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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow. . Nyc..
Really loved it
Do update soon
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😳 😳
Wow chapter...ek dum first class 😉

Aww..they are so adorable...and Nandini..she is damndamn cute 😃

Looking forward to their night in jungle 😆

Update soon
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Wow a night together after a hard day of ignoring each other.
Continue soon dear.
Thanks for pm.
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The taste of the first kiss


There was a conference call from the FAB 5 soon after the couple settled down for the night. After updating them on their whereabouts, Manik readied himself for all the teasing that would come his way and he was not mistaken. Cabir could not suppress his laughter.

"Bro... Like seriously. How did you manage to land up with her? and a treehouse? Like seriously? "

Before Cabir could say further, Dhruv interrupted him, knowing that the subject would not be palatable for Alya, "Hey Manik, Are you guys ok? Take care. Mom is worried. I will tell her you are fine. Ok. Then, you had better hang up. Take care not to exhaust your mobile battery charge. Ok. Buddy..."

Thus saying, they hung up. Manik looked at Nandini. She was biting into the ripe mangoes, which she was relishing with immense pleasure and juices were oozing out of her mouth. On seeing, he look at her, she offered him another mango from the pile, her hands covered with mango juice.

Manik took hold of her hands and licked each finger off the juices, still maintaining eye contact. Nandini blushed and forcefully took back her hands.

"Ok. I will have this then," said Manik, taking the mango from her hands and biting into it.

"I will call Chacha -chachi and inform them" said Nandini dialing chacha's number.

" Raghav Sir must have already informed them. Anyway, Go ahead and tell them that we are fine."

Chachi was relieved that Nandini was with Manik. She was a bit upset on hearing that both of them were alone in a treehouse. So, before hanging up, Chachi moved away from Chacha's earshot and whispered " Nandu, Umm...I know you well. And I know Manik is a good guy. But, beta, Don't do anything that you will regret later. haan?"

Nandini understood what chachi was implying.

She looked at Manik and whispered back " haan chachi. Don't worry. "

Manik also talked to chachi and assured her of Nandini's safety.

"What were you whispering to Chachi?" Manik asked after they had disconnected the call.

" Nothing. Woh.. chachi was asking me if I had anything to eat. I told her mangoes"

" Did you also tell her that you fed me mango juice?"

" Manik... "

"umm"

"shut up"

" Acchha Nandini.. What do you want to do the whole night?" Manik asked in a suggestive voice, stressing on the word 'whole' and 'night'.

They were sitting leaning on the wall, adjacent to each other. Nandini's heart started racing.
Manik started singing ' hum tum ek kamare mein bandh ho', clearly enjoying Nandini's flustered form.

Nandini started feeling nervous and worried on hearing Manik singing and enacting the famous romantic number. Manik continued singing leaning into Nandini and blowing lightly on her throat below her ear.

" Manik... shut up..." Nandini said pushing him away.

"You know Nandini, Raat ka time, Akele ek ladka aur ladki... in the jungle... you know... anything can happen..." He added seductively.

" Manik...stop it"

Manik's mischievous avatar surfaced" wait...a minute.. What did you think? Oh my god.. Chee ... Did you think that?? Chee chee chee...Nandu...U thought I was talking about that...u have such a perverted mind...chee.. I was telling that since it is night time and we are alone.. in a jungle, there is danger of wild animals or even ghosts... yaah ghosts... U know I was talking about ghosts and you were thinking about that... I should stay away from you. Your intentions are clearly not right."

Nandini was highly embarrassed. She turned away from him.

" achha baba, since you want it... " Manik said, removing his blazer, and giving Nandini naughty looks. Now, Nandini's eyes grew large with apprehension. Manik leaned towards her and Nandini closed her eyes on instinct. His face was too close to hers for comfort. Seconds passed by without any movement and Nandini slowly opened her eyes to see him smirking at her. "Why were you expecting me to kiss you?"
"k.k.Kiss.??"

" Yeah. Just now. You were thinking that I was going to kiss you when I was just wiping this"
saying he rubbed an imaginary speck from her cheeks. Her cheeks turned tomato red." Really, Nandini, You do have some naughty thoughts running through your sweet little head. And since you were asking for it..."Manik said while pecking her softly on her nose. Nandini continued staring at him. Manik looked at her, questioning her with his eyes and asked " Hellow... Where are you lost?"

Nandini understood that Manik had been teasing her all along and hit him on his arms yelling " Manik..." Manik tried to catch hold of both her hands, trying to make her relax, when she continued to hit him. After a session of hitting and yelling, Manik was successful in subduing her. He took both her hand in his hands and said " I love the way you blush when I tease you."

" Really...So you love to tease me... Have you seen me when I am angry? Will you love that too?"

"No. You cannot be angry with me. You are too soft...inside and out..like a potato..."

