MANAN SS - ALPHA AND HIS MATE (NEW THREAD LINK ON INDEX )16 FEB - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Story is interesting likin mujhe ye mate cheez samajh nai ai...
Like as u said they are werewolf... to Manik eats others but Nandini nai??
I know ajib question hai...😆
But mujhe werewolf ka kuch samajh nai a raha...

And ye mate ka chakar? Like shuru se Nandini is waiting for her mate and Manik ko kese pata k Nandini oski mate hai??
Actually I guess ye story humans se different hai like werewolf k concepts different...
To kia Thore vo bata sakti ho? So main samajh jaon... phir age story ka zayada maza ae ga...

Main story k bare main lamba comment krti but i'm still in confusion...
Next p karon gi pakka...
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHARACTER SKETCH-

Manik Malhotra- He is a Alpha of beast (Pack name)...He is very arrogant ...rude ...heartless ...for people's ...but in reality he has a heart ...Heart of gold ...He has a past ...that's the reason he quite like this ...he doesn't like to get mingled with everyone ...

Nandani Murthy : She is a daughter of Mr.mukesh murthy alpha of snow White(Pack name)...she is cute ...bubbly ...a fun loving girl ...love her family very much ...can go any extent ...waiting for MATE(PARTNER) like anything ...

Abhimanyu Murthy : Brother of nandani ...he loves nandani like a lot treats her like a princess ...she is his jaan ...His everything ..

Rest of characters will come up when story get unfold ...

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Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello guys ...so here am I come up with ur answers ...

This story is about two werewolves ...manik and nandani ...yes nandani is also a werewolf ...both belongs to the different packs ...many of u asking me what is pack?... So u can say they both belongs to different KINGDOMS...manik is an alpha ...alpha of beast...Guys beast is his pack name only...and alpha means... who rules over there ...u can say kING...next question ...how manik found out nandani is his mate? ...werewolf has a power they can smell there mate ...they can feel her ...but only when they were 18+ and there mate is around...and yes if one of them will die or get hurt they will to feel the same pain ...in short if ur mate is died ...the other person (mate) is also dies ...next question ...why manik attacks on nandani pack? ...manik didn't knew he is going to attack on nandani pack ...he attacks over there to increase the power ...Power of there pack ...why Nandani is not accepting him ?...she is not accepting him bcz she never thought that manik is going to be her mate ...manik killed like thousands of people's ...maybe more ...he is quite famous for his monster's avtaar ...that's why she hates him ...chalo I hope you guys got all ur answers ...if any question came in ur mimd ask me feel free ... I will give u all answers ...

PART-2 (A)


Manik was just looking at her with painfully eyes ...but nandani didn't looked at him for a second ...manik takes a deep breath and said

Manik : okay ...if u don't want to believe ...it's ...it's ur choice ... I ...I wouldn't be force u for anything ...

Nandani looked at him for a second ... she can see the pain but she knew that to he is a monster who was here to killed her family ...she looked away ...a lone tear came from her eyes ...both were silent ...no one is dare to speak anything ...manik was looking at nandani time to time but nandani eyes were just closed ...

Nandani Pov :

Why Aayappaa? ...kyu kiya aapne esa ...I always want a mate ...but I never wished a mate like him ...I never wished a monster ...do I do something wrong? ...if I didn't ...then...why are u punishing me ...why u make him my mate ...why Aayappaa ...why?

Manik who was looking at her without blinking ...he can see the tears in her eyes ...

Manik Pov :

Why she is not accepting me?...Do I do something wrong ? ...Am I not handsome or what? ...no ...no ... i am handsome ...ladkiya marti ha mujhpar ...phir ese kya problem ha ...she should be happy ...am her mate ...but she ...it's like she never want me to be her mate ...god why is so complicated ...but jo bhi ho ...I can't let her go ...she is my mate ...maybe she us not accepting me now ...and I will not force her to accept me too...its her choice completely...but I can't leave her ...I will try to make a place in her heart ...I will show her the love I have for her ...and I knew one day she too accept me ...but for that I need to be strong ...strong for me ...for her ...FOR US ...

