sorry Long Time No Comment..

But This Story Is Awsome...

Sometimes I Feel Like Manik Is Physico..

But But ... I am In Love Your Writer...

Keep It Up ...

All The Best For The Next..

Till Then God Bless You :*

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pinky

@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#562

awesome story ..he married her so dhruv can marry alya her sis...

he want to pretend infront of dhruv that both love each other ...

he can't see her in tears ..sometimes behave insanely ..with her

he allowed her to keep puppy ...happy seeing her giggling with puppy ..but storm is yet to come ...ty for pm

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anum_6

@anum_6

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#563

Amazing update
Superb
He have care for her but don't show
Superb marawa
Loved it
Update soon

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Avneet kaur

@avneetkaur28

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#564

Hey... Mawara...

Actually I read it before only but I don't remember whether I commented or not...

Do if it is my second comment to m sorry...

BTW... D update was superb...

Manik n nandus marriage and manik treating her this way...

Let's see what's gonna happen...

M eagerly waiting...

D story is going great...

Bilkul different concept which I loved...

And sabse achhi baat...

MANIK AND ALYA BHAI BEHEN...

Ohhh god... I love it...

Mzaa aa gya...

Keep writing...

Continue soon...

AVNEET... (AVI...)

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nanoNikki

@nanoNikki

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#565

Nice story continue waiting for the next update read I just now

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Pinkypie

@Pinkypie

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#566

Wowww totally different just luvv it read all the 3 chapters in one go & now eagerly waiting for the next update/Twist plzzz update soon.!

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#567

Awesome update dear.. Fabulous.

sry dear 4 late commntin...

Thnks so much yaar 4 d pm...

A nw stry... Such a long prt..

It was damn awesum vid a diff concpt...

Manik n alya r siblings... Manik s sach mein heartless...

Poor nandu... Bevaja bhut kuch shna padrhi he..

He s torturin her so much...

He s treatin her lyk his personal toy ..

Feelin vry pitty 4 dhruv... He didnt trust nandu..

Last update was fabulous...

Itna kuch hone ke baad bhi nandu trusts manik...

Vo puppy was so cute.. Nandu ko ek frnd mili...

Waitin 2 knw wt turn will d stry take...

Excitingly waitin 4 nxt update dear..

Do continue dear... Stay blessed..

*$REE*

Edited by Sreeja_babu - 9 years ago

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Zarin Tasnim

@SAFARNAMA

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#568

Hey dear...It's 30.plz update,we are really very hungry for your update

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#569

Promo

"Cabir Dhawan! I Mrs.Manik Malhotra ordering you to step aside!" Nandini shouted furiously looking in Cabir's eyes and Cabir gulped the lump in his throat.

"Mam! You can meet Sir after 20 minutes!"He tried to explain..

"No ..! Mjy un say abi baat krni hai! Before 12 am! I am ordering you to leave my way!!!" She shouted and pushed Cabir aside. She barged into Manik's study and Cabir run behind to stop her. As it was Manik's order to stop Nandini from coming inside because he didn't wanted to meet Nandini before the new day start!...

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"Mjy maid ny btya kay aj k din ap kise ki koi baat ni taalty! Aj k din ap say jo bhi manga jaye ap zarooor dety hain! Mjy bhi kuch mang'na hai! Aur jis Manik Malhotra ko main janti hoon he never go back on his words!" Nandini spoke to Manik confidently. And Manik...He was quietly sitting on the couch with head low..! He knew what she wanted!! He knew she wanted to leave him..! His throat was choking with the mere thought of letting her go..! Don't know but he didn't wanted her to leave..

"Divorce chye?"He asked in a shaking, trembling voice unsure of his own words! Scared of her answer! He knew she will say yes! He knew it..! Damn it! The first and only woman in his life...!!

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Hi everyone! What's up? Finally am back! Thank You for having faith in me and thank you for waiting for me!! Here is the promo! Enjoy it and keep guessing...! I will try to update till tomorrow morning!

Lots of Love,

Mawara!

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