MaNan FF/SS : PUNARVIVAAH - part-7a and 7b on pg 25 (INDEX ON PG 1) 25

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ankita627

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Awsm part...bt pkzz update long part...plzz

happy new year..

keep smiling..

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shoana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

interesting start unni...
amazing prologue..
manik is ditched y his wife and nandini is widow😔
so both families are forcing them for punarvivah🤔
continue soon
and plzz pm me nxt update...if possible

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sadia_mohona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Nice start...but chotu sa...love the update

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Unnimaya_MaNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Iam sooo sorry to update small part. Try to update a long part. K. And thank u 4 supporting and commenting friends. Also sorry not to pm guyzzz.

Part 2:

Manbir enter to Manvi's room and saw that Navya Cabir's wife is trying the best to wake up their princess. They both laughed by seeing this stand there without making noice.
Nav: Manvi beta utho na. Nursury jaana hena.
Manvi: nai Manvi ko nai jaana hai nursury mein.
Nav: tho kya karna hai meri pari ko.
Manvi: sona hai (sleepy voice)
Nav: Papa ko bhulau??
Manvi: nai Manvi uthugi. Par nursury nai jaana hai(said with cute pout)
At that time Manbir join them
Mani: Kyu nai jaana nursury mein mera jaan???( take her in his arms)
Manvi: papa I dont want to go. Teachers are very bad. They students ko maara hai.
Mani: jaan woh sab ache keliye hai na (Manvi nooded)
Cavya were laughing looking at father-daughter talk and smiling.
Mani: jaan badi maa ko pareshaan math karna bacha.
Manvi: nai and I love u papa.(kissef his cheek)
Mani: love u too jaan. Ab badi maa ke paas jao. Be good girl k.(he also kissed her back)
Manvi: k papa (manik handle her to navya)
Cabir: pari aaj muje meri kiss nai mili (said with fake sadness)
Manvi: soory bade papa(and kisses his cheek too and Cabir smiled)
After some time Manbir left the room.

Comment plsss. Will try to update tomorrow. Becoz my uncle (mothers brother) is comming from Riyadh. So Iam going to receive him after college. So will try to update. K.