Enchanted - a Manan ff #2 NOTE page 25

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys!!!! I know am late. But a ton of thankyous hugs and kisses for all of my readers for being patient and so supportive all the time. Andanger all your support I have started a second thread for my story. I can't describe how much happy I am. I can't even find words to thank all of you for the support.



Part 14:

Two weeks passed by and Nandini almost got healed..But the terror that struck in manik and others was quite Huge to be healed fast. Nandini wasn't allowed to move from the bed even for a second and manik made sure she did that.

"NANDINI" manik screamed on not finding Nandini on the bed or in the terrace. He came out of the room to check other rooms and remembered others weren't home. "Nandini" he screamed again. Just before he ran to the next room, he heard water running in the bathrrom. He ran into the bathroom to get shocked. There Nandini was lying half immersed in an overflowing tub unconscious. The sight shocked manik to the core. "Nandini" he shouted and ran to her. He scooped her out of the tub and placed her on his lap sitting on the bathroom floor. "Nandu please ankhe kholo. Open your eyes" manik begged an unconscious Nandini rubbing her hands and tapping her cheeks. "Come on, please" he kept on whispering as her took a towel from the nearby stand and covered her naked body. He took her to the bed and made her le on it. He closed the curtains and switched on the bedside lamp. He took another towel and dried her hair softly. "Nandini" he again called her and tapped her cheeks. She coughed water and opened her eyes, breathing heavily. *Nandini. Thank god!" he hugged her instantly. "Manik" she spoke in a feeble voice but hugged him back tight.

"What happened?" She asked. "What happen? Are you serious Nandini? You are asking me what happened? You were unconscious in the bathtub half immersed in water and you are asking me what happneded?" Manik shouted not being able to control the anger, frustration, fear. "Am sorry" tears started rolling down nandini's eyes. She didn't know what happened. But she knew manik was hell scared. "I don't know what happened. I wanted to take a bath. And I went to the bathroom. I filled some cold water in tub and then all I remember is feeling sleepy in the tub" she said slowly with her hung down. "Am so sorry. I didn't mean to scare you. When I saw you like that in the tub I got scared. Don't do that again" manik hugged her tightly. "Am sorry" Nandini sobbed into his chest, snuggling more into his hug. "Shh...its okie..its okie.." Manik caressed her hair.

"Let's get you dry. I dnt want you to catch a cold with all this" he stood up and went to take a towel. That's when Nandini noticed herself. She blushed a scarlet. "Stop that" manik said while looking in the cupboard for something to wear for both of them. "Stop what?" Nandini asked innocently. "U know the blushing" manik said after picking a boxers for himself and tight lengthed strapless nightwear for Nandini.

"You didn't dry yourself?" Manik asked walking to her with the clothes. "Ha..voh..I was.." She fumbled. "Ha..voh..I..excuse dhoondo..saaf saaf kyu nahi kehthi that you want me to do it huh" manik said seductively in her ears making her blush more. He kept the clothes on the bedside and sat beside her. "Let me.." He said and slowly unwrapped the towel from her body, all the time not leaving the eye contact with her. "Manik" she whispered and all she got in return was hmmm from him. He slowly wiped the water from her body and she sat there surrendered to him. Each stroke reducing the distance between their lips. "Am going to kiss you" he whispered to her lips brushing them with each words he spoke. As soon as their lips met, both forgot about the fear that has been swining above their heads. Both sucking and licking each others lips like they have been deprived of each other for centuries.

Both lied on the bed, manik over Nandini, without breaking the kiss. Manik brkthe kiss sensing Nandini struggling for air. "God!!I missed you! I missed you so much!!" Manik hugged her tightly. "I missed you too" she whispered back in his ears. "We should sleep" manik said breaking the hug and standing up. "You are still weak and you need rest", he said while removing his clothes. " but.."Nandini tried to say but was shushed by manik with another peck. "We are sleeping" he said as he stripped his clothes and wearing his boxers. He lied on the bed and pulled Nandini into a hug and covered them in the blanket. Within seconds Nandini was asleep snuggling more into his warmth. He kissed her forehead and tightened his hug and slept.


So that's a wrap..hope you guys liked this part. Am sorry to say but I myt end the story in 10-15 more updates. The show has taken a big toll on me, my studies and everything and being attached to manan is very hard. I hope you guys like the update. Do like and comment ur views. and am really sorry that am not able to reply to your comments or send PM. Since I update from my mobile its hard and most of the time internet doesn't work properly. So do hit the like button and leave a comment. Love you alla.
part 14 - pg 1
part 15 - pg 11
part 16 - pg 14
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
aww manik is soo damn caring
amazing
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btw congrats 4 the new thread
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theres a drastic change in manik...i am totally loving it.😊
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Awesome update nandu was feeling sleepy while taking bath koi use Marne ki koshish kar RHA hai may be someone has mixed something that she was feeling sleepy update the next part soon
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cngrts fr the new thread
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caring manik

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cntinue soon :)
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Wow thanks for coming again and continuing the story,,,, Nice update
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Congrats fr new thread nd Update was nice
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Awesome update dear
Cont soon...
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happy new year dear
congrats for the new threat
awesome update
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