MaNan FF/SS : PUNARVIVAAH - part-7a and 7b on pg 25 (INDEX ON PG 1) 25 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Excellent update...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
I knw k iss story k liye family convo jarooorriii h but plzzz try to add thr convo less but all emotion in small convo ok bcoz now its clear how is thr families thr bonds



sooo ooo Plzzz add Manan thr meets n wtever needs for Manan to meet again plzzz

bcozzz already its 4 chaps n its heigh tym...Sooo now u should add More Manan

plzzz update next part ASAP jaldi jaldi jaldi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: A12609z

I knw k iss story k liye family convo jarooorriii h but plzzz try to add thr convo less but all emotion in small convo ok bcoz now its clear how is thr families thr bonds



sooo ooo Plzzz add Manan thr meets n wtever needs for Manan to meet again plzzz

bcozzz already its 4 chaps n its heigh tym...Sooo now u should add More Manan

plzzz update next part ASAP jaldi jaldi jaldi

within 2 chap I will try what u said k.

Thank u for ur suggesion dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Amazing... Continue soon...
Plz give longer updates... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Please please continue soon really looking forward pretty please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Amazing
Nice story
Manvi is so cute Awww feeling so bad for her she miss her maa
She don't want to go school due to that because her friend think she is bad that's why her maa leave her
Adi and Nandini both are so cute.. Soo pure.. Adi can't see her mother in tear aww
Manik you did wrong how can u blame Nandu which she didn't did and shout on her soo bad
You should apologize to her for that..
Manvi u did good by getting angry with dada lol
Both their families want them to get married for good future and kids but in their heart they both are scared due to their past incidents and somewhere in the line they still love their partners who left them..
Azaming story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
amazing...
beautifully penned...
stay blessed n take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
plz continue..

loved the chap..

love the emotion between daughter n father

son n morher... so cute

hmmm attraction connection😃

keep smiling n take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4c :

AT MALHOTHRA MANSION :

Manvi is really angry on her papa and said him that 'PAPA AAP ESE KYU US AUNTY SE BAATH KI'. Manik himself dont know why he was soo rude towards her. So he didnt answered anything but said with an sad pout 'KYA KARU BACHA MEIN DAR GAYI THI. THUME KONA NAI CHAHTHI MEIN. SORRY MEIN ESA NAI KARUGA'. Hearing this Manvi's anger flew away and she smiled and said whole incident to him. This truth made him guilty.

What she said made him completely shock that His Jaan is ask him to apologise to her sweet aunty for his rude behavior. Seeing his expression Manvi is naughtily smile becoz she know her papa dont apologise to anybody. Finally he agreed for his Jaan.


After some days both Malhothras and Dhawans are going to Guruvayoor (one of the popular Temple of Lord Krishna- Kerala) in train and both families were near but not soo near compartment.

When is going to bathroom she saw Nandu on the way. Both were college mates and were friends. Nandu is her junior. Navya went near her and

Nav : Nandu???

Nandu : Navya di aap????

Both were surprised to see each other and were talking nonstop. But suddenly Navya ask her about marriage and especially Varun becoz she know about love birds (at the same time Sooraj come with Adi)

Adi : Maaa (saying he jumbed to Nandu's lap)

seeing Adi Navya smiled and ask about him and she happily replied

Nav : Varun kaha hai Nandu wo nai aayi thumare saath???

Hearing his name she run away to the door cryingly. Sooraj followed her. At that time Gayathri said everything and hearing this Navya cursed herself fo asking her about this. After some time she goes from there.

Navya come back to Malhothra's with a sad face. She felt bad for her. Seeing her like this Cabir asked WHAT HAPPEN NAVYA???hearing his voice she came back to realty and told them eveything. All become sad. At the same time Manvi and Manik changed their seat to next compartment becoz he dont like this kind of discussion.

Suudenly Cabir said

Cabir : Dad ! Kya mein us Nandini or Manik ki shadi karva sakthi ho???

All were shocked. But after thinking they thought its right and Raj and Nyonica decided to talk to her parents. But Nyonica is not soo interested in this proposal becoz she is a mother of a baby boy.

Continue...

Comment plsss plsss plsss friends.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome and plz plz continue with the story its quite interesting and plz give lamba wala updates

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