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hopefully tomorrow dear

hmm waiting...
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Part 27 Dark days


Manik stayed at Dhruv's house almost every waking hours until all the formalities and the funeral was over. He stood as a pillar of support for badimaa and Soha. His father's presence gave him the much-required courage to handle everything smoothly. He took upon himself to console the other FAB 5 members who were devastated beyond comprehension.

It was after the funeral that he shut himself in his room, never once leaving its sanctuary for three whole days. Repeated attempts from FAB 5 or his father failed to get him out of the self-imposed solitude.

Nandini had seen Manik during the funeral service and a few times before at Dhruv's house. He appeared distant and withdrawn. Although she was yearning to comfort him, the continuous presence of the FAB5 around Manik stopped her from approaching him.

After the funeral service, she called Rahim chacha almost every hour to check on Manik's condition. When she learned that Manik was slipping into depression, she lost no time to get to Malhotra mansion.

Rahim chacha guided Nandini to Manik's room. Nandini's heart went out to him on seeing him sitting on the floor hugging his guitar to him. Nandini crouched to him and hugged him to her. He went to her arms like a small baby, tears running down his face without ceasing. Manik was breaking down in front of her. She patted his head, which was lying against her chest, whispering soothing words to him, crying with him and for a friendship that was lost to eternity.

They stayed that way for a few more minutes until his tears ceased and he started talking to her.

"Dhruv... he was my everything...my buddy...I never failed him... until now...whenever He used to get seizures attacks, I went to him... helped him come out of it... In fact, we had got him completely cured of it...the doctors said he would never get it again. But they were wrong... so wrong... and look what happened. I lost my best buddy. This time... this time... my focus was not here. I was not with him. In fact, I was busy with you...I got distracted.."

Nandini remembered of how shocked she was to hear that Dhruv had died choking on his on vomit during an epileptic attack. Immediately after Manik and Nandini had left Dhruv's house , badimaa had gone to the nearby house for satsang leaving Dhruv alone at home. Manik, on leaving Nandini's house had received a panicked call from Soha who arrived home from the party to find an unconscious Dhruv. Manik rushed him to the nearest hospital where the doctors moved Dhruv to the ICU. He was declared dead almost immediately afterwards.

She also remembered the events of that ill-fated day and the after effects. She would never be able to share it with Manik, even if she wanted to. She had promised badimaa.

Manik was going on murmuring and getting a bit hysterical by then.

"Nandini, I told you to stay away from me... I told you.. we are not meant to be... not meant to be...not good together... I lost my Dhruv...forever...I could not help him... I failed him... I was with you.. I should have been with him..."
Manik started moving back and forth in despair. Nandini knew he was slipping into hysteria.

She hugged him to her again and said
" Manik... You are not responsible for Dhruv's..." She could not take the word 'death' on her tongue. "Please Manik, Don't torture yourself like this..I will ask Rahim chacha to prepare haldi milk for you...I will come now".

She tried to get up. But he did not leave her hand and continued saying "Nandini.. You know, there was this guitar striker that we , me & Dhruv found propitious, our lucky charm- a symbol of our friendship. We lost it and Dhruv feared something was going to happen- something inauspicious. And look, it happened...I never believed in such things...But now I think... it was true all along"

The mention of the guitar striker brought memories of Dhruv's last words to her.. "Hold on to it Nandini...just as you should hold on to Manik, no matter what...". Fresh tears welled up in her eyes.

Manik continued unburdening to Nandini. "Nandini, Do you know why I call Nyonika by her name. She was never a mother to me. She did not want me. She just wanted my father's money and status. She was my Dad's Secretary who seduced him and became pregnant. My father married her for the baby. But she went and aborted him..Then... when she felt loosing control of my father..had me..and would have aborted me if my father had not stopped her. She only cared about her appearance...even now, I am only a means for her to reach my father. I was unwanted, Nandini... Unwanted...But Dhruv, he made me feel wanted. I grew up with Dhruv in Dehradun. We were like family. Badebaap, badimaa, Dhruv, Soha.. they were my family. They gave me all the love in the world...and now, I have lost it all...I failed badimaa...I failed them..." Nandini did not know how to console him.

