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Posted: 9 years ago

PART -4 {B}



Nandani shockingly traced her finger on her lips...while manik was just looking at her...suddenly a dark red colour crept on her cheeks...to which manik smiled widely...nandani looked at manik blushingly...and sat on the car silently...manik to silently came towards the car and starts the car ...manik looked at nandani



Manik Pov :

Wow that was something...I mean I never felt so good...I never felt it before...well...while kissing her...I was afraid ...I don't know how she will react but to my surprise she too respond my kiss... my little mate...am sure...she felt the same as I felt...God i couldn't wait to mark her as mine...



Nandani was looking outside of the window...


Nandani Pov :

Shit! What just i did...I kissed someone...no ... no ...I kissed my mate...God that was something...my first kiss...that was wow...a blissful one...I know that was not one I expected...I mean I didn't expect him to kiss me when I was mad at him ... but this kiss was something there was a spark...I guess that's bcz we are true mates...we choosed by moon goddess...but still he shouldn't hurt aarya...he is my brother after all...huh...


Three hours passed...nandani who was getting bored...so she hesitatingly asked


Nandani : ummm...how much time we need to reach ur pack...


Manik smiled looking at her and said :well to reach pack house it takes one day...


Nandani shockingly said : what? Are you fre**** serious...how am I supposed to be sit here for a day...


Manik looked at her and said


Manik lovingly said : Mate firstly don't use that kind of language...and secondly u r not going to be sit here for a day bcz we are going to stay at the hotel...


Nandani bitted her toungue and nodded her head as yes and said


Nandani cutely said : sorry for the language


Manik smilingly said : it's okay...but don't use that kind of language again ...okay ...


Nandani nodded her head as yes...while manik smiled looking at her cuteness...
Meanwhile manan reached in the five star hotel...manik quickly come out of the the car and opened the car door for her...to which nandani smiled ...manik holds nandani by her waist and both entered in the hotel...everyone greets them nandani looked at manik confusingly while manik chuckled...and gives her assuring smile...


Manager: so here are the keys alpha...if u need anything just call me...


Manik nodded and looked at nandani who was curiously looking at him


Manik : hmm ...well they all know me...u can say i own this hotel...am a partner...that's how everyone knows me...I hope now everything is clear my little mate...


Nandani nodded her head as yes and smiled...suddenly both stopped by listening a voice


Voice : manik


Manan turned while manik looked at the person in shock while nandani was just standing all clueless...girl range towards manik and give a quick pack on his lips...nandani was just looking at them in shock ...before she could say anything ...girl hugged manik tightly ...


Girl : I missed you so much baby ...


A lone tear came from nandani's eyes after looking at nandani Manik to came out from the shock and pushed the girl hardly...girl looked at manik shockingly...she cupped manik face


Girl : baby what happened...kya hua are you okay? Why did you pushed me? ...


Manik angrily said : enough soha...


Manik looked at nandani who was looking at him with tearfully eyes...manik came towards nandani and tried to touch her but nandani stap back ...manik could see how much she is hurt ...he felt like killing himself for making her cry ...before he could say anything nandani said


Nandani : who is she?


That was the only thing she wants to know...like how can you see ur mate kissing someone else rather than u...how can u even think about it...the thought of ur mate kissing someone else makes thousands of death...before manik could say anything soha said


Soha : tum Kon ho...and why are you talking to MY MANIK...


After listening... my manik ...nandani tears were flowing endlessly...she was shocked by new found information...she could utter was only


Nandani shockingly said : MY Manik


Manik was nodded his head as no...but soha side hugged manik and said


Soha smirkingly said : yes my manik in fact we toh even do it too ...haina manik...


Nandani looked at manik in shock...she couldn't digest the fact her mate...had s** with someone else...nandani ran from there as fast as she can...manik pushed soha hardly bcz of that she fell on the floor...before she could say anything manik growled loudly and ran behind nandani...nandani ran endlessly...her tears were notstopping for a once...she reached nearby forest ... and stops and cried loudly...manik to reached by following her scent...and picked her up in his arms...while nandani looked at him angrily and said

Nandani angrily said : what the hell are you doing?

Manik looked at her but didn't said anything

Nandani :dekho maine kaha abhi ke abhi mujhe niche utaro

Manik :No

Nandani looked at him disgustingly and tried to get off from his grip...

Manik painfully said :why u wanna go? going Away from me is not a solution...I know I did a mistake but please forgive me...

Nandani looked at him angrily

Nandani angrily said : forgive you like really u r asking me for forgiveness...u knew what this time I can't forgive you...never ever...

Nandani get off from his grip and pushed him hardly and said : Dur raho mujhse...

Manik looked at her painfully and holds her hand and said

Manik : I know i did a mistake but believe me I didn't know I ever found my mate...I searched for u but I couldn't found u...and that time I...I just lost my control...and...I...i


Before manik could say anything Nandani clapped and said


Nandani : wow amazing...u just lost ur control...and here am I waited for u...I was f**** waited for u and u ...u just lost ur control...such a bas**** u r ...

Manik : Please at least let me explain

Nandani :what will u explain haa...what will u ...when I was waiting for you...u r f**** some bitch ...that will u explain...bolo naa ...bolo ...ab kyu chup ho ...bolo

Manik was just looking at her while nandani shook her head and started leaving but stop by listening something


Manik :I can't hurt you...I can't leave u...I can't bear a scratch on u...u r my mate...and am urs...I did a mistake but mistakes happen...and that was my past...I can assure you nothing will happen in future...just give us a chance...moon goddess choose us don't make them regret on there decision...


***werewolf mates were choosed by moon goddess...u can reject them but after rejected ur mate u have to face agony...which was unable to bear ***


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So how's it...ho gaya complete ho gaya...well what do you guys think will nandani forgive manik or will choose to leave him ...well do tell me by ur views...and please pray for my grandmom...she is not well...this part was already written so am just posting it right now andone more thing agar aap logo new comment nahi kiya toh next chapter will be on pm ...
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Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
yipeee I am the first one to cmnt awsm update
hawww manik did it that soha
lets see nandini will forgive him or not
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
ye manik to bad niklta jaa rha h
hw vl nandini frgve him

cntnue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updet dear.
plz dear next part updet soon.
stey blessed keep smiling.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsum update

dey were so happy after der first kiss
but ye soha be sake sab bigad diya

pata nhi ab nandini manik ko maaf bhi karegi ya thi


waiting for the next update
update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Manan were soo happy after the kiss...
Yaar this soha messed it up...
Nandu was soo hurt to see her mate with soha...
Manik was soo guilty tht he hurted his mate...
Cant wait for nandu's reaction to manik's words...
Luved it...
Update soon...
And don't worry ur grandma will be good...
May god bless her..
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Posted: 9 years ago
This soha na she always mess things
Awesome update dear
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic , beautiful one.
Continue soon.
Imp note.
I want to inform you that this feb from 19 to 27 .
I am going out of town.
So you will not get any reply from me.
Pm me if you want to otherwise don't ok.
I will be coming back on 29 of feb .
Afterthat continue to reply on your story.
Till than take care.
Be happy.
Edited by sammy1920 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..
Loved it
Its as amazing as promo
Thanks for update
Waiting for next update eagerly
To know nandini's reaction 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
I think Nandini should forgive Manik after all that was his past..more important is that he will remain faithful to her in future..waiting for next update..n yes we r praying for ur grandma..she will be fine soon..take care

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