" Potato??Really?? And you are like a coconut... Very hard to crack..."

"Are you planning to crack me?"

"Will I be successful?"

" You already are"

They looked at each other for a long time, not requiring words to express what flowed between them. Finally, Manik pulled her to him, into his arms, and wrapped his hands around her body, his chin resting on her head.

She gave out a long breath, and relaxed further into his arms, a tranquil feeling engulfing her. Remaining in this position, Manik slowly lowered her to the floor and untangled himself from her, kissing her on her forehead while Nandini's eyes remained closed.

Manik covered Nandini with his coat and said, "Its getting cold. You better go to sleep"

"s..s..sleep?? I am not sleepy."

"What do you want to do then?"

"Nothing" saying Nandini quickly closed her eyes, reprimanding herself for making the situation complicated.

Manik could not relax. He diligently went back to leaning against the wall, staring at the sleeping form of Nandini. Her breaths were not steady indicating that she was not exactly sleeping.

" Manik??" Nandini called out after a while.

"I am here only Nandini"

"Aren't you lying down?"

"It will not be advisable, Nandini." He continued when he saw her looking at him curiously. "choddo. You will not understand. It's a man thing"

"What man thing?"

"Leave it. "

"Manik, can you switch on the mobile flashlight. It's too dark here."

"The battery will die. We need to survive until we reach home tomorrow. "

" Then, can you keep talking to me..."

" Why? What happened ?"

" Manik..Either you lie down with me... or you keep talking to me. Else, you will have to switch on the flashlight. I am getting suffocated like this, lying in the dark.."

" Nandini. Are you afraid of the dark?" Manik moved closed to Nandini and held her hands, assuring her of his presence.

"You know Manik, My parents passed away when I was nine years old. We were in the US...my grandma... Amms was also with us. My parents were returning from their workplace, a little late at night, when they met with an accident. We, I and Rishabh were sleeping ...when Amms got the call informing of their death. Since then, I get nauseous in dark...I sleep with my bed lights on. "

" Nandini...You don't have to get scared of the dark anymore. I am here."

" Will you be there with me always?"

" Always." He assured her. He lay down with her and wrapped her in his arms, turning her so that they lay in spoon style. His hands lay on her stomach and she used his other hand as a pillow. Both of them drifted into deep slumber almost at the same time.

The next morning, Manik's first thought was that he had grown beard overnight when his hands touched a lock of hair near his chin. On opening his eyes, he saw the most soothing sight ever -of Nandini sleeping peacefully in his arms. He enjoyed the sight for a few more minutes and went back to sleep.

When he next opened his eyes, Nandini was not near him. He panicked for a moment and relaxed only when he saw her sitting by the entrance of the tree house enjoying the view outside.

Nandini had woken up to sound of birds chirping and the exotic smell of forest. Manik still had his arms around her, but his hand that she had used as pillow was now replaced by his chest and she had her hands around his stomach. She moved away shyly to the entrance of the house and stayed that way, enjoying the beautiful forest view from the tree.

" Good morning Nandini. I can't believe we just had our first night together..."

" Good Morning Manik. It's so beautiful outside. Come, have a look" said Nandini ignoring his teasing.

"Let's head home now." Manik was irritated that she was not responding to his teasing. So added to unnerve her "I promise we will come back here for our honeymoon."

Nandini decided to give him back for all his taunts. So she said cheekily. " No. I don't think so.. Not if you are just going to repeat last night .." Nandini could not understand what gave her the courage to be so brazen with him.

" repeat last night?" Manik asked , clearly not getting the point.

" Yeah... only talks and no action" Nandini blurted out before she could stop herself.

She understood the exact minute realization dawned on him and his eyes darkened with a mixed emotion of surprise and amusement.

Nandini understood the folly of her words, when minutes later he had her pinned to the wall and looking intently at her.

" So you need action.." He burst out laughing and continued, "My dear Nandu, DO you even realize what you are inviting here? You are indirectly challenging me. And did you think I would let you get away with it?" His eyes went to her mouth and stayed there tempting her to look at his mouth too.

She realized that she wanted him to kiss her..She moved a fraction towards him and he completed the rest of the distance. Their lips met and fused. He was just testing the waters at first, gentle and hesitant, but soon he increased pressure slightly, which parted her lips faintly. Manik first took her upper lips within his lips and sucked gently. He took her face in his hands and tilted to get better access. Then he took her lower lips into his mouth and sucked harder. She responded by lifting herself to reach him. She placed her hands on his neck and pulled him to her deepening the kiss all the while running her hands through his hair.

Manik ended the kiss, but stayed close placing his forehead on her forehead. She was still lost, eyes closed, trying to calm her racing heartbeat.