" Manik... Please calm down. You have to be strong for badimaa...she needs you to comfort her... be for her always...like a son...You can be a son to her...Manik...You are still wanted...Badimaa wants you...Manik...I want you ...I need you...Soha has lost her brother, she wants you...the FAB 5 needs you..." Nandini was crying again. They remained like that, in each others arms, calming each other and being comforted by the other's presence.

Nandini managed to make Manik have a glass of haldi milk after which, she made him lie down on the bed. She sat near him till he slipped into a disturbed slumber, incoherently muttering in his sleep. She tucked him in and was just getting ready to leave when Cabir and Ranbir came in. They were equally surprised to see her there. She immediately motioned them to remain quiet pointing at a sleeping manik. Ranbir followed her out of the room.

" Nandini, what are you doing here? Or am I missing something? "

Before she could answer, Cabir joined them "So, what I suspected all along was true. You are seeing each other..."

" Cabir... Ranbir... Its not what you people think. Our relationship... we are yet to give a name to it... Let Manik answer this question when he is ready. Till then, I want to be with Manik.. for Manik... until he comes out of this dark period... he is really scathed. You know how close he was to Dhruv..."

Cabir turned away to control his tears while Ranbir nodded at it and said " We were all were pretty close to him. But then, you are correct. Manik would be the most affected. Rahim cahcha told that he drank some milk. I think you are behind this improvement in his condition. Nandini, we don't care what you are to each other. If you can bring Manik out of this darkness, then I plead you to continue doing what you have been doing. Our support is always there with you."

It took Manik nearly a month to get back to his routine, with Nandini's help who made sure to be with him at every available opportunity. The FAB 5 supported her in every possible way.

Although he did not completely heal, Manik started attending college after a month. He and Nandini, along with FAB 5 , Navya and Ranbir frequently visited badimaa who had still not come out of the shock of loosing her son.

During this painful period, Nandini bonded with the other FAB 5 members, especially Alya, who had apologized to her for her behavior at the first available opportunity. The FAB 5 had accepted the fact that Nandini was someone special for Manik, even though there was no open discussion about it amongst them.

Life was getting back to normal. In the meantime, the FAB 5 took initiative to convert their music block as a memorial for Dhruv and they renamed it as DV block. Nevertheless, the FAB 5 stopped performing in any college programs altogether, until badimaa called them all together and reprimanded them for this decision. She told them that Dhruv would never have wanted them to stop performing on stage. On her insistence, they decided to conduct a music program in memory of Dhruv, which turned out to be emotional and touching. Manik's heart wrenching words on Dhruv, moved the audience to tears.

Another academic year came to an end. Fresh students joined SPACE.

The FAB 5, sans Dhruv entered into their 4th year and Navni to their second year of college.

Navya and Nandini shared a deep bond. Navya confessed to Nandini about her love for Cabir. She had understood by then that Cabir was a very genuine guy who was compassionate and caring unlike the outer appearance displayed to the world. She had confessed her love to Cabir one day, while they were in Carmel Home, but he had rejected her saying that he was not interested. Navya was not ready to give up. Her persistence irritated Cabir and in a weak moment, Cabir shared his medical condition with her. Cabir was also too fond of Navya and did not want to hurt her feelings. Navya was devastated, nonetheless, not ready to give up on her love. Her love grew exponentially on hearing the true reason of Cabir's rejection.She decided that she would fight for her love, after all love is all about accepting the other with all their faults. So, she started literally stalking him with love messages, cards etc and used every available moment to express her love whether in public or private. She, once made a pizza for Cabir in the college canteen, the toppings arranged to show the words' I love you' and served him, in front of all the students. This melted Cabir's resolve to ignore her. He took her in his arms without uttering a word. Words were not necessary.

Harshad tried his luck with Mukti once again.

" you don't have to run away from love, Mukti.I know you don't believe in this emotion. Everyone in this world wish to be loved and to love. Don't be hard on yourself. Give us a chance"

" how many times have I told you that there is no us? Can't you get this very simple thing. I don't want love ... Not from you... Not from anyone. Just leave me alone"

" Mukti, just because your parents have had a failed marriage, doesn't mean that..."

