Fight And Make Out Between EX Manan Ts last chapter on page 17 pm L

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hy guys i know you must be thinking what i am doing here with this new ts because i have three ffs or updates are pending i know i know but this ts created havoc in my mind couldn't stop my self from penning it down so i did it well its an intense one like you are going to see jealous manik or jungli bili nandu in this god this intense story are in my nerves now a days shit i need to do something with my self ok now enough of talking enjoy this precap or do let me know how it is through your comments if you want me continue with it there will be adult content in the ts if your not comfortable with it stay away



Manik's pov


"Please stop this it hurts to see you with someone else"i repeated hearing the coldness in my voice tears started to pour down from her face i wiped it

"You know that i don't like someone else touching you still you came here with him"i asked

"Who knows better than me you were about to kill someone" she said quietly a chilled raced up my spine at the look in her eyes.

"So what i can kill someone for you "i said i twirled her with the beat ofp music and i pulled her she banged with my chest

"That's why i walked out i am the curse of your life slow poison stay away from me i don't want to ruin you "she paused her eyes watching me i was holding her tight in my arms she shook her hand, her eyes again filled with tears.

I love her more than my life why can't she understand.
Damn it !

"Than ruin me i don't care i want you to ruin me "before i could stay something more she pushed me away from her and walked out from there.

Should i continue with it i am working on the part one?

Chapter 1 on page 3
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_Myrah_ thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
Its really awesome aashu di..
I jst loved the precap...
Sound really interesting..
Oh god manik really love her so much that he is ready to ruin himself for her...
N the title itself is so exciting n interesting...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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LOVED it..

I don't care..i want u to ruin me.. aww how madly in love he is with her

waiting eagerly..

Title toh amazing hai bhai😃

keep smiling n take care
Edited by lovePANI - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes..please you should continue this...nice start..update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yes yes. .
Ye bhi koi puchne ki baat hai continue dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ufff kya precap hai!!!!! 😳

OMG please continue with the story! Precap has given me jitters scared what the update will do!!😆

Literally love jealous and possessive Manik, he is too hot and my favourite!!!!!!<3😉

Update Chapters soon!!!!!😊
Edited by pdiyar193 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I trust u.
When u will hold pen u will create magic definitely.
Possesssive jealouse manik vs jungli billi nandu.
Waaooo what a hot combination already.
What will happen when u will write about them more.
So plz give us a bang bang update as soon as possible.
Will wait for part 1.
Edited by Sofiafarooq1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So new ts Huh?
But you know what


Your title is just so unpredictable 🤣

Anyways...

Awesome concept

As usual

Waiting for the updates :-P

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Muahhh it's awesome
I totally loved it
Update soon pm me pls
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very very interesting start. .

It looked very intense story. .

I am in ...please continue. .

Looking forward to seeing soon.



Thanks.




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