MaNan FF/SS : PUNARVIVAAH - part-7a and 7b on pg 25 (INDEX ON PG 1) 25 - Page 4

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Part 3a:

Malhothra Mansion
All are having their breakfast except Dhruv (He went for London with his friends and his cousin bro Aryamann- In my story there is no Fab5).
After having breakefast Raj and Cabir went to office. Manik work in Malhotra fasion company. And Manik also started to go to his office not without seeing his jaan

he came to his jaan's room to see his jaan in uniform and standing with an angry pout.
Mani: kya hua mera jaan ko????
Manvi: papaaa (hug him and started crying)
Mani: kyu ro rahi ho mera jaan???(he asked worriedly).
Manvi: missing papa aaj meri nursury mei aaj ek competition he.
Mani: tho kya mera jaan hi jeethugaa naa.
Manvi: nai mei nai jeethugaa.(crying without stoping).
Mani: kyu???
Manvi: maa nai he na mera paas. Is game bacho ke saath maa wanted to participate. Papa muje mama chahiye.meri saari friends tease me that Iam a bad girl thats Y meri muje choda.
Mani (tears are filled with his eyes but tried not no fall them and says): nai jaan. Mera jaan bhohath acha he. Thum jaanthi hu na sab thume kithnaa pyar karthi hu??? (Manvi noded her head). Soo aaj mera jaan nursury nai jaaugi par mere saath office jaugi na jaan???
Manvi: mmm (she just humed but Manik know what he have to do for making her simile).
So Manik said: office jaane ke baad hum ice khaane ke lia bhi jaugi. Teek hai???( Manvi smiled whole heartedly by hearing the name of ice cream)
This all conversation is heard by Navya and she herself is crying by thinking about Manvi. Its not that they doesnt care about her but that she need a Mother.
After that both papa and jaan went to office.

Finally i got ur story...

pls continue...

Amazing update...
Loved it to the core...
Very well written...
Cont soon...
Pm Me when u update next plz...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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Originally posted by: lovePANI

Finally i got ur story...

was searching like anything uff...

it was cute..whole 3 update..

i loved it...

aaaiii when u will show nandu...???

plzzz pm

keep smiling n take care

I will show Nandu in next part.

Originally posted by: lovePANI

Finally i got ur story...

was searching like anything uff...

it was cute..whole 3 update..

i loved it...

aaaiii when u will show nandu...???

plzzz pm

keep smiling n take care

I will show Nandu in next part. And thank u dear

Nice concept... beautifully written...
Continue soon...
Pls...pm me...