MaNan FF/SS : PUNARVIVAAH - part-7a and 7b on pg 25 (INDEX ON PG 1) 25 - Page 6

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Part 4a:

AT LULU MALL:

Manik is searching madly for Manvi. But he doesnt find her so he become worry and again started seach without leaving a single area.

On the other side, Nandini hugs crying Manvi. After some time Nandini breake the hug and cupped her face and wiped her tears but she dont know thar unknowingly she herself is sheding tears. Manvi wiped Nandini's tears as well and this made Nandu smile. Then Nandini kisses her cheek and same is done by Manvi. Nandu and Gayathri smiled brightly by seeing her cute antics. Then suddenly Nandu ask

Nandu : Manvi bacha thumare saath kon aaya hai???

Manvi : papa

Nandu : Wo kaha hai???

Manvi : Patha nai. (said with worried tone)

Nandu : Ab kyaa karu??? Bacha papa ka naam kyaa hai???

Manvi : Manik Malhotra.

Suddenly Manik came there and take Manvi in his arms and started kissing her whole face. Nandu and Gayathri smiled seeing this. They both can see how much he worried and care for his daughter by seeing his face. Suddenly his mood changes and Started shouting at Manvi

Mani : Manvi meine kithni baar kaha ese anjaan logo se baath math karo. God know wo kese log hai.

Manvi : Papa wo aunt... ( when Manvi tried to defend Nandu Manik interrepted her)

Mani : Meri baath hamesha yaad rakna. (then turn to Nandini angrily and said) Or thum log kya kar rahi ho meri bachi ke saath he???? Kidnap karana chahthi ho???? Or koyi or intension???? Bathao muje???? Ese kaise kar saktha ho thum log??? Thum logo se paas bhi ek bacha he na??? Agar mein esa karne ki koshish ki tho (before he could complete Nandini stop him)

Nandu(said while crying his hurting words): Bas kijiye aap plsss bas kijiye... Kya keh ri ho aap???

Mani : sach keh rahi hu mein ( still angry towards them)

Gayathri and Manvi were in tears seeing this. Whole mall were looking towards them. Hearing Maniks voice Adi wakes up and started crying calling his Mom Nandu.
Nandu look toward Adi and take him from Gayathri and said angrily said to Manik

Nandu : Tumse baath nai karna hi acha he and ha thum sab kaha woh hi sach hai. Ab kush (saying this she with Adi and Gayathri go from there making Manik all confused).

guysss plsss forgive me for this update. I know this is really a bad one. Plsss comment friends.

Ur story is very nice. Very eager to know what happens next.

awww...manan fought in first visit itself😆
waiting for more tashan
hope manvi makes her dad understand that he was wrong
nice update👍🏼

Awsm update...

Manvi..such a swtheart...
Finally manan met..bt impression wr nt good...

Continue soon..nd pls post a long nxt...

Nyc
plzzz good ho ya bad bas Manan add kia karooo n update regularlyyy hopee next part jaldi update hooo n

Shadi jaldi karwaooo plzzz bcoz its Punarvivah sooo plzzz plzzz plzzz

Ek slap parna chahiye manik ke face par

Manik is too much
bt the bond of manvi nd nandu is awsm
continue soon

Part 4b :

MALHOTHRA MANSION :

Manik and Manvi reaches Malhotra mansion. Manik is confused and worried becoz of thinking Mall incidence and Manvi. Without speaking to Manik Manik went directly to Nyonica and sit in her lap. By seeing Manvi not talking to her Papa Nyonica asked

Nyo : kya hua meri doll ko??? Kyu pareshan lag rahe ho???

Manvi : Papa se gussa hu mein.(she said angrily)

Nyo : kyu???

Without saying anything she went away.

Nyo : kya hua Manik.??? Meine Manvi ese kabhi dheka. Any problem bacha???

Mani : kuch nai maaa. Mein Manvi ko dhek kar aatha hu. (saying he moved to Manvi's room)

DHAWAN MANSION :

Nandini, sleeping Adi and Gayathri reached there.

Sooraj : ithni dher kyu se kaha the Saas bhahu or mera pyara potha???

Nandu : Dad Mall the. Mein fresh hokar aatha hu

Sooraj : teek hai.

With that Nandu moved to her room with Adi.

Sooraj : kya hua hamari Nandu??? Kya karu??? Varun ke jaane baad hamari Nandu ... (while saying this tears brimmed and stopped Gayathri started crying thinking about Varun and theirs Bahu's fate)

whole conversation were heared by Nandu and she started crying her heart out and this disturbed sleeping Adi. He woke up and call her

Adi : maaa

Hearing Adi she come towards him only after wiping her tears becoz he doesn't like her crying. He is very possesed about her.

Nandu : meri Adi kyu jag gayi???

Adi : aap lyu (kyu) lo (ro) lahi (rahi) ho??? Maa ko thaa (patha) na je (muje) rying (crying) acha nai lagtha (he asked innocently)

Nandu with cute pout and holding ear : shollyyy meri bachaaa.

Seeying this Adi smiled as well Nandini.

After some time adi slept not before their daily war- making Adi eat some is equal to war. Nandu is looking at the full Moon and standing near window becoz as usual sleep is far away from her. She is thinking about Varun and tears are continuously flowing. Suddenly she remembered about Manvi and started feeling sad thinking her condition without a Mother (she is thinking that Soha was dead) and also smiling thinking about her. Suddenly a someone hold her shoulder and she turned to look at the person

Nandu : Maaa! Aap abi thak sooyi nai???

Gaya : yeh sawaal muje bhi thuje puchna chahiye na Nandu??? Ithni raath ko kya soch rahi ho???

Nandu : Mein Manvi ke baare mein soch rahi hu maa. Patha nai I feel some connection towards her or someone is puuling me towards her. May be becoz of her cute antics (she smiled)

Gayathri : cute tho he wo.

Suddenly Manik's face come in her mind and her mood changes completely to smiled face to angry face.

Continue...

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Comment plsss plsss plsss

Awesome update..
Nice story...
pls do continue