MaNan OS: Kise Da Yaar Na Vichre..! Updated on PG8/8th-January-2016

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Awesome story. Had tears while Reading the last part.thz is definitely one of the best manan OS I had ever read.its amazing. The way u penned it was commendable. Hats off.the way u scripted manan's bond was fab.manan's convo at the end was phenomenal. Thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

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Isha

@Ishaaaaaa

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Wow.

Ohkay seriously wow.

I'm still under its effects.

This is sooo awesome. Trust me makes me cry.

Such an emotional end.

I loveeed it to the core.

Though, I'm taken aback, of course due to the ending, but woaaa, I have to say you're magic ok?

Keep writing..!!

MaNan Humesha.

Even death couldn't tear them apart. :')

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tree63

@tree63

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Oooh Mawara...I'm in tears while writing this comment.
It was damn emotional yaar.
But really very beautiful.
Their love...is beyond everything
Nothing can separate MaNan...not even death.
I really loved the last line of Manik..."let it go, hold me tight"

Thank u for this amazing piece of work
Thanks for the PM

Take care
Keep smiling ⭐️

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vaishnavi

@vaishnavigarla

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

its very emotional and heart touching
I cried while reading the update
I know some love stories will have sad ending
but story is awesome
atleast they died together

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Aish

@aishapl013

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

This was amazing so 😳 I have no words So this is it!!!! 😃

Edited by aishapl013 - 9 years ago

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anya

@anya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

yaar!!!!

it was damnn emotional...

dat too at d end...

their last words...

i cried too...

u know i am such a sensitive person...

even 4r small things ...i felt soo emotional...

u penned down soo well...

loved it soo sooo much...

really loved dis OS...

u hve a grt writer skills...

nd ur presence of mind was damn well...

it's working lyk extraordinarily...

keep doing ur work...

nd all d best 4r ur future works...

Edited by anya21 - 9 years ago

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Yr emotional kar dia ...

Damn I can't speak. .

I really don't know what to say. ..

I am numb..

Hats off .. grt job👏

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styletheworld

@styletheworld

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

It was just simply amazing

I had tears

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NAVYA64

@NAVYA64

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

awesome

loved it

too emotional and good

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Arunima

@abhutani0311

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Youve rendered me speechless...woww...just..wow!
Like you, even i have nothing to say and i guess that in itself says a lot about how good this might be!
Just...thanks a tonne for the PM!

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