" Can you just leave me alone. I hate to talk about my parents..."

" Mukti, I can never leave you alone."

Mukti turned to the last resort. Use Manik card.

" Okay, Here is the deal. You have to make Manik like you. If Manik changes his attitude towards you, I promise you that we will have a chance."

" you know very well that Manik hates me."

"Yes. That is why I put up this condition."

" it was that one incident.. Years back in Dehradun.. When we were still kids... I challenged Dhruv to climb a tree and when he got too scared to climb down, I left him stranded there for hours. "

" yes and it was that incident that triggered Dhruv's epilepsy.. When he first showed the symptom. Manik never forgave you for that..,and he will never will. "

" and you don't know how many times I apologized for that .. Not only to Dhruv but to all of you."

" yeah... But matters that concerned Dhruv... Manik is very sensitive and he will never forgive a person who has hurt Dhruv, intentionally or unintentionally. And, that's your challenge. Take your time. But don't show me your face ever again, if you fail..."

That was how Mukti challenged Harshad to prove his love to her.

Alya's heart never healed. She had a secret relation with Dhruv that she never shared with anyone. She had fallen for him hard and her love remained unrequited. Alya had in fact turned to Dhruv to escape her break up with Manik and she had, in the process, lost her heart to him.

Everything was going smoothly for Nandini. Manik was slowly becoming his old self- playful and teasing. Nandini's and Manik's relation was also going uphill until the day Manik learnt about the incidents of Dhruv's last day on earth.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome...read 3 parts in a go...
Edited by _Samthanian_ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Wat nandhini promised to badimaa? I hope that secret wont seperate manan.
Wat vl hpn to manan?
Edited by charanyaaj - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ahh very bad.
You have still kept it as mystery from both us and manik.
Continue soon and reveal the truth.
What had happened.
So dhruv asked nandini to hold on to manik
So he is okay with nandu manik relation.
Can't guess anything.
So pls update next part very very soon.
And thanks for pm.
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awesome story


loved it
pls update next part soon
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Part 28 Soha Strikes


A year later

The festival of lights, Diwali was round the corner. The Malhotra's, as usual, decided to host the SPACE Diwali party at their residence.

The previous year, the FAB 5 had not celebrated any festivals. Diwali, Holi, New years, Valentines were all boycotted by them as they were in mourning for Dhruv. So this Diwali was the first of the festivals they would be celebrating after the unfortunate incident.

Manik and Nandini had not gone official about their relationship. Only their very few close friends were aware of the growing bond between the two, mainly because Manik and Nandini never openly acknowledged it.

As instructed by Manik, Nandini arrived to Manik's house promptly at 6. She was surprised to find the venue almost empty. She was wearing a lehenga choli of deep pink and black combination. She had curled her hair into waves and left it dancing about her; a few strands caressing her face. Rahim chacha met her at the reception and escorted her to Manik's quarters. Nandini had brought a pack of sweets for Rahim chacha who was very happy to receive it. He blessed her tearfully when she touched his feet for blessings and wished aloud that she would, one day, become his mistress, the mistress of Malhotra mansion. Oh hearing this, Nandini blushed and averted her face, only to see Manik looking at her and smirking.

Manik was still in his black vest and shorts. He ushered her inside and closed the door.

"Manik. You are not ready yet? The party starts at 6 na?"

"No. The party starts only at 8."

"but I thought... You told 6. That's why I came so early...Ok. I will go and come back later,"

Manik stopped her by holding her hands and pulling her into his arms, as she turned to leave the room.

"I deliberately misguided you. I wanted some time alone with you. Its been a while now. Because of your not to go public and Touch-me-not policy" Manik started mimicking Nandini" somebody will come Manik, I am getting late Manik, Not now Manik..."

He stopped, looked at her deeply and continued in a subdued voice " I am starved of private moments with you. So, now we have an entire 2 hours in front of us..."

" Manik... You lied to me..How dare you.. What must have Rahim chacha thought? He must have thought I deliberately came early to spend time with you.."

"Rahim chacha is happy that you have come early...Didn't you hear what he said.. He must be already anticipating the no. of kids that we may have and the names for them too.."

"Manik!!!"