Manik holds nandani hand and nandani opened her eyes and looked at at him asking him what ? ...to which he said

Manik : kya ese kya dekh rahi ho ...chalo let's go ...

Nandani angrily said : Listen I told you naa ...am not ur mate ...why can't you understand god dammit ...

Manik smiled at her bcz he expect this ...he caresses her cheeks and said

Manik smilingly said :Listen Mate ...u like me or not ...it's ur problem ...not mine ...now u r my mate ...and u can't change the matter of fact ...and yaah am not going to leave u for sure ...

Nandani was just looking at her eyes ...and tried to read his each and every word ...she can feel whatever he is saying was all right ...but she can't change the fact too ...he is a monster ...nandani tried to free her hand from his hold ...

Nandani shoutedly said : Listen just leave my hand ...am not going to come with u ...do u get that ...

Manik kissed nandani's cheek ...to which nandani makes a oO shape face ...

Nandani angrily said : what the ...

Manik lovingly said : OH MY SWEET WHY ARE U NOT SWEET ...Com'on mate ...u don't have any other option ...

Nandani angrily said : Listen just leave me ...

Manik looked at her in disbelief and mumbled : YEH NAHI MANEGI ...

He picked her up in his arms ...to which nandani looked at him in shock ...

Nandani angrily said : what the hell ...put me down u monster ...

Manik just smirks looking at her and nodded his head as no ...

Nandani shoutedly said : dekho abhi ke abhi mujhe niche utaro varna ...

Manik raised his eye brows and said : varna ...

Nandani : Varna ...varna ...haa ...varna I will shout ...

Manik smirks looking at her childishness ...and said ...

Manik smirkingly said : Go head my sweet mate ...jitna shout karna ha karo ...I wouldn't stop u ...but am not going to put u down ...

Nandani shouts ...bitted his chest ...crying ...for putting her down ...but manik was not putting her down ...at last she gave up and stop struggling ...manik smiled looking at her ...but she gave him a angry glare and mumbled

Nandani mumbled : MONSTER KAHI KAA ...HUH ...

Manik saw this and smiled at her innocence ...

Manik Pov :

God she is so innocent ...bus thodi si akdu ha ...stubborn ha ...but I knew ...like today ...she accepted her defeat ...her heart to accept it one day ...one day ...she to will say ...that she accepts me ...


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So how's it ...mazza aaya ...well sorry ...thodi si short update ha ...actually am busy today ...that's why ...hope you guys understand ...character sketch post bhi post ksr diya ha ...I hope now ...it will help u guys ...and please comment or likes do ...u knew naa ...how much I need it ...tabhi I will update regularly ...
Love you all
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛



Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update yrr...
Welldone... 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for pm.dear..

Amazing amazing update. ..dear

Nandni is not acceptable that he is his mate..

But manik is not leaving her...

Very very beautiful chapter. .

Looking forward to seeing more. ..

You made all the details about the characters are the meaning of their names.

I know it all ..because I have seen movies ...Twilight. .series. ..

So it's going to be a awesome journey of love of mates...

I am liking this story very much. .

Thanks for all the details and beautiful chapter.

Stay blessed dear.


Thanks.



Edited by bhagupur - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Luved it plzzz update dailyyy plzzz plzzz plzzz Update next part ASAP with lots of Manan jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
Thank you for clearing our doubts and giving character sketch... It helped a lot...

Manan are werewolves.. Wow!!!
That's something very different and new...
Nandini is right that he killed so many but she has to see his love for her...
Hope Manik changes soon..

But one question dii is Nandini's family alive or dead???
And another question if they find their mate they can take that person away with them???

Please clarify it...

Thank you..
Take care...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank u for clearing my confusion!!!
Chotu update thee...want a big update plzzz...

Manik ko pehli nazar mein pyaar hogaya??..wowww...amazing story?!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh my god yaar you are awesome uff really love to see manik love struck plz give next chappie as sson as u get time btw will u updtae daily plz reply okay
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Posted: 9 years ago
like the update...thanks fr the pm

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