MaNan OS: Kise Da Yaar Na Vichre..! Updated on PG8/8th-January-2016

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Rita_gurung43

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Wow it was simply awesome update I'm too emotional love story I feel like cry

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babyangel-priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

wow I love it 'true love ever die'

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avantiagrawal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

just amazing you nailed it

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saithanmayee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

you made me cry 😭😭

awesome

just don't have words to express how beautiful you have written

loved it

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stars_fireflies

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Speechless...

U really have penned it down well...

Superb

Ty for the pm

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mananluvpani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Amazing...
N emotional ...
U r an awesome writer ..
Waiting for your other stories.

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gracyparmar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

I m speechless its awsm and damn emotional..

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Aayushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

It was amazing..👏

It didn't look like I was reading it ,it was like I was seeing it in front of my eyes.

It was like I was feeling their pain ,their love ,their separation everything!

It was something that can't be described.

How you managed to do that I don't know but it was something very realistic and more respect to you as a writer after I have read this!

I agree it was an old-school idea but just blew me away.!!

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mickeym

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

awesome dear .. loved it ..
emotional one ..

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mananpreet21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Wow superb and amazing part
Bht emotional th padte waqt mai apne aap ko rone se rok ni pae
That jerl aryaman ek to uski father ki galti aur uski wajah se manik ko business mai itna bada loss hua
Aur usne manan ko bina kisi galti ki sajah de di
Flashback is too gud they love each other so much.
Aiyappa ne nandu ki wish sun lu
Bht emotinal os ha mujhee abhi bhi rona aa rh ha
U r an awsme and super talented writer.
Thanx for the pm and for this amazing stry
Waiting for ur other stries
Love u alot
Simran

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