"What?? ...shh...just...quiet " Manik was no more in the mood to talk. He softly brushed his nose against her cheeks and inhaled deeply.

Nandini was lost.

"You look soo...sooo yummy...I want to eat you up..." Manik touched her other cheeks lightly with his lips, slightly parted so that his tongue trail a wet path down her cheeks unto her neck.

Nandini slowly pushed him, but he did not budge.

" Manik...no..."

Manik left her shortly, only to bend down and pick her up . He carried her to the inner room and put her down gently on the bed. Nandini was lost in his eyes, mesmerized by the love and passion that it displayed.

He was kneeling beside the bed on the floor and they remained that way, lost in each other's eyes for a few more minutes. He quickly pecked her on her nose, got up from his kneeling position and said to her while removing his vest "I will take a quick shower and be back. You wait for me. Ok?"

"for..for what? " Nandini could not help ask in all her innocence. Manik grabbed a towel from his cupboard and answered her "to complete what we just started" and added when he saw her eyes going wide.

" Relax Nandini. I will never do anything that you don't want me to do"

Manik took a quick shower. Nandini was sitting on the bed and watching some music channel on the LED when Manik came out wearing a towel. On seeing his undressed state, Nandini closed her eyes with her palms and shrieked " Manik.. what are you wearing?"

"Why? I will remove this also, if you did not like it."

Nandini left her eyes firmly closed while Manik looked at her with a slight smile. Nandini could hear the sound of a cupboard being opened and the rustling of clothes. After a while, she felt a warm touch on her shoulders and a voice near her ear which said" Nandini , you can now open your eyes. I am decent enough" She opened her eyes to see Manik dressed in shorts. He was rubbing his wet hair with a towel.

" You are not decent enough. Go wear a shirt"

" Why? Does this image of mine disturb you? Does it make you want to touch me? You can, you know...I have given you the right to touch me..."

" Manik...stop it. I think its getting late..The party must be starting soon...I will wait for you down in the lawn"

Nandini hastily got up from the bed, but tripped on her flowing skirt and fell straight into the arms of Manik.

They shared an eye-lock, a lip-lock and amidst the make out session that followed, neither of them were aware of a pair of eyes that watched them in the darkness, eyes spitting venom at the cuddling couple.

Soha was looking forward to the evening and the Diwali party at the mansion. She rarely got opportunities to spend time with Manik these days. Manik often visited badimaa. However, most of the time, the entire FAB 5 accompanied him. Therefore, she decided to reach early for the party and spent some time alone with Manik . Soha knew the way around Malhotra mansion and went directly to Manik's bedroom. She tried the door and it opened soundlessly. In order to surprise Manik, she tiptoed inside. She could hear sounds coming from his bedroom, of heavy breathing and muffled voices. She pushed open the door slightly to peek inside, fully expecting to see Alya, but got the shock of her life to find Manik and Nandini, kissing each other deeply, lost in throes of passion. Manik was only dressed in shorts, Nandini plastered on him like a second skin, his hands on her bare waist and hers tangled in his hair.

Soha was surprised, would be an understatement. She was flabbergasted. She knew that Manik and Alya were never really in love. And that knowledge had kept her going all this while. Although, she had suspected something amiss when Nandini had come to visit their house, she was comforted that her bhai would never go after a girl whom Manik was interested in. She had grown up imagining Manik as her Prince. She had woven all her dreams and future around Manik. She knew that Manik had never reciprocated her feelings, but it was only a matter of time and Soha was ready to wait. She had also been keeping a close watch on Manik-Alya relationship and had been relieved to find the graph going down. However, Nandini! she never thought Manik would fall for Nandini's charms. For one, Nandini was not Manik's type. She was too plain and middle class. As usual Soha had failed to see what men saw in Nandini, her spirited demeanor coupled with her innocence that attracted them to her like moth to a flame.

Soha's first urge was to interrupt the couple , but on second thoughts another plan started taking shape in her mind and forgetting the party, she rushed out of the Malhotra mansion to her own house in search of that one thing that could help her to break Manik-Nandini relationship- forever.

