2//FRIENDS TO SOULMATES { LAST CHAPTER (PART B & C) ON PAGE - 54} - Page 34

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Posted: 9 years ago



LAST PART (B)








How do u feel when u saw Ur love one in pain ... how do u feel when u saw Ur love of life...the reason of Ur existence...laying in ur lap with pool of blood...my world is just seem like destroyed... I was angry at myself...why ? Why did I let her go ... if I didn't...she wouldn't be in this condition...no I... I can't be weak...I...have to help her...I have to do something...


Manik : shona do-don't worry...I...I wouldn't let anything happens to u ...



I gently carried her ... and placed her in my car passengers seat...but there is only one thing which was scaring me hrs bleeding which is not stopping...I just hope nothing bad will happen...







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HOSPITAL -






Manik : doc. How's fianc...she is fine right...



Doc. : am afraid she is not ... bloody kafi beh gaya ha ... and we immediately needs blood...


Manik Irritatingly said : TOH aap yah a khade kyun ha...jaiye blood dijiye...



Doc. : we can't give her blood ... her blood group is rare and it is not available in our blood bank... u have to arrange blood...


Manik : what's the blood group ...



Doc. : o- ...



Shit! No one in our family blood group is o- ... what am I going to do? What ? Shit shit shit!!!






Manik was pacing here and there...the only thing which he knows he has to save nandani...he picked up his phone and dialled a number...



He knew he must be sleeping but this time only he is the one whom he can think of...




Person : hello...



He could sense his sleeping voice but he was relieved to that he answered his call...




Manik : DAD...







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2 HOURS LATER...





Manik was sitting in hospital bench...his eyes were puffy due to constant crying...but sleepWas far away from him...suddenly someone squeezed his shoulder...he looked up to see the person...his dad...he sat beside him...



Raj; how are u holding up son?




Manik : I...I don't know dad...I...don't knew anymore...we ... we were laughing...playing...enjoying with each other... and now this ... I don't know dad ...I just



He squeezed manik shoulder tightly...make him look at him ...



Raj : I knew son this must be hard for you...it's hard for everyone manik...everyone here loves nandani...Arre jaan he voh hamari...she is fighter manik...she loves u ... she will make it for u ... aur ab toh kyal (Nandani's cousin) bhi aa gaya...he will give her blood...she is going to be OK and I bet after surgery she is going to be the one who will laugh at us...for crying like that...



Manik smiled a little but this smile can't hide his pain ...



Raj :she will be fine manik...




Manik : I... I hope so dad...I hope so ...






Manik POV :



I love her ... the day I saw her ... the day I got to knew the meaning of true love ... I only pictured her ... she is something...no one can be ... she is perfect ... I knew no one can be perfect but whenever she was around everything seems to be perfect...she is my life ... my everything... when she accepted me... when she confessed her love to me ... I feel like am the most luckiest person in the earth but now I failed her ... I can't protect her ... I should have stopped teasing...if I would stopped she wouldn't be run like that... it's all my fault...all my fault...







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8 HOUR'S LATER...





Everyone was pacing around...nandani's family...manik's family...their friends...everyone was there...they all are tired but they don't want to leave...they were hoping just one thing for her well being...8 hours for surgery seems like over...Doc. came outside of O.T...



Manik rushed towards doctor...



Manik : doc. Is she OK...she is fine right...



Doc.: congratulations surgery went well...she is out of danger...we will shift her in I. C.u right now but after that if everything went normal we will shift her general ward...




Manik smiled : thank you doc. Thank you so much...





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Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Loved the way manik feels
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohhh. Finally Nandini Saved .. thank god bach gyiii ... Manik kitnaa dr gyaa tha. aww baby. sb shii h. nice.. Now manan will be together . waiting for next update ...
Edited by gtilwani45 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nandini s ok now

manik so much tensed


feeling sad as story is gonna end 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago



LAST PART (C)





FEW WEEK'S LATER...




I finally made it ... I mean c'mon hospitals are sucks ... I feel like am going to die with this boredom ... always rest ... medicine...rest medicine...c'mon live a life ...at least a little dude ...kyal gave me blood which am I greatful for...he is the best brother I have ...always there for u ...and my friends were teasing me for being a rare blood ...what can I say am special...hehe. ...it's kind of funny though...but sometimes overprotectiveness sucks tooo ...bcz everyone here was like overprotective over me ...not letting me out of the bed ... always be ready to help me ... am not a child for God sake ... and top of that my boyfriend aka manik ... his behaviour was strange too ...he just all do was like sitting beside me ..holding my hand ...if I got a little headache...he will behave like he is going to freak out or something... not letting me out of the bed ...I can't even go to washroom by myself... he is behaving like an overprotective boyfriend...I mean c'mon he is treating me like a freaking China doll...who is going to break any moment ... I agree it's kind of cute at first but now at this point all the things are just frustrating me with no end ... I need a break with all this ... vocation will be good right... yup that's good ...That's what am I going to do...