Nandini got the answer to a mystery that had been haunting her for long...what it means to be kissed by Manik Malhotra? Forget Manik, she had never been kissed before and she had been curious and she got the answer to what it means to be kissed. It felt great and she understood, finally, why there was so much fuss about this.

She chided herself on realizing where her thoughts were taking her. They had not even shared their feelings to each other and here she was fantasizing about him.

Nandini did not want the day to end. Nevertheless, end it did, and Manik delivered her safely to her doorstep without further ado.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
aww manan first kiss n cute moments...
Edited by charanyaaj - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Manan shared their first kiss...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Manan first kiss
Very nice part.
Waiting eagerly for their further encounters.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story...loved it...read it in one go...continue soon waiting eagerly for next update take care
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Part 26. Tragedy strikes

Manik was looking forward to the Valentine's Day, to celebrate with Nandini and to confess his love for her.

The eventful jungle incident and the impromptus kiss had changed the equation of their relationship. Although, they had still not disclosed the nature of their relationship to others, they behaved more like lovers with each other. Manik had also started taking more liberties with Nandini, which she allowed to a certain extent. Manik had become bold enough with her to steal kisses from her whenever possible. He would, at times , call her to the store room and kiss until they became breathless. In all these, he made sure not to touch her inappropriately or cross the invisible boundary.

He would sometimes come unannounced to her house and spent time with Rishabh and chachi. Sometimes, he would just call Nandini out to her terrace to spend time alone with her. Nandini, too, had changed. She had become more bold and sure of herself. His love had succeeded in bringing out the best in her.

There is nothing more blissful than the surety of reciprocated love, nothing more beautiful than the knowledge that you are being loved and cherished.

Manik and Nandini were living in a world of their own, even when they were surrounded by the world. Every look they shared held a secret message only they could decipher. The nature too rejoiced with the deeply in love couple, whose every waking hours filled with thoughts of each other. Yes, they were celebrating their love in every possible way.

So there, nothing in this world would have kept Manik Malhotra away from his girl, this Valentines day. But, destiny had something else in store for them.

A day before the Valentine's Day, Manik received a call from his father to join him in Goa to entertain a foreign client and to co- sign an acquisition document. Manik went to see Nandini before leaving for Goa and assured her that he would be back the next evening. Manik had also booked an entire restaurant for their exclusive use for their valentines dinner date . He kept this arrangement from Nandini, to surprise her the next day.

The next day in college was eventful. The college canteen was decorated and a small party was organized by the students council. Many of the students used this opportunity to confess their love. Many got rejected whereas some lovers became official. In the midst of all these festivities Nandu missed Manik, but was looking forward to the evening for his return.

Manik's father had signed the deal with the foreign representatives in the morning . Later, the Malhotras hosted a dinner party for the clients, which Manik was obliged to attend.

It was during this party that Mr. Robert Lloyd, the owner of the London based company that had signed the deal playfully asked Manik.

"Mr. Manik Malhotra, What is an young boy like you doing among veterans like us?Today is valentines Day. You should be somewhere else with a lovely lady on your arms" and then turning to Daddy Malhotra, he continued
"Mr. Malhotra, I am sure such a handsome young man like your son must be having a beautiful girl waiting for him somewhere else. Let's excuse him for the day. "

Mr. Malhotra looked at Manik and then replied to Mr. Llyod.

" you are right. Mr. Llyod. I think I will just make arrangements for my son to fly back to Mumbai. The night is still young."

Daddy took Manik aside and asked " beta, I might have become old. Moreover, your mother invokes in me any other feeling but love. So I don't have any good memories of Valentine's Day. That's why I forgot completely that today is Valentine's Day. If I had remembered, I would never have dragged you here. Now, off you go. Alya must be waiting for you. Get something special for her. I will arrange for the flight."

" Dad, relax. Alya and me, we are not together anymore"

" so who is it then? Who is responsible for my son's restlessness which was quite evident the whole day today?"

" Dad, there is someone.. I will tell you all about her tomorrow, over phone. I am going to propose her today."

" okkay...she must be someone very special...All the best son"

" thanks Dad, bye" saying Manik rushed to fly back to Mumbai, where his heart lay.

On arriving in Mumbai, he went directly to the Murthy's. Chachi told him that Nandu had gone out with Navya. He took permission from Chachi to take Nandini out for dinner. Chachi agreed whole-heartedly and also told Manik that she would inform Nandini about it.

Manik, then decided to visit badimaa before getting ready to take Nandini out. Manik was surprised to find Nandini in Dhruv's house. Dhruv, badimaa and Nandini were discussing something seriously when he entered. But they stopped suddenly on seeing him. All three of them had a guilty and sad expression on them which raised Manik's suspicions. Manik looked from one to the other. Badimaa recovered first from the shock of seeing Manik unexpectedly.

