MaNan OS: Kise Da Yaar Na Vichre..! Updated on PG8/8th-January-2016

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Posted: 9 years ago
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The title is punjabi words..! This story is of MaNan only..! Don't relate 'Yaar' with fab 5..! In this title 'yaar' signifies for 'lover'..!


The real translation is : "May the lovers never seprate..!"

I am going to try something really new! Something close to reality..! Something which is not fantasy..! I hope you all will try to understand, accept and digest some facts..! Because facts are reality..!

Glimpse

"Please let us go..!"Manik shouted helplessly trying to free himself from the ropes with which he was tied with the arms of chair.


"Shut up..!"Aryaman barked and rewarded Manik with a tight slap he hissed unintentionally and another tear escaped Nandini's eye who was lying half unconscious on the dirty floor hands tied on the back. She too was in so much pain but seeing 'her' lover in torture was more hurtful and painful for her..


"Dekh teri fight mj say hai na! Tu maar lay mjy! Kill me..! But please let Nandini go!" Manik spoke in a pleading tone his eyes were locked with Nandini's half opened ones..!
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I will try to update as soon as possible but the trust you guys have in me plz try to mantain it..! I love you all..! If you don't have trust in me then there is no use for me to write! Please do leave your comments so that i will come to know whether you want me to write or not..!

Lots Of Love,
Mawara

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jst loved this glimpse n loved the title more..
Eagerly waiting for the update..
Will be waiting for the update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Truly heart touching title...and also the glimpse seems..amazing...do update soon...jldiii...plzzz...luv u lots...thanxxx
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This Punjabi title is really interesting .. would love to read something different. ... .I always have full faith in u.. so koi bhi work pd skti hu.. Glimpse was nicee.. waiting for it ... Love Geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It seems to be interesting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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i always loved ur stories...n have a strong trust on ur writing...
so plz continue soon...waiting fr reading it...
like the glimpse...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sounds interesting.
We trust you humesha
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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JUST CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER... IT SEEMS TO BE INTERESTING... TRUST ME I TRUST YOU... LOVE YOU MAWU...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its very interesting
Would love to read something new
Will be waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I somehow just read the thread owners name first, saw it was you and opened it immediately. Baad mein main heading paddhi ki hai kya yeh :p
Hehehe, yaaay.
I love fiction closer to reality. This would be fun! :D

Too excited. 👍🏼
Take care. :*

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