Nandani : need a break...wanna go somewhere...are u up ...????




Aryaman : sure ...can do ...:). we can go to goa...my uncle lives there and navya would like to go too...we can leave tonight if u want????



Nandani : ausom ... going to pack now...bye ... cya...;)



I smiled and quickly came to my room ... and bring all the stuff which am I going to need...clothes are important but a girl have needs ... when it comes to a girl there is a lot of stuff u have to pack ... like clothes ... tampoons...make-up (lip gloss and eye liner should be must ) sandles... and all that ... it's good to feel call aryaman as a friend...after my accident it seems like he got his mind back ... he apologies for his rudeness and we became friends...and he is not that bad ... navya was dating him actually... it's good to have some one...well someone right...now I remember I didn't see my someone...where is he ... I have to tell him about my little trip before he goes all over protective mode...



Manik : what are u doing?



I jumped a little and looked at manik who was looking at me...here comes think about devil and devil shall appear ... but he is not devil... he is my overprotective boyfriend...hehe...



Nandani : gosh manik u scared the hell out of me ...


Manik shoot me an apology look while rubbing his neck awkwardly...


Manik : sorry I didn't mean to freak u out ...it's just ...


Nandani smilingly said : it's okay...



I said while again started my packing...


Manik curiously asked : are u going somewhere?


Nandani :yaah I am ... actually goa ...

When I said goa... I can't hold my excitement...



Manik worriedly said : what ?... but why???

Gosh he sounds like again ... why he is in his "overprotective mode "



Nandani : well I kind of ...need a... break ...



Manik shocked while confused : break ... for whom?



Nandani : everything...





Manik POV :



Is she thinking of leaving me ... no she can't do that ... she loves me right ... but does that mean she needs a break from me tooo... what about our relationship?




Manik : no ...



Nandani looked at me like I have grown two heads ...


Nandani : what does that mean no ...


Manik : I mean no nandani...u can't go...u just got back from hospital...and ur injuries are yet to heal ... u need rest ... a proper sleep ...



I tried to being genuine...she needs to understand she needs rest ... she just being discharged from hospital...she can't leave just like that...and she can't leave me too ...




Nandani Irritatingly said : the hell i can't ...am tired of being treated like that ... I get it ... okay ... I knew I met with an accident but am fine ... u guys just can't make me to live here forever not doing anything...u guys need to understand...am feeling suffocated here...I need a break...



She needs a break...like really...are we suffocating her? ...i never thought she is going to burst like that...



Manik : jaana calm down OK...if u keep shouting like that ... u will have headache



Nandani frustratingly said : headache... like really...u need to think of something new ... am tired of hearing all that manik ... for God sake... just shut up ... and let me leave ...


Manik : nandani...u can't just leave like that...


Nandani shoutedly said : why can't I leave manik ... why can't I ? ... I can't do this ????...do that..??? ... what the hell is wrong with u ...u are not like that ... u always understand me ... u knew what I need ... hell without my saying u got to knew what I need then why are u being like that now ...




Silence ...



Nandani : u don't have any answer right...so just leave so I can pack ...


Tears were flowing from nandani's eyes ... she was frustrated...she just can't seem to found out manik's problem...he was always her support system ... now they both fighting...she is not crying bcz they are fighting...she is crying bcz hrs manik is not understanding her ...



Manik Pleadingly said : please don't leave nandani...I knew what u Want...I just...I...am scared


Nandani looked at manik with confusion was written all over her face...


Nandani whispered to herself : scared...


Manik : am sorry baby...it's just am scared of loosing u ...



Nandani cupped manik face while manik was looking at her with tearful eyes



Nandani softly said : am not leaving u manik ... am just going for few days...



Manik : I knew it's just hard... when u meet with that accident ... I... I was so close of loosing you...I felt like I was the one whose life is going to end ... u r the one nandani ... my bestfriend... my love of life...I life partner ... I can't imagine my life without u ... without u there is nothing in me ...if u are not with me ...



Nandani calmly said : Manik I love u ... I love u more then anything in this world ... this maybe creepy but it's true ... I knew u ... I love u ... and nothing can change the fact ... and am not going to leave u ... itni jaldi piccha nahi jhodne wali...


I smiled at her while kissed her forehead...gosh how I become so lucky...



Manik : I would like that...umm ... well I have something to say to ...


Nandani smilingly said : go head am listening...



I nervously looked at her then set over my knees...she looked confused...while I gulped. ...I just hope everything went well...I bought the ring from my pocket...while she she looking at the ring in confusion then shock...her eyes went so wide ... it feel like they are coming out ...