" Manik beta, you are back already? How did the business deal go? How is your dad? " badimaa barged into questioning him while Nandini just stared at him whereas Dhruv had a guilty expression on him.

Manik looked at the three of them one after the other in confusion and then turning to Nandini he asked

"Hey, Nandini, what a surprise? What are you doing here?"

" I just came to see badimaa. It's been a while now. So.."Nandini said after throwing a sideways glance at badimaa and Dhruv.

Badimaa went in the direction of the kitchen after saying something about preparing tea and snacks. Nandini followed her to the kitchen. Dhruv was not his usual self.

"Buddy, Is everything alright? You look upset. "

" nothing Manik. Tell me, how was your trip?"

" yeah, went pretty well. Where's Soha?" Asked Manik looking around.

" she's gone for a party . Should be back soon."

" where are the rest of the FAB 5?"

Manik asked while taking out his phone to make a conference call.

" Manik, please drop Nandini home. She was just leaving." Badimaa told Manik after they had light snacks and tea. Manik was also waiting for an opportunity to be alone with Nandini.

Back in the car, Manik looked at a disturbed Nandini and asked" want to tell me something?"

" what? "

" for example, what were you guy's discussing so earnestly when I walked in?"

"Umm actually... We were discussing about you only. That's why we had to stop when you came unexpectedly "

Although Nandini tried to instill some enthusiasm in her voice, she failed miserably.

" what happened Nandini? Why are you upset?"

" it's nothing Manik. I have a headache"

" you know what. I am wise enough to understand that headache is a very commonly used excuse when you don't want to discuss certain things. Is it that sort of headache or a genuine one?"

When Nandini just kept silence, Manik continued" I had been to your house. Chachi told me you had gone out with Navya. I had actually planned a date for us. That's why I rushed back from Goa. But, if you are not feeling good, we can have it some other time. I will drop you home. "

" no Manik. I am fine. Let's go. But first drop me home. I have something for you. I will also have to change. Text me the address. I will be there" Nandini had got her energy back.

" no. It's fine . I will pick you up within an hour.ok?"

Manik drove in the direction of her house. When he parked outside the house, he turned to Nandini and said" waise, I was expecting a little more enthusiasm from your side on seeing me back. Enthusiasm in the form of a kiss at least "

Manik took hold of her arms and leaned in for a kiss when Nandini stopped him saying

" not here. Not now. Wait. Patience pays. Intezaar ka bhal meetta hota hai. Tonight. "

" tonight?? What?"

" that I will tell you ... Tonight... During our date"

Nandini rushed out of the car, looking back once and waving.

Manik drove back to his house to get ready, his heart soaring with excitement.

Nandini changed into a red anarkali, which accentuated her curves well and put on her high heels to match Manik's height. She let her hair loose since she knew Manik preferred it that way. She applied light make up but colored her lips red to bring out the mood of Valentine's Day.

Her heart singing and dancing at the same time, she took out the gift that she had got for Manik. Earlier that day, she had custom made a bracelet with the words 'Manan' carved on it, for both of them, to mark their first Valentine's Day together.

She knew it would be difficult to hold back her feelings for him anymore. In fact she wanted to just shout it out to the whole world.. That she was in love with Manik Malhotra... Hamesha .. Forever.

Nandini was still waiting for Manik to turn up, after an hour.

" he must have got stuck in the traffic Nandu. He will be here soon"

Chachi tried to console Nandini. Nandini tried his mobile, but it went to voice message.

She got more and more worried as time flew by. She did not know the numbers of any of the other FAB 5 members. She, did not even know the number of Malhotra mansion. After waiting for what seemed like ages, Nandini decided to go to Malhotra mansion and check on Manik. Her instincts told her that something dreadful had happened for Manik to not show up like this.

She took a taxi to the mansion. The guard told her that no one was at home. On further questioning, he told that Manik baba had not come back from Goa yet. That means that Manik had not reached his home after dropping Nandini. Next she tried Dhruv's home. The house was in darkness. Obviously, no one was at home there too.

Nandini could feel herself loosing to deep remorse. This feeling of helplessness when you have nothing else to do , nowhere else to turn to, burst her tight reined control and she burst out crying right in the middle of the street not being bothered of the curious on lookers.

Nandini went back to Malhotra mansion. On the way, She called Chachi to enquire if there was any news from Manik, but the answer was negative. On reaching the mansion, she asked to see Rahim chacha. After a few minutes, Rahim chacha came out and on seeing a distraught Nandini took her inside the house to the servants quarters. Amidst sobs and hiccups, Nandini managed to convey her predicament . Chacha tried to console her as best as he could. But it was clear that he was also now worried. Nyonika ma'am was out of town.

Both Rahim chacha and Nandini kept vigil hoping for some news of Manik until the wee hours of the morning.

The next day, the world woke up to the news of the death of Dhruv Vedant.

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