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smily926

@smily926

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

It is amazing story
Love & pain
Really interesting
Plz continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next part

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powerpuff6

@powerpuff6

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

I loved it. .I really want u to write hot,passionate,intimate, sexy,bold scenes with no limitations. Whether it is make out or a kiss

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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Such a passion and possessiveness

Can kill anybody if try to touch her my god

Hate that aliya nandu ko dur kar ke khud chipak rahi hai

Do continue

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Drashtiii

@Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

I m loving dis manik. .. .

Hey why dont u add attire pic not that m complaining infact u are best at describing the attire but still. .umm. .if u dont mind. .

Update was awesome aliya being the cunning but why nandini believed her i mean can't she see aliya is trying to distance them. .

Anyways want to know what happens next. .

Continue soon. .

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ChocolatePie14

@ChocolatePie14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

THEIR LOVE IS BLISS... I WOULD LOVE TO READ FURTHUR... THANKS FOR THE UPDATE... LOVE YOU ASHNA...

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Pari_mananholic

@Pari_mananholic

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Wow awesome update...

I soo luved thjs kinda manik...

Both were soo hurt to each other with someone else...

Manik is soo mch possessive...

Nandu jst cant control her tears around manik..

Luved it..

Cant wait for nxt update...

Update soon...

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love_is_manan

@love_is_manan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Hey am new reader... Its amazing concept...

"Than ruin me I don't care I want you to ruin me..." that was awesome dialogue... Some magic in that line... Just loved the chapter n hate that aliya... Will love to read more... Update soon

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Nice part
manik is so possesive about nandini
that alya is bitch
waitong for next part

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pnlove

@pnlove

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

it was just awesome

the angry and possessive manik is a treat to read

loved the passion and aggression between them

hope that the misunderstanding clears soon

and that bloody alya should pay for her deed

hoping for some amazing twists

keep up the good work

stay blessed

update soon

Edited by pnlove - 9 years ago

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Sm0405

@Sm0405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

I jst wanna say ... I Loved ... Seriously jst loved it ... Very interesting it is ... The update was toh superb ...

Both love each other very much nd can't stay away from the other ... Bt Nandini did this brkup jst becoz of Manik coz she thinks she is the poison of his life tht too becoz of tht Alya ... Arrrggghhh ... They were soo in love with each other. .. Bt jst tht one incident nd the separation ... Manik was going to kill Maddy ...

Nandini cares fr Manik ... She is concerned fr him nd thts y decided to stay away bt it is becoming difficult fr both of them ... Ooo I can't wait for the next part ... Update it sooonnniishh plz plz plz ...

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