Manik : remember when we were kids ... I asked u what's Ur dream ?



Nandani Pov :


I remember exactly what I said to him ... but this is all shocking for me ... it's like my voice is giving up to support me...



Manik smiled and said :: u told me u want a guy who will love u like crazy ...whom will u can trust ... who will understand u ...who gives Ur parents respect...who treats them like they are his own...u told me u want him to set over his knees in front of Ur own parents then proposed u ... confess his love to u ...



I looked at the door where our parents were smiling looking at him ... I didn't knew what to say am like numb...



Manik : u want him to get u the best wedding dress...



I looked at the side table there was a dress there which I didn't even realise...



Manik : nandani u want him to call u with all the lovely names ... pampers you like no end ...



I realise then he always calls me with a lot of names which I always complaint about but they are so nice they make me feel special...I smiled at him ...



Manik : u knew nandani when I saw u first time...I feel like u r the most beautiful girl I have ever seen ...Ur heart is so pure ... when u became my friend...I was smiling like an idiot...my mom asked if I got my favourite candy ... then I told her not candy my nandani...my mom calls me silly ...bcz I call u mine ... but I knew that I knew I want to make u mine for always ... then we became bestfriends...I just want to be there with u ...I want to be the part of Ur masti... silliness...everything u do ... when u left I will not lie it doesn't hurt ...bcz it do ... but what hurt me the most i didn't share my feelings for you ... I didn't got to tell u I love u ...and when you got back i know that...this was my last chance ... if I loose u ...I will loose u for forever ... so then our parents makes us engaged...I knew that u don't have same feeling as I have for u ... but I do knew one thing I will engage u again but when u have same feelings as me ... u must be thinking am crazy right ... but that's true nandani am crazy...am crazy about u ... u r the most special person of my life ... I CAN'T GIVE U THE WHOLE WORLD NANDANI ... BUT I CAN GIVE U THE WORLD OF MINE ... MY WORLD ... WOULD U PLEASE DO THE HONOUR FOR SPENDING THE REST OF YOUR LIFE IN MY WORLD...WILL U MARRY ME????



shock...excitement...That's all am I feeling...I didn't realise I was crying...I just don't knew how do I got so lucky to have him ...I looked at manik who was sitting over his knees with hopefully eyes...I smiled and bend over my knees...I looked over my parents they were hugging each other while smilingly...there were tears in there eyes but these tears were bcz of happiness...



Manik : say something?

I was so overwhelmed by all these ... I feel like all numb...



Nandani : I...I don't know what to say?



Manik smiled and said : say u will marry me...


I laughed at him ... am sure right now I would probably look like a disaster...my eyes would be puffy and my kajal were all over my face...



Nandani : will u promise me to love me like this always...



Manik smiled : I will ALWAYS...



Nandani smilingly said : then I promise to be in Ur world forever...u know why ?


Manik : why?



Nandani Lovingly said : bcz Ur world is a world of love on which I would love to die and live forever...



Manik : hey ... don't say about dying...we need to get to married...then we our going to have a lot of kids ...then we have to see our children's marraige...and then their children...and their children




Nandani blushed so hard that she hide her face in manik's chest ; okay okay ... bus ab chup...




Manik teasingly said : arre kyu ...


Nandani : bcz am saying...abhi chup...and let me enjoy my moment...



Manik salutes dramatically at nandani : as Ur wish my queen...


Nandani playfully slapped manik chest while manik laughed and hugged her tightly...with a promise of never letting her go...






THE END!!!




*****Love a letter of four words...who knows can change Ur life ... yes it changes our life's for good and bad ... but one thing ur must knew if u love someone truly and the person was away to u ... Ur love will brings the person back to u ... it's easy to say "I love u " but who meant those words are the person who loves u truly...******




DRESS PIC [ MY DREAMY...;) ]









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Hmmm... so the story ends...but I wanted to say that am sorry...am sorry for not being updated any of my story...I knew my sorry was not enough for u guys but my life is not easy...am starting a new stage of my life...everything is new here...I just needs some time to adjust but I guess now I can update...and



***HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY ***




LOVE U ALL
MISSING YOU
DIYA❤️




Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Finally this story came to an end...
Thank u for sharing this with us...
Luved it...
Won't be able to say update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...
Amazing story..
Finally come to end..its a beautiful
journey.

Love this..thankewq for this diyaa..

will miss this yr
Happy Independence day..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow really a beautiful update
Manan togetherness...// its way beautiful...
I really want u to give a epilogue of Manan marriage and der 1st night plzzz

Plzzz update new part soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update...
nandini frustrated bcz of extra care...
manik was scared of loosing nandini...
manan scene was nice...
finally this story is end...
loved d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
such a beautiful story.. I will miss this

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