Nandini left Manik's room soon afterwards and joined Navya who had arrived by then. She had convinced Manik to leave her with great difficulty. He had lost his cool self around her and had she not put her feet down and extricated herself from him forcefully, he would not have left her. Both of them were that affected by the intimacy they shared in the confines of his room.

The party was being held in the lawn adjoining the Mansion's swimming pool. The house and the pool area was decorated with fairy lights and diyas. The water of the pool shone with the reflection of the lights. Drinks and various delicacies were being served and music was being played in the background.

Manik had joined the FAB 5 soon afterwards. He had been throwing numerous glances at Nandini communicating through his eyes for her to join him, which she had disregarded almost continuously. Later when various couples entered the dance floor, Manik had approached Nandini for her hand and pulled her to the dance floor ignoring her protest.

They had swayed to the rhythm of the slow music, Manik's hands playing havoc to her senses. By the time the music had ended, Nandini had been a huge mess, the tension had been so palpable between them that Manik was tempted to take her up to his room again to bring what they started earlier to its natural conclusion.

After the dance and the elaborate dinner that Nandini took with Navya and Aryaman, She looked around for Manik who seemed to have disappeared. The rest of the FAB 5 were now sitting around the bar area that had been functioning simultaneously. Manik was nowhere to be seen. Nandini thought to herself that he being the host must have had gone out to take leave of the guests who had started to disperse. Nevertheless, even past another half an hour when there was no sign of Manik, she approached Mukti and Alya to enquire about him. Both of them were a bit drunk and was not making any sense. Navya was insisting that they too leave as it had become late. Nandini dialed Manik's number, but got no response. She excused herself from Navya, telling that she would be back soon, when she caught a glimpse of Rahim chacha and rushed to him to check about Manik. She just could not leave the party without informing Manik first.

Even though the music had ended and Nandini had moved out of his arms, Manik could still feel her soft body against his. He quickly walked to the bar area to help himself to a drink when he received a call on his phone. It was Soha. It was then that Manik realized that she had not attended the party. Thinking that something must have happened, he immediately attended the call.

"Manik... I need to talk to you. Its urgent."

" Soha.. What is it? Are you ok? Badimaa...Is she fine? Where are you?"

" Manik, I am in your room.."

" My room? What are you doing there?"

" Please come up and I will tell you. In fact. Its very urgent and...private." The last thing she wanted was any of the other FAB 5 members or worse Nandini to tag along with him.

Manik was already moving in the direction of his room " Ok. I am coming up,"

Soha was waiting for him in his sitting room with an anxious expression. Manik rushed to her side and almost immediately, Soha launched herself on him. Manik disentangled himself from her and put her back, firmly holding her at arms length. He was actually in no mood for melodrama, which was always the case with Soha. Soha might have argued with badimaa over something and rushed to him. Before, she had Dhruv to turn to after her frequent fights with her mother. Thinking of Dhruv, made Manik realize how much he missed Dhruv that day. His calm and assuring presence had always been a balm to all his troubles.

"Manik, Did you know that bhai died of heart break? He was in love with that Nandini and she rejected him, which in turn triggered his epilepsy. You know Doctors had almost cured him. He had stopped getting epileptic altogether until he proposed to her on Valentines Day and she said no. He was really upset that day. He could not take that rejection. If only she had not been so cruel to him and rejected him out rightly, he would still have been with us today. She had been playing with his feelings all along. Encouraging him, befriending him and then finally rejecting him so callously. " Soha watched as initially disbelief and then rage dawned on Manik's face taking out all the color from his face.

" SOHA. STOP right there. Don't utter another word about..." Manik roared at her like an angry animal.

"You don't believe me. Fine, this is bhai's diary, which he has written with his own hand. Probably, after reading this, you will realize the truth." Soha placed a diary on the low teepoy and turned to leave.

Manik stared at the dairy for a long time, after Soha had left him, his emotions haywire and dreading to read its contents.

Manik leaned forward with tears in his eyes and slowly lifted his best buddy's diary and started reading it feverishly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc update
Manan cute little romance
That soha
I hope manik trust nandini
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..
Oh god! Hate this soha she finay succeeded in separating manan . irk how man in a gonna react. I feel son a a lying and hiding something
Update